malko050987
Monday 14th May 2007 01:30 | Phoenix |
"Tun" is also the Romanian word for "Cannon" *grins* I like it.
The title is misspelled "Prololgue"
Very enjoyable read, thanks for sharing. |
| Monday 14th May 2007 09:22 | Phoenix (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked the story, and thanks very much for pointing out that typo. Somehow, all the rest of us have missed it for months!
Dave |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 30th January 2007 08:48 | Phoenix |
nice battle, but 16 years?
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| Tuesday 30th January 2007 09:21 | Phoenix (Author Response) |
| Yup. Their first encounter occurred on October 31, 1981. Their last, described here, occurred on November 30, 1997. Sixteen years and one month. |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 30th January 2007 08:38 | Phoenix |
Nice battle.
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| Thursday 1st February 2007 20:20 | Phoenix (Author Response) |
| Thank you. |
EJH0904
Monday 29th January 2007 18:32 | Phoenix |
| Wonderful cliffie! Very well written and compelling - can't wait, almost literally, for the next chapter! Exceedingly well done! |
| Monday 29th January 2007 18:56 | Phoenix (Author Response) |
| The next one should be online later tonight, so you won't have to wait long. Thanks very much for the compliments . . . 'compelling' is just what I was going for. |
girlspell
Monday 29th January 2007 17:11 | Phoenix |
Wow...what a start! There is already one line I spotted from one of Moshpit's story ,,,, Just come back to me, alright?” Is this story a kind of reference to that story?
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Terrific story. |
| Monday 29th January 2007 18:55 | Phoenix (Author Response) |
| This story is a thematic sequel to Moshpit's story, but not a literal sequel. These are not the same characters, and they haven't experienced the same things. But I kept that one line because, to me, it is at the very heart of Moshpit's story and many others. I did credit Moshpit in the A/N for the last chapter. Chapter 2 (of 3) should be online later tonight. Thanks! |
Curren
Monday 29th January 2007 07:16 | Phoenix |
| from the other review, i gather this story is already available on another site. Any chance you could tell me where, would love to read the rest, i'm not really a patient guy when it comes to good stories |
| Monday 29th January 2007 08:18 | Phoenix (Author Response) |
| The rest of the story will be posted over the next two days here on PS. If you don't want to wait, the whole thing is available at SIYE under the same title and author name. Thanks for reading. |
jessy
Monday 29th January 2007 02:19 | Phoenix |
amazing!
hurry up with the next chapter! |
| Monday 29th January 2007 08:18 | Phoenix (Author Response) |
| I think the next chapter (there are 3 total) will be posted later today. Thanks! |
Arnel
Sunday 28th January 2007 22:48 | Phoenix |
| I'm glad you decided to archive this story here at PS. I loved it the first time around and it's even better on the second reading. |
| Sunday 28th January 2007 23:07 | Phoenix (Author Response) |
| Thanks for finding me here. I've found myself re-reading this story from time to time, too. That may just mean I have a lousy memory, though. It's not like I don't know what happens. |
Kamalia
Sunday 28th January 2007 22:15 | Phoenix |
You put me in tears! I was trying so hard to not just sit in my chair and sob! Poor Harry. No one likes him (except for those who matter) and he lost his wand. Sniff. At least he has Ginny. And his cursebreaking job...
Very good job! |
| Sunday 28th January 2007 23:06 | Phoenix (Author Response) |
| Thanks very much. I'm glad this story moves people . . . that's a really wonderful feeling for a writer. |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 1st January 2002 22:25 | Phoenix |
| ooooo intense! so was voldie actually telling hte truth then? |
