gymnastgal19
Saturday 6th September 2008 19:08 | The Coven of Echoes |
very interesting... that capsule was a neat idea!
i hope that ginny and harry talk soon...
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txreina
Thursday 1st November 2007 17:38 | The Coven of Echoes |
| Yes I knew things weren't what they seeem. I just love the raw emotion between Harry and Ginny. They burning for each other but neither is willing to admit it. Ginny is hiding something. Something she's not telling Harry. God it's frustrating to be so close to the truth only to be left hanging. Boy you are good. |
dailyprophetreporting
Friday 19th October 2007 03:26 | The Coven of Echoes |
You're really trying to test yourself, aren't you? I ask because, the more I think about it, the more I realize how stylistically different from each other the last few chapters have been. This time it's showy, image-oriented description and songfic elements and it comes off just as well as the fear-driven imagery, the action sequences, and the introspective looks at the characters did in your recent efforts.
I know I said this for the last chapter, too, but you've got very diverse skills, and together they make a very nice picture. You obviously know the tricks of your trade.
You're also pretty close to sadistic when it comes to your shipper fans. To divert the action right at that point, when everything is about shift one way or another for Harry and Ginny, takes some serious gumption. Then again, the way this is going, I don't think it could have ended well if they had their big confrontation then. I'm thinking Ginny's going to need a bit more of the plot to unfold before she's really ready to trust Harry again.
And you set that up nicely by entrusting so much crucial information to Ginny. It seems she's going to have to be more and more involved in the action (as if she hasn't been already, albeit unintentionally), and that can only help bring her and Harry back together.
So anyway, good work once again. And I'm on to Chapter 15.
-KC |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 4th October 2007 22:54 | The Coven of Echoes |
lol. nice ending to the chapter Cinderella was my favourite fairy tale.
That vertiserium that Voldemort developed sounded pretty cool! neat idea |
lovesprungfromhate
Tuesday 27th March 2007 07:01 | The Coven of Echoes |
So I just did a marathon read of your first 15 chapters, and am now thoroughly exhausted and terribly anxious! I have to therefore become one of the throng of reviewers begging for more updates.
An amazing world you've created, and such a fantastic tension between Harry and Ginny. I particularly liked the floor that doesn't lie. Fabulous.
Eagerly awaiting more...!
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| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:55 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you so very much.
You poor thing -- it is a bit harrowing to read the beginning -- but I needed to get to this point -- this breaking point, as it were.
I've enjoyed writing this story no end. The floor was a hoot to pen! But as a few reviewers have mentioned -- it could create some tense social situations.
Thanks again for the wonderful support!
h. |
Bagelz
Monday 26th March 2007 11:27 | The Coven of Echoes |
| Another quick review, but this story is really turning it up! I thought the beginning of the chapter was a bit heavy and difficult to follow, but once I reread, I think it was just me ... it was just tough to follow who and what we were reading about. So glad you've gone so far with this story, can't wait to see how it turns out! |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:52 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you!
I'm sorry about the beginning -- I should have grounded where we were a bit more. I had kept mentioning the Gala in previous chapters but I have to realize that there are 10 days in between. So the next chapter starts off on the heels of this one -- advanced warning!!
Hugs,
h. |
Wolfsong
Monday 26th March 2007 06:26 | The Coven of Echoes |
| i love it!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:49 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
| Excellent! |
GryffindorDragon
Friday 23rd March 2007 09:37 | The Coven of Echoes |
I love the fruit and vegetable antics -- marvelous
'Jeez,' -- somehow that just doesn't ring right in the Wizard world -- perhaps "Merlin, "
Why did Harry go off? That's a bit curious. At first I thought he was going to get Tamsyn (or maybe Susan) to get the truth out. But he came back alone.
Nice ending. 'Cinderella'
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| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:48 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you!
Hmmm. JKR steers clear of religion. I don't think we see Merlin in canon -- only Merlin's beard. Why wouldn't wizards be raised in a religion? Have to ponder that one.
Harry went off to pursue Simon -- I doubt he would leave Ginny at that moment unless it was extremely important -- and capturing Simon would constitute that.
Thanks again -- and when will we see another one of your stories?? We are waiting patiently here.
h.
