AurorGirl101
Monday 21st January 2008 11:29 | Discovering Lily |
| I think this is going to be very good. I really like the opening and the dream was very interesting. I love your characterization of Harry and Ginny. |
chiantiqueen
Wednesday 16th January 2008 07:13 | Discovering Lily |
| This is a great opening chapter. I do love Lily and James stories so to have them and Harry and Ginny in a story together is brilliant! Onto the next chapter! |
The Plaid Slytherin
Monday 12th November 2007 11:03 | Discovering Lily |
| This is really good. I like the glimpses we get of Lily and James, and how this reassured Ginny about her own impending motherhood. I thought her concerns and feelings were realistic and I especially enjoyed her conversation with Molly. Can't wait to read more. |
narumi
Tuesday 30th October 2007 06:59 | Discovering Lily |
| I really enjoyed this. I agree, we need to know more about Lily! |
hermioneism
Sunday 28th October 2007 21:27 | Discovering Lily |
| Great story! I am eagerly anticipating more! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 14th October 2007 16:32 | Discovering Lily |
I love this!!!
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thisgrlrox
Friday 25th May 2007 08:31 | Discovering Lily |
| I'm looking forward to reading what Ginny finds out about Lily. Nice chapter! |
Patches
Saturday 12th May 2007 02:04 | Discovering Lily |
| Wow! So Ginny is having their first baby and is very curious about Lily. That stands to reason. I think a scrapbook about Lily is an excellent idea. Something for Ginny, Harry and their new baby. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
Wolfsong
Wednesday 21st March 2007 15:35 | Discovering Lily |
| wonderfull!!!!!! |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:30 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
wonderfull!!!!!!
Thank you so much! |
MsLupin
Friday 9th March 2007 07:06 | Discovering Lily |
| Just reading this I realized we do not know to much about Lily. I am welling to take the leap and keep reading what your take is on her is. Any Dursley's coming into the picture.... |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:31 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
Just reading this I realized we do not know to much about Lily. I am welling to take the leap and keep reading what your take is on her is. Any Dursley's coming into the picture....
No, we don't know much about Lily, a fact that always sort of lingered in the back of my mind, but I'm glad you're willing ot see what I think! The presence or lack thereof of the Dursleys I'll keep to myself so you can read and find out! |
Dollface
Wednesday 7th March 2007 14:59 | Discovering Lily |
| wow... i loved it! absolutly great. can t wait till next update |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:32 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
wow... i loved it! absolutly great. can t wait till next update
Thank you! |
Lily Flower
Wednesday 7th March 2007 14:31 | Discovering Lily |
| This is awesome. My two favorite witches in the same story...per se. lol can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:32 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
This is awesome. My two favorite witches in the same story...per se. lol can't wait for the next chapter!
They're my favorites too! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic and hope you'll keep reviewing. |
Chatmandu
Wednesday 7th March 2007 07:21 | Discovering Lily |
This is a nice start to your story. You tie narrative and action together well. I have problems in guessing what will occur after "The White Tomb", so extrapolating back to events just prior to "The Boy Who Lived" is more rewarding for me. The touch of Harry unknowingly repeating some of his father's last words was very well done. If the effect you wanted was to chiil the readers blood as much as Ginny's, then you succeded.
Looking forward to chapter 2. |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:34 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
This is a nice start to your story. You tie narrative and action together well. I have problems in guessing what will occur after "The White Tomb", so extrapolating back to events just prior to "The Boy Who Lived" is more rewarding for me. The touch of Harry unknowingly repeating some of his father's last words was very well done. If the effect you wanted was to chiil the readers blood as much as Ginny's, then you succeded.
Looking forward to chapter 2.
Thank you very much for your comments! I know what you mean about finding stories concerning the "before" much more interesting than ones who are concerned with "after".
You're very right about Harry's repeating his father's words. I very much wanted the audience to understand that something important is going on... and the chills were a bonus.
Thank you for your review! Hope to see you next chapter! |
Connor Landon
Tuesday 6th March 2007 17:13 | Discovering Lily |
| Wow, this is great! I haven't read a story like this before. Lily Potter from Ginny's point of view...Can't wait for the rest of this. I can already tell that I'm going to ¢¾ and relish each chapter of this! |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:35 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
Wow, this is great! I haven't read a story like this before. Lily Potter from Ginny's point of view...Can't wait for the rest of this. I can already tell that I'm going to ¢¾ and relish each chapter of this!
Thanks! I tried to be original with the storyline and did a lot of asking around to see if anyone had done anything like this. I'm grateful for your review and hope you'll keep reading! |
Ari
Tuesday 6th March 2007 15:43 | Discovering Lily |
| Oh, I can't wait for your next chapter! |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:36 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
Oh, I can't wait for your next chapter!
Thanks, Ari! |
SillyGillie
Tuesday 6th March 2007 15:37 | Discovering Lily |
| Adorable! and very well written |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:36 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
Adorable! and very well written
Thank you! |
scatter
Monday 5th March 2007 20:43 | Discovering Lily |
| I like it! Please continue. |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:37 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
I like it! Please continue.
Thanks for your review, and the next chapter is in beta, waiting to be posted early next week! |
Wolf's Scream
Monday 5th March 2007 06:28 | Discovering Lily |
| Excellent; beautiful. I confess I've not had much exposure to behavoirs of pregnant women (well, as an adult, anyway), but your descriptions seem quite believable to me. Very well-written. |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:38 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
Excellent; beautiful. I confess I've not had much exposure to behavoirs of pregnant women (well, as an adult, anyway), but your descriptions seem quite believable to me. Very well-written.
Thank you so much! I did a lot of research into pregnancy (easy because I'm taking a class on it at the collegiate level) and I've spent a great deal of time around pregnant women. I'm glad you enjoyed that portion of the story as I put a lot of thought into it! Thanks for your review. |
Grandma Kate
Sunday 4th March 2007 22:32 | Discovering Lily |
| Quite nice. Your description of how an eight month pregnant woman feels ring true. With Molly as her Mum, forty pounds is expected weight gain. I feel like I gain weight just reading about her cooking. |
| Friday 23rd March 2007 12:39 | Discovering Lily (Author Response) |
Quite nice. Your description of how an eight month pregnant woman feels ring true. With Molly as her Mum, forty pounds is expected weight gain. I feel like I gain weight just reading about her cooking.
LOL! Don't you just? Thank you for your review! It was exciting to hear from you. |
