clare
Thursday 10th December 2009 00:06 | The Fall-Out |
| Another story that is wonderfully rich in emotions - you are a very talented author. |
| Tuesday 1st January 2002 05:55 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| thank you |
blue_and_white_witch
Sunday 31st August 2008 09:33 | The Fall-Out |
| Wonderful story. |
| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 06:37 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| cheers |
pyromain
Friday 29th June 2007 11:26 | The Fall-Out |
| the troubles of parents. Greatly writen. |
| Saturday 30th June 2007 13:47 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| thank you |
brown_eyes
Tuesday 10th April 2007 08:19 | The Fall-Out |
| You really deal with the big issues dont you and keep a realistic twist to them. This is a very emotional piece that brought tears to my eyes. You have talent. |
| Wednesday 11th April 2007 08:59 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| Thank you |
SillyGillie
Sunday 4th February 2007 11:32 | The Fall-Out |
| Awesome job. I loved Harry's characterization. Really nice job. |
| Sunday 4th February 2007 14:58 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Thank you.
I'm glad Harry's character came over in piece with such a great focus on Ginny. |
Uzamaki-girl
Friday 2nd February 2007 17:12 | The Fall-Out |
| Poor Ginny. Excellent story.^^ |
| Sunday 4th February 2007 14:55 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| Thank you |
timbers
Thursday 1st February 2007 18:47 | The Fall-Out |
Really nice work dear. And I am also glad to see it posted here.
*hugs* |
| Sunday 4th February 2007 14:54 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
| Cheers mate and thanks for all your help. |
Grandma Kate
Thursday 1st February 2007 17:07 | The Fall-Out |
Very well done. What a lot of insight is contained in this short paragraph-
"Silence filled the room for a couple of minutes, as they both appeared to be mulling over the discussion. She felt relieved at having had the opportunity to finally speak about her fears. Her worries had started to ease a little, instead of bouncing around her mind, increasing her fears and adding to her insecurities." Talking with your best friend helps. |
| Sunday 4th February 2007 14:53 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Talking with your best friend helps.
We truely would be lost without them. |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 1st February 2007 12:07 | The Fall-Out |
'all hers had escaped uninjured' -- what do you mean by unijured? What about Nagnini's biting her dad and Bill's mauling at the hands of Fenrir?
This is very well-written. You move nicely between the present and the flashbacks, very smoothly.
You make me feel very sorry for Ginny (perhaps a bit too sorry) and very angry at Warnock. I feel a bit like Ginny must fear for her daughter. I don't like that one of my character's has found out that life isn't always fair. She fears Alex will learn a lesson similar to hers. You must be a parent .
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| Thursday 1st February 2007 12:52 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
'all hers had escaped uninjured' -- what do you mean by unijured? What about Nagnini's biting her dad and Bill's mauling at the hands of Fenrir?
This is 27 years later and Ginny's pov. Her thoughts would be of a huge healthy family that gets together at The Burrow each week.
You must be a parent
No just a daughter and a sister. |
Lily Jane
Thursday 1st February 2007 10:03 | The Fall-Out |
Oh, you have really interesting problem here. I wasn't sure what to think at first, but now, I like the way Ginny finally accepts Alex's choice of career. It's not easy to come over jealousy and concern about your loved ones.
How do you do it, that you describe Ginny's emotions and inner turmoils so well? I've just read some of the rest of your stories, and the onlly thing that comes to my mind is that I'm impressed. Truly, from the bottom of my heart. |
| Thursday 1st February 2007 12:47 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
I've just read some of the rest of your stories, and the onlly thing that comes to my mind is that I'm impressed. Truly, from the bottom of my heart
Wow, you are sending me red. Thank you so much. |
jeanne
Thursday 1st February 2007 06:35 | The Fall-Out |
| The most important thing to come out of this fic, is that shattered dreams, bitterness and grudges, buried deep inside and never faced, eat away at ones soul , much like a small bad spot at the core of an apple does. In time the whole apple is spoiled, and so a person can be a shell of who they could have been. In my 74 years of life, I,ve seen it happen to many acquaintances, and it is sad to see it. Ginny also has what many don,t have, a partner who loves her as she is, and never gave up on her, although I bet he knew what she was feeling all along, if they were soulmates. Great one shot. |
| Thursday 1st February 2007 12:46 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
What a thought-provoking review. And I agree with every word you have said.
Great one shot.
Thank you. |
juliet
Thursday 1st February 2007 04:50 | The Fall-Out |
| Glad to see this posted here. Although it is predominately a story about Ginny's reaction to her injury etc in Quidditch the bit I enjoyed most was seeing how knowledgeable and comfortable Harry was in his parenting role. |
| Thursday 1st February 2007 12:44 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Glad to see this posted here.
Thank you, so am I.
I enjoyed most was seeing how knowledgeable and comfortable Harry was in his parenting role
Somehow, I think Harry will make a great dad. |
Curren
Thursday 1st February 2007 03:21 | The Fall-Out |
| wonderful fic, so exciting to read. Hope there is more where that came from (be it sequel to this, or if this is a one-shot, more one-shots) |
| Thursday 1st February 2007 12:40 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Hope there is more where that came from (be it sequel to this, or if this is a one-shot, more one-shots)
More one shots with this set of characters is a possibility. |
Trelawney2213
Wednesday 31st January 2007 22:45 | The Fall-Out |
"And when she faces the Falcons, she better give them a right royal hammering."
Fantastic, upbeat ending to such an angsty fic. Well done! |
| Thursday 1st February 2007 12:29 | The Fall-Out (Author Response) |
Thank you.
And publically, thank you once again for the super quick beta this time. |