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kato
Friday 23rd March 2007 02:28 | The Coven of Echoes |
Finally there s progress in the G/H thing! *Runs around with a happy, gooffy smile on her face*
Nice idea to have the floor reflect their feelings. Makes it all a little bit easier for them to work out their feelings, cause they are to stubborn and stupid to do so themselves.
O ow. Simon has given Ginny the responsibility to work out the Covent codes now. I don t think she is going to let the aurors work it out for themselves now, i think they are going to have a lot of problems keeping ginny safe and out of the buiseness.
Nice song, nice band. Reminds me a bit of Chet Baker and his "Funny Valentine". Or as you say for yourselve: the old Rat Pack. |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:44 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
I love your goofy smile -- even if it is virtual.
Exactly! That's why I put the floor there. Very good!
And yes, Ginny is in this investigation now. And yes, it will be a challenge keeping everyone safe.
Huge kudos to Paladin for the song and band -- truly remarkable, that man. I played around with "Angel Eyes" -- the last line in Frank's famous standard -- "Excuse me while I dissappear." I thought it would be perfect for a ghost.
Thanks again!
h. |
Wolfsong
Thursday 22nd March 2007 14:23 | The Coven of Echoes |
| can i hit, kill or mortaly wound, poisen or maby even give the drought of the living death to Talesmen please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i I HATE HER ok she wasn't in this chapter but i still hate her with a passion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:41 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
The poor woman -- fish hits to the head!!
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Wolfsong
Thursday 22nd March 2007 14:01 | The Coven of Echoes |
| i love it!!!!!!!!! for once i have not the slightest clue on what will happen next |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:40 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
| Good! Well, I think you'll be able to piece things together soon. |
freshwater
Thursday 22nd March 2007 00:51 | The Coven of Echoes |
My, my, my, my, my........the way you write Harry will have me revising my daydreams....so serious, so mature, so wonderfully male.....**fans self quickly**.....having him yank off his tie at this formal affair: truly brilliant, a picture that is definately worth a 1,000 words! And one I'd pay to see illustrated, too.
So, was it Simon that Harry spied through the window? Or Arieds? Or...someone else? Those codes are to be clues, eh? And the parchment in Simon's cuff: very intriguing.
Especially loved the way the song lyrics complemented the dialogue.......very nicely done. |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:39 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
You have me chuckling no end! Illustrated -- maybe there is some wonderful artist on this site that wants to take it on -- that would be fabulous, don't you think? Rubs hands together with glee.
Yes, Harry spied Simon through the window. The codes are clues -- yes. As is the scroll.
Thanks to Paladin for the song lyrics -- he is an amazing man.
Thanks again!
h. |
pokie4389
Wednesday 21st March 2007 20:03 | The Coven of Echoes |
I feel like singing, this story makes me want to sing with joy! I absolutely LOVE Harry in this story. He is, by far, the best Harry post-Hogwarts I've read. I love his dark, mysterious, serious, and lovely ways-- I want to marry your Harry but, alas, Ginny is definitely his soul mate. So, I've decided I want to be Ginny. This story is amazing. Just brilliant, I can't even think of words to describe it, I love it that much. I-- I just... hwimsey, I love you.
x infinite |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:36 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
I'm so glad you're enjoying Harry in this FF. I've sweat him a bit -- trying to age him and have him deal with what has gone on in his life. So your review gives me hope.
You're making me blush, you know that! But I'm thrilled that your happy -- we aim to please.
Hugs!
h. |
Wolfsong
Wednesday 21st March 2007 15:22 | The Coven of Echoes |
| hay it's me again. was dreamchaserforever but well my acount stoped working so anyway this is an awsome chapter!!!!!!!!!! i loved that moment between harry and ginny sooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!! NOW WE KNOW WITH OUT A dought that he didn't cheat on her!!!!!!!!!!!! i wonder when this will happen? soon i hope!!!!!!!!!!!! i also wonder when ginny and Talesmen will that will happen very soon. harry has made it clear that he still loves ginny and only ginny. uh oh yeah what's with the shoe? dose it belong to the girl? will the girl play a role with harry and ginny getting back togather? i think so. or i hope so any way. |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:33 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Wolfsong is a lovely new userid.
Thanks so much for the kudos! And all those exclamation points -- my goodness, I'm blushing!
The shoe belongs to Ginny - remember, she broke her heel on the dance floor -- hence the "Cinderella," quote.
