ebonyrose28
Thursday 11th December 2008 08:49 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| i really liked this story make me laught and has put a smile on my face thank you |
| Thursday 11th December 2008 11:11 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Glad you enjoyed it! |
gymnastgal19
Monday 1st September 2008 18:43 | A Mission of the Heart? |
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harry_ginnyfan
Friday 7th December 2007 11:51 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| Cute story! |
| Monday 10th December 2007 16:09 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed. |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 17:13 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| kinda hard to follow... still interesting i suppose |
pyromain
Tuesday 11th September 2007 16:30 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| If harry was thinking on his feet he could say it was supposed to say marry me again, but than ROn had to something more than ammsk mmrry mmme. |
| Wednesday 12th September 2007 06:30 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Yes, too bad Harry isn't thinking so well on his feet. Thanks for reviewing. |
Aqua Fountain*
Monday 2nd April 2007 04:07 | A Mission of the Heart? |
You're so modest
This is really good, you know. True, the character personalities are a little off, but it's good nevertheless.
I just dont get one thing: '...This is our seventieth Valentine's together, you know.'. Is that a typo, or do you really mean seventieth? I mean, surely, Ron wouldnt wait so long before asking Hermione to marry him. And who on earth would be teaching at over about ninety years old?
Forget that, it's still a good, and entertaining story |
| Monday 2nd April 2007 13:12 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your positive comments. Yes, I did meanseventieth. I realize that that is a bit extreme. However, that was intentional -- remember I did say a parody; so that was a take on how Ron in canon can't admit his feelings to Hermione (remember he waited so long to ask her to the Yule Ball and got left in the cold; and we won't go into the Lavender affair), so I decided to really prolong things between him and Hermione. As for the part about teaching; well, JKR sets Dumbledore's age at 150. Remember Wizard's tend to live a fair bit longer than Muggles, so I figure retirement age might not be till 100 or after. Anyway, glad you enjoyed my frivolity. |
swngnblues
Wednesday 14th February 2007 15:21 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| Interesting. Loved the bit with the twins, but the time gap was REALLY confusing. And Ron & Hermione just getting married? It's cute, but just kinda odd is all. : ) Like you said, it's a bit barmy. |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:47 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Sorry, I didn't mean to confuse ... only to keep people wondering (or changing their mind). But Ron & Hermione haven't got married. Ron only just got around to proposing . And yes that is odd, intentionally odd. I'm glad you enjoyed it (you did, didn't you? ) |
Narumi
Monday 12th February 2007 18:53 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| Love the Carroll reference! Althouugh after book six I find it hard to imagine Ron waiting seventy years! |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:44 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Well, I wish I could have been more original (I do some in another story with Luna), but Carroll just came to me and seemed to fit quite well. I really couldn't improve on him. Book six -- you mean Won-Won and Lavender . But seriously, I do not imagine that part comes anywhere near how things would/will turn out |
Hoss
Sunday 11th February 2007 08:49 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| Well done, very well done. Thanks |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:42 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Thank you -- very much. And you're welcome. |
jessy
Friday 9th February 2007 22:10 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| that was great!it really was |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:41 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. |
Astrid
Thursday 8th February 2007 22:08 | A Mission of the Heart? |
Hahahaha.
I love how at first, you think they're still students.
Then, maybe in their 20s.
Then, they're old! And Ron took that long in asking Hermione! Very cute. |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:40 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I guess at least part of what I was trying to do worked . |
Grandma Kate
Thursday 8th February 2007 20:51 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| Harry and Ginny's seventieth year together and Ron is finally proposing to Hermione. Wow! Talk about a long courtship. |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:40 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Well, this is a parody. I don't think it would really take them that long. But I did have fun with Ron, picking on him a little bit . |
aurora luminis
Thursday 8th February 2007 12:19 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| This really was delightful...and you kept it a secret until close to the end. At least I didn't catch on until the end of the page was in sight that I wasn't reading about a young Harry. The touch about taking potions for his memory really killed me. Wish there really was such a thing! Good work! |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:38 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| That was my intent . . . to try and keep you guessing about where in Harry's life this was set . So I guess it worked. I'm glad you enjoyed. |
lantis222
Thursday 8th February 2007 09:38 | A Mission of the Heart? |
| I love old Harry, but even more I love old Ron! That was great! Well done. |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:35 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm glad you appreciated it. Ron was a bit of a caricature, and Harry was . . . well, like I said, this was a bit of a parody. |
amamama
Thursday 8th February 2007 07:31 | A Mission of the Heart? |
*Wipes eyes* Goodness, am I ever happy that I read the Valentine's day entries from the bottom up. This was too funny. Comedy/parody might not be your standard style, but you took a chance and this definitely worked out fine. So what should this be called - fluffody? I'm all giddy, this was fun - and it's about time Ron got his act together... H/G having been married seventy years? Oh, dear... loved it!
Thanks, and cheers! |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:33 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much for your generous review. I'm very glad you enjoyed it so much. |
CrumpleHornedKiwi
Wednesday 7th February 2007 20:13 | A Mission of the Heart? |
I really have to get one of those Patented Daydream Charms, they keep popping up
Wouldn't it be fun to live each year as if it was the first in a wonderful partnership!
It would be so Ron to take that long to proppse (teaspoon man) |
| Thursday 15th February 2007 09:32 | A Mission of the Heart? (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, I imagine the Twins make a mint on those . |
