DanAngelus
Sunday 15th July 2007 16:49 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| Good so far, I like it. |
critmo
Thursday 26th April 2007 08:43 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| I've always suspected Dudley to have taken lasting damage from his encounter with the Dementors. It seems to have spred to his friends as well. |
| Thursday 26th April 2007 12:31 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| I really dislike Dudley. |
Patches
Tuesday 13th March 2007 04:45 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| Leave it to Dudley to get drunk and think he is tough! I'm glad Hermione was able to chase him and his cronies off. I'm glad Tonks is close and giving them some encouragement. Now they are getting set up for their trip. I hope it all goes well. Thanks for writing. p |
| Thursday 26th April 2007 11:16 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| you're welcome and I am glad you enjoyed it. I can easily see Dudley turning to things he shouldn't... but we'll see in a few months. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Thursday 8th February 2007 19:16 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| Stupid Dudley. Gosh. And yes, this is really happening. Very good chapter. |
| Monday 5th March 2007 09:47 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :-) |
Grandma Kate
Thursday 1st February 2007 10:20 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| I've seen this on another site but decided to read it here. You have captured the Trio and Dudley quite well. |
| Friday 2nd February 2007 06:41 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| Thank you :-) My beta and good friend for PS helped persuade me into submitting here, which is a daunting thing, I must say. |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 31st January 2007 09:42 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
'eyed them wearily' -- was the woman tired, or do you mean 'warily'?
Nice scene with Dudley. Was that comment just obnoxious or did it imply she was a single mom because she'd played prostitute?
Way to go Hermione
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| Wednesday 31st January 2007 11:13 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
I had two beta's catch that and I actually did mean wearily, as in tired. She's tired of everything plus much more that I didn't go into but yeah, that's a bit funny anyway.
Dudley's talking out his bum, he doesn't know a thing. She's just a typical teenage mom who made a mistake and is making up for it. |
Frylocke
Tuesday 30th January 2007 20:03 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| Ohhhh, another WIP for me to follow! lol, I'm excited for the next chapter to come out. |
| Wednesday 31st January 2007 11:05 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| Although there are only two chapters here I've actually written 28 so far out of 42, so technically it's almost done. I'm glad you're enjoying it and another chapter should be out this week. :-) |
Felix Felicis
Monday 29th January 2007 19:06 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
Great story! I'm really looking forward to the rest because there aren't a lot of stories that really go into detail about the three of them doing the hunting. I can really feel Harry getting energetic about starting.
The part with Hermione showing her Gryffindor qualities was fun. We see so much more of Harry's bravery than anyone else that it's fun reading about Ron or Hermione standing up and fighting.
I hope Ginny returns in this story because Harry just won't be the same without her. I'll understand if you don't have time, though Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Wednesday 31st January 2007 10:59 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| Well good, I hope you enjoy the rest. I think it's fun to have the other characters show themselves more, so I put that in quite a bit. It isn't just Harry's story, afterall. Ginny will be back eventually. It's a rather safe bet as the site requires it but it's not for a loooooong time. So sit tight, it will be a bumpy ride ;-) |
Kamalia
Sunday 28th January 2007 21:54 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
Well, that was quick! I leave a review, and a few hours later, here it is! Now I'm even more interested... I love that one by Ron, about all the girls in his life being stronger. And that poor girl - will she appear later?
Anyways, excellent chapter 2. |
| Monday 29th January 2007 13:26 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. No, the girl won't reappear... it took me a minute to remember who you were talking about. |