The girl does play a role in this story -- but that's all I can say right now.
Thanks again!
h. |
swngnblues
Wednesday 21st March 2007 13:25 | The Coven of Echoes |
Wow... I'm late by a day and a half, and I get buried towards the bottom of the review list...
Yay alcohol!! : ) Always go with the tried and true Firewhiskey, though. My opinion as a bartender is that the more ingredients to mix - the more likely it is to be a "girly drink"
Compliments to Sean for the band and the song. Very good, although I didnt pay quite as much attention to it as the interchange between Harry & Ginny. (You might want to go back and block quote the song, so that it sticks out from the conversation between Harry & Ginny)
And Ivi.. super beta that you are , I'm sure that you can turn around 16 in plenty of time for a posting on the 30th.
You know... you're killing me with the angst here? Just when I think they're going to get things sorted out, you come up and pull one of them away? I still think that Tamsyn needs to be b-slapped a few times... And where was she, by the way? Seems all too convenient that she's not around for this chapter...
Thie link with Aidan is getting curioser and curioser.... I wonder if some of Harry's training was for his eventual protection of the letter? Seems a little "Priory of Scion/Templars" right now. Of ourse, you'll have me confused and and soon...
And what's up with Susan? Why's she getting sicker?
Ah well.. onto 16! Till then! : ) |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:28 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Readers LOVE your drinks, sir. You should seriously think about going into business.
In gratitude, and in lieu of a belated birthday gift, you make a cameo appearance in the next chapter. While it's not fifteen minutes of fame --it comes close.
Girly drinks, indeed. I tend to be a neat girl myself -- too much water is a bad thing.
Good point regarding the song and text -- will change that. I can see what you mean -- it looked different on my laptop.
16 may most likely be posted early -- it's 17 that is going to be late - as well into April late. The rest should post smoothly. Both Ivy and I have perfect storms converging, and real life needs to be front and center for a bit.
To answer your question, I didn't want to introduce Tamsyn into this chapter because that would veer the narrative in an arc I wasn't ready to pursue just yet.
The Templars is an interesting analogy. But they were guarding something (well at least in legend) holy. Whereas our Coven is guarding something dark -- to say the least.
I don't think Susan is getting physically sicker -- Ginny made up that white lie -- but mentally, she isn't in a good place right now.
Hugs -- and thank you so much for bartending.
h. |
Lily Flower
Wednesday 21st March 2007 11:45 | The Coven of Echoes |
"Cinderella," he whispered.
Well the prince better go get his princess.
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| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:19 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
And to that, may I add, "Amen!"
h. |
Felix Felicis
Wednesday 21st March 2007 07:52 | The Coven of Echoes |
| Outstanding chapter! The loving care you take with your words is almost like you're caressing the story into its form. Your passion for making it perfect is evident throughout, which also draws the reader in, making them feel the emotions and understand the places in every scene. This was so very different from everything up to now that it came as a bit of a surprise, although certainly a welcome one! We all know how strong the love is between Harry and Ginny but you have miraculously shown in it words which we couldn't possible come up with. That's very powerful writing, indeed. I can't wait for the next! I've said this many times before but you just seem to keep topping yourself! |
| Tuesday 27th March 2007 10:18 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Oh, FF -- you are a sweetheart. I do spend an inordinant amount of time wordsmithing -- I'm not the fastest writer in the world, to be sure.
There were three pivotal scenes that I envisioned when I dreamt up this story -- the Gala being the first of them. Therefore I begged, borrowed and stole from my friends. Paladin outdid himself, especially.
Thank you so much for your constant support -- it means the world -- especially from such a talented writer as yourself.
Here's to our mutal admiration society!
h. |
paladin
Wednesday 21st March 2007 04:23 | The Coven of Echoes |
"When you call out my name..."
(*Bows deeply) Oh, I do feel like a tango. Of course, after reading that dance sequence again, perhaps The Lambada is the way to go, eh? (*waggles eyebrows)
We have been over this chapter so many times over the last several weeks that there is not much more for me to add except to highlight subtle character descriptions that could stand out to me.
Susan’s gaunt and skeletal features are obvious signs that she is either stressed out and isn’t eating, out of fear that Ginny will say something to Doc Virden or he will discover it on his own. She may also be experiencing serious inner turmoil over the predicament that she has helped drive Ginny deeper into.
