kash2210
Sunday 21st September 2008 18:36 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
| With this, Ron snorted, and started laughing again. “No, no of course not, I always assumed you were the real force behind the Harry Potter fan club.” - What a great line. You got a nice way of ensuring the right angst, drama and emotion are there with subtle humour throw in. This is a very good story so far, and I've a feeling it's going to get better. It also helps starting the chapter with a smile on my face after reading the disclaimer!!!! |
potter345
Monday 10th March 2008 15:46 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
i really love this story this is my third time reading it and it seems to get better every time well done cant wait for chapter 18 and the rest
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| Monday 10th March 2008 20:59 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny (Author Response) |
| Hey thanks! You make me |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 21st October 2007 21:16 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
lol I love this! I think that harry talking to ron will help him because... idk lol they just do!
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| Monday 22nd October 2007 13:20 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
She Who Must Be Obeyed
Monday 15th October 2007 16:00 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
| Although there is not a troll in sight I think that this is a fantastic start to the story and I am eager to read more. Slightly worried about what I'm going to do when I catch up though?! |
| Monday 15th October 2007 19:22 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny (Author Response) |
Top ten things to do while waiting for chapter updates to the Toll of Destiny.
10. Give you cat a bath.
9. Read Stolen Moment.
8. Search for the Elusive Crumple Horned Snorcack.
7. Defragment your hard drive.
6. Pre-Beta read someone else’s fan fiction.
5. Read How to Lose a Guy Before Valentines Day.
4. Surf the internet for Troll related stories.
3. Organize your underwear by color/style.
2. Play word games on the Perch.
1. Leave a review for Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny!
Glad your enjoying it. I hope these help. We get an update out every few weeks. It's the best we can do, but sometimes the anticipation is the best part.
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lindaleeann
Wednesday 13th June 2007 13:29 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
| I like the premise. PTSS is a very hard situation to deal with and I really like Hermione's theory; too bad it can't be done in the here and now. |
| Monday 15th October 2007 19:08 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny (Author Response) |
Hey, I must have missed this one. Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner.
Thanks for reading!
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Patches
Saturday 5th May 2007 02:22 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
| So far so good but Harry still doesn't know why he felt it necessary to stay away from all of his friends, especially Ginny. I like the way you are handling this. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p |
eaglesnest
Friday 4th May 2007 21:24 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
| I really like the manner of the trio. Harry is calm and when he overheard some vital information about Ginny, he didn't go wild, he became more motivated to play along with his good friends to find out more. The easy and sometimes frank manner that Ron dealt with some of Harry's statements were just what adds a touch of realism and plausibilty to Ron and Hermione being in the best position to get him through his therapy. |
| Friday 4th May 2007 22:22 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny (Author Response) |
Glad you're liking it. Keep going the therapy gets more intense. I have to keep Ron in character I have a beta who demands it.
I've always thought Ron to be the emotional brutally honest type.
Thanks so much for the reviews! |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 5th April 2007 15:10 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
I like the banter between Ron and Hermione. Very well done.
Lots of surprises for Harry without his memories.
I like the t-shirt Dobby gets Harry
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| Friday 4th May 2007 17:56 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny (Author Response) |
I thought that was a good choice for a t-shirt for Harry.
Bantering is my specialty
Thanks so much for reading! |
BZHGDM
Friday 30th March 2007 16:58 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
| Out of curiosity, how did you get Kia out of "Hermione"? |
| Friday 30th March 2007 23:08 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny (Author Response) |
Hmm my desire to explain this, is outstripped only by my desire to make you wonder. Took some work to come up with the pet name though. My beta's weren't thrilled with Mione, which I could understand and was open to their opposition. So we had a brain storming session.
Apparently Hermione Wobbles was not an acceptable choice as by beta Cera snorted and fell off her chair. So we had to come up with something slightly more original, and I might just have to let people guess for a while. |
Wolf's Scream
Monday 5th March 2007 07:20 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny |
| Well, I'll thank you, as well as your betas, proofreader, and Jennifer -- excellent so far! |
| Monday 5th March 2007 11:16 | Harry Potter and the Toll of Destiny (Author Response) |
| You're very welcome. I'm glad your enjoying it. Thanks for noting the hard work of my proofreaders and beta's. I wrote the story, but it wouldn't be nearly as enjoyable without their hard and far to often thankless work. They are doing a magnificent job, and I can't praise them enough. Thanks again Emily, Cera and Katieay. |