“Suddenly Areids also appeared from the gallery, his face ashen.”
Does our ‘Golden Boy’ have a bond to Ian or the Coven in a way that he ‘feels’ activities going on? Or did he experience something while sneaking the Moondew our of Virden’s storage place? For being somewhat of an unflappable, obsessed Auror, it appears that something got to him. Hmmmmmmmm.
From the bottom of my heart, thank you, for allowing me to contribute to such a great story.
Your friend,
S~
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| Monday 26th March 2007 23:15 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
A standing ovation to the man who made this all possible.
I don't have to tell you how much fun I had doing this with you. It should have been illegal. You are brilliant. I am so grateful.
No, definitely Tango!
Susan is in a bad way, no doubt about it. And Areids does have his secrets.
You know, I should have thanked you HB for letting me borrow huge chunks of your time. So I do so here -- she is a kind and patient woman!
All the detail, all the nuances, all the humor -- I could never top it in a million years. Plus, you always make me feel wonderful in the process.
Have you ever seen the movie, "Swingers" -- Well, there's a line in it and I just have to say --- "You are so money!" Actually, you are so brilliant.
Your fan club President,
h. |
Connor Landon
Tuesday 20th March 2007 22:00 | The Coven of Echoes |
| And I definitely agree: Your description of adult-Harry is so AMAZING that I want to eat him. You do write *my* characters extremely well. It is almost as if I'm reading an extention of JKR's writing. Have I told you how much I love you? |
| Monday 26th March 2007 23:07 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Oh my! Well, that is high praise indeed. Thank you!
And the feeling is mutual! |
Connor Landon
Tuesday 20th March 2007 21:57 | The Coven of Echoes |
Um, at the end, I startled myself by actually shaking my fists at my computer screen and shouting at it. I pretty much hate you. Yet I love you...You leave off each chapter with the best cliff hangers in the world. So Ginny pretty much has to tell the truth from now until forever. That'll definitely work in Harry's favour, eh? (Simon didn't release the spell, did he? So that only leaves Ginny's death to free her from it...OH!) This story excites me, and I nearly wet myself whenever I see an author update. I loved the ball, btw. At first I thought that the beautiful girl must be Tamsyn--that WITCH!!--but NO, it was Ginny! And it was amazing that both Harry and Ginny's footprints stayed the brightest shade of red imaginable on the dance floor. But ERG! it makes me frustrated that Ginny was actually going to tell Harry what she thought happened on That Night, and then Harry goes rushing off. Berk. And Arieds...*excited shiver, either from impenetrable hatred or unquenchable lust* I'm glad that he's showing an interest in Ginny, actually. It shows that he must have a heart somewhere. (Either that, or a peni--I mean...) It adds to the drama, which I am MOST DEFINITELY lapping up like a dragon in the Hadarac. (I'm an "Eragon" freak.) Anyway, this has gone on for much longer than I intended. It's 12.55 am, so I should get to bed. Class tomorrow morning--TODAY morning--could be rather painful, otherwise. I think I have a favourite quote, which I shall relay back to you:
I didn't think you were capable of compliments. I thought you had them physically removed along with your sense of humor. |
| Monday 26th March 2007 23:05 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Oh, don't hate me! You, most of all -- if Connor Landon hates me, where do I go??
Not to worry about our girl. The pill ceases to be effective if the CASTER dies. Boy, that would really put a twist in the story if she had to tell the truth forever. Yikes!!
Thank the lord you like our American (I just saw Casino Royale, finally -- and while Areids is no Daniel Craig, there are similarities.) But I lust after him too -- well, in a purely detached kind of way.
I just finished reading Eldest to my son -- and we are awaiting Inheritance -- so I completely understand your quote.
Now go to bed. I don't want to be responsible for poor grades. A's all the way. Actually, just enjoy what you study -- and the rest will take care of itself.
Hugs,
h.
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Harte
Tuesday 20th March 2007 17:51 | The Coven of Echoes |
| I read the other reviews and I agree with what they said - the detail, the tie, the footprints, the smirks, the singer, the tension, the heat! This chapter contained so much and really moved the story along. I smiled when Harry called her Cinderella. You are a genius! |
| Monday 26th March 2007 22:58 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
I don't know about genius, but you are a wonderful person for those kind words. Thank you. I'm so very glad you're enjoying the story. It is a joy to write.
Take good care and thanks again,
h. |
SillyGillie
Tuesday 20th March 2007 17:36 | The Coven of Echoes |
*bows down ridiculously low to hwimsey*
You are a genius. No other words are necessary. Genius- that about embodies everything, basically this ridiculous feeling I have have jumping up and down like a loon, I've settled for grinning way to widely.
What a wonderful, brilliant chapter. Aw. I could squeal with the wonderfulness of it all, and Harry and Ginny haven't even kissed yet, can you forsee what a blob I'll be when they actually do.
The ball description was beautiful, you have a such a way with words I'm so envious. You're better than ten times the novelists I read out there, how's the book coming along! Harry's description, wo, were you trying to kill me. Haha. Seriously everything BRILLIANT!
I love the relationship between Ron and Harry, I love that they're back on the same level of friendship, I'm just glad everything is ok between them. Ron commenting on Harry's appearence, such a Ron thing to do. Poor boy you would think an auror's pension would provide him with a little more luxary, but I bet Hermione's picking out his clothes now a days which can't be much better than Mrs. Weasley herself. Hah.
The footsteps were almost glob worthy. Ha I loved it! How Harry initially had no footprints and then when Ginny walked into the room the color was coming out around his feet, Ron's smirk I could just picture it, perfect. Then when Harry actually worked up the courage to corner her and talk to her, how their footprints stayed on the floor! Loved it! I'm so glad that Ginny isn't furious, it's wonderful that she feels liberated that Harry knows about it, and rightfully he should seeing as it has to do with him as much as it has to do with her.
Simon, we just keep on running into him don't we, I suppose not anymore, but how brilliant was that scene. I notice it happened when Ginny decided not to follow Harry's directions again . But I suppose something good came out of it at least, she got her wand back and the codes to the others, brilliant. The Veraxlectum potion sounded brilliant, good thing Voldemort didn't really invent it or I'm sure that would mean some major problems.... Anywho.
I don't want to come out sounding too foolish, sometimes I feel like my rants are just terrible, but Harry's description, I just have to go back into it one more time. You describe him so well its sort of ridiculous, I mean if I could imagine him as an adult this would be how I did. Everything- his awesomeness as an auror, his love for Ginny, his friendship with Ron, his secretive nature.
I can't believe Ginny and Arieds are going through with their scheme! I hope nothing horrible happens, and that something actually good comes out of Ginny not following directions! Ha. I am curious about that note Harry found rolled up in Simon's leg, was it meant for Simon or for Harry himself? I wonder...this is all very curious and intriguing.
I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm going to sneak into an internet café and read it, . I forsee some major squealage especially where the chapter left off, Ginny was so close to becoming unburdaned! So close yet so far. But then again in regards to the squealage...everyone will probably be too caught up with the conciousness of the little girl, did we every find out who the father is? If not I hold that Arieds is a likely candidate. I hope nothing from Madame K is sparked when she finds out Ginny has used the Moondew, and that it doesn't automatically alert her and thus the deatheaters or something equally as foul..
Wonderful wonderful job to everyone who was involved in this chapter! The lemons turning into lemon drops were hilarious, a wonderful tribute to Ginny and our very best headmaster! Brilliant!!! |
| Monday 26th March 2007 22:55 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
What can I say? You are making me grin like the Cheshire Cat. Thank you, my dear. You are far too kind.
I'm glad you enjoyed the Gala -- it was a bit of formal romance amid this chaotic world. I'm really blushing about the novelist remark. After this is done, I am taking the summer to finish the character sketches for the novel. I am extremely excited about it. But now, I'm concentrating on this. I'm handicapped in the fact that I can only write one thing at a time.
You know, you are right about Ron's clothes -- he probably could afford something better. If nothing, Herm. would MAKE him buy something better. I may need to fix that line.
The floor was great fun to write -- but it could pose some embarrassing social scenes! Thank fritz42 for the pill -- her invention -- I cannot touch her when it comes to spells, poisons and other things nefarious!
NEVER, diss your rants. I love your rants. Keep ranting! That's an order. I'm glad you like the way I've written an adult Harry. It's how I picture him -- he has incredible emotions for one who has had them trampeled on so heavily in his life. He's just a bit more tightly wrapped as an adult. He's "gotten it under control" as DD suggested. But Ginny has a way of unraveling his cool exterior.
Yes, Ginny will carry out the scheme. And I believe the note was meant for Simon -- but -- well, I can't say anymore right now.
I lift a lemon drop in your honor. You keep me going, girl, you do!!
Hugs,
h. |
anniep
Tuesday 20th March 2007 14:54 | The Coven of Echoes |
Scotland isn’t part of England. McGonagall will be taking house points from you.
I’m glad to see that Harry has decided to fight for his love, though I doubt Ginny knows the significance of the footprints. Looking forward to finding out why Harry walked away without at least a bit of explanation. “Violent disbelief”, what a great description—only surprising that a broken shoe was all that resulted from it.
Really enjoyed the poetry. Someone needs to put that song to music, though I suppose Devil’s Snare is copyrighted, so never mind (sigh). The clue in the pants cuff is interesting. Is the “sound within the rocks to sing” the phoenix song that has sounded several times now? “Three noble tasks” should be familiar to Hogwarts’ reluctant champion. Your slow unveiling of the clues is wonderfully torturous. No, I’m not a masochist, just truly enjoying the complexities, hints, and careful developments of your story. |
| Monday 26th March 2007 22:42 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
I should be made to wander the Forbidden Forest claiming I'm a relative of Umbridge for that awful faux pas. There is no excuse. I'm so sorry.
I think Ginny might know the significance of the footprints -- let's say she heard people talking as she made her way up to the gallery. I also apologize for not being clearer about what Harry saw: Simon. He went to apprehend him. Lord, I'm falling apart, aren't I?
Paladin deserves all the credit for the song. He is amazing, isn't he. I was flabberghasted by his effort. And yes, we need a tune. Are you willing??
Ah, you're too smart by half. I think we can assume the song is related to the phoenix song, yes.
Thank you for being patient. I think I'm annoying some readers -- but I don't want to rush the story. I already felt like the last chapter could have been much longer. Ah, sigh.
Thanks again for not being too hard on my blunder!
Take care,
h. |
BasketKiwi
Tuesday 20th March 2007 13:26 | The Coven of Echoes |
0.0 Whoa. Do I ever have any other response to your chapters? I can't seem to start a review with anything other than "whoa" "wow" and "ahh" and other such exclamations. It's crazy how many different people helped to make this chapter so great! It's so funny, because I did notice that all those parts added a "little something extra".
Oh, poor Susan! She seems pretty low right now. I hope that doesn't last too long before being resolved, although I thought for a moment there that something WAS going to be resolved on quite a different subject, but I looked at the scroll bar and knew that there wasn't nearly enough left in the chapter to go over all of ... that. Do we find out why Harry left so suddenly? It was quite rude, to Ginny, and to all of us! Hmph.
And talk about impulsive! She's almost as bad as he is! Death by heart crushed from pain?? Ah! And she just grabs it and swallows! Though he did die pretty quickly. That was pretty creepy. And sad, even though we weren't EXACTLY sure if he was evil or not. Were we? Well, it seems kind of more obvious now, but.
Okay. Anyway. Great chapter! Is there any possibility of more contributions in later chapters? Just wondering. Well, as always, thanks for the tension! (Keeps me on the edge of my seat! ) |
| Monday 26th March 2007 22:32 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you, my dear. You never cease to make me smile!
Yes, this was a communal effort -- and I had a blast working with all these talented people: Paladin, swngblues, fritz42, Myth and of course, Iviolinist.
Susan is in a bad place right now. And I apologize for not writing the scene properly -- Harry saw Simon (I should have had Harry say something when he sees Ginny with Simon on the balcony to help clarify that.)
I think we can make some assumptions about Simon -- he's trying to destroy something potentially very deadly. Now, there are two ways to view this. Almost like nuclear weapons. The Coven, which believes that it is right -- they are protecting this Letter -- they can't/won't destroy it, so they will give their lives to protect it. Then you have the 3 renegade members who want it gone, period. Then you have Aidan and to a certain extent DD -- but we don't know their story yet.
And as for contributions in later chapters -- I'm always up for them -- and often taxing my poor friends (fritz42 especially) with wild requests.
Thanks again.
h. |
eaglesnest
Tuesday 20th March 2007 11:31 | The Coven of Echoes |
There are so many "enthusiastically supportive" things I want to say about this chapter. Having read all the other reviews thus far, they all hit on most of the key points so well I'll just say "ditto." The other reviewers on this site, and for this story in particular, just do such a fantastic job, I feel like I'm part of a collaborative effort. Now I can't wait for your responses.
Of course, my favorite part of the romance was "I saw you, Harry. That night, Harry, I saw--"
followed by 'Two pairs of footprints lay emblazoned on the floor. Crimson as fire.' At this point, I feel you made a major turn in the story. Harry had just confessed his love and the nature of his inquiries are sure to make Ginny think that maybe there was something else going on that night. They both know their own feelings for the other. Ginny has seen the footprints. As an author, I also respect why you can't let them get together just yet. Because as soon as you do, the Ginny/Susan relationship will start to unravel and signal the start of an important new development in the plot.
The big teaser you left us with .... 'But Harry had frozen. His eyes were sharp and focused on the other side of the room ..... With that he took out his wand and headed straight toward ....' Oh, I wish I knew what that was all about?
As for the Coven mystery you gave us some real juice to ponder.
And now my questions: Will Ginny tell Arieds everything that Simon told her? Where was Tamsyn? Did you deliberately leave Susan and Tamsyn out of the gala dance portion or were you just conserving unnecessary words? Will Ginny and Arieds administer the Moondew after they left the gala? Will Harry follow Ginny after he gets Simon to the hospital?
And now I have to go back and re-read some chapters because my memory on details has failed me.
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| Monday 26th March 2007 22:24 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Hello!
It's wonderful to see your review, as always. Thank you for all the lovely things you said. I'm touched.
You are also spot on with you insights and hunches. Now, let's see what I can do for you.
Yes, that was a turning point (the dance) and there will be another in the next chapter to a certain extent. And remember -- being together and being TOGETHER, may be two different things. Ack, I can't say more at this point.
As far as what Harry saw -- it was Simon. I really flubbed up here as many readers have asked the same question. I just imagine he saw him outside the windows and went to investigate. Sorry for the confusion there.
As for your questions: Yes, Ginny will tell all she knows to Areids. Tamsyn was back at the S&R with Tonks -- they didn't have to be there. And yes, I left out Susan and Tamsyn because I didn't want this chapter heading all over the place. I try to limit the words per chapter so I can a) post every 10 days and b) not break my dearest beta! I wanted to drive this particular narrative forward -- to explore Susan or Tamsyn at this juncture would open a kettle of fish for me. No, Harry will listen to orders and return to the S&R.
Does that help??
As always -- a delight trying to answer what I can.
h. |
hedwig5221
Tuesday 20th March 2007 10:32 | The Coven of Echoes |
Great chapter...but I'm ready to find out about "that night" as well! What really happened? Ginny may think Susan is her friend, but I'm beginning to wonder about that.
Love the reference to Cinderella in the end and can't wait until the next installment!
Keep up the great work! |
| Monday 26th March 2007 21:52 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you for the kind words!
Much of what you ask for will be revealed very soon.
Early posting with the next chapter!
Take care,
h. |
Arnel
Tuesday 20th March 2007 08:38 | The Coven of Echoes |
| I loved every word of this chapter, especially the cleverness of the drink names, the poetry, the charmed floor, and the description of how Ginny was so captivatingly dressed. I'm glad she got her wand back and the information the Aurors need to move the case forward. Rather spooky, that. However, Harry's line at the end just made me laugh out loud because my five-year-old son is completely enamored with Disney's Cinderella and the parallel between his and Harry's comments just made me smile. Great chapter. I look forward to the next one, indeed! |
| Monday 26th March 2007 21:51 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
I'm so glad you loved every word! The drink names came from swngblues and Myth -- the song from Paladin, and the floor from yours truly!
Hah! I smiled ear to ear with the remark about your son! Thank God I didn't us my son -- Harry'd be remarking about Pokemon -- decidely much less romantic, don't you think!
Thanks again!
Hugs,
h. |
DaFalcon
Tuesday 20th March 2007 08:17 | The Coven of Echoes |
Not every one can pull off a sexy looking Harry. You, however, do it with such grace. Delicious! I’m not usually a Ron fan, but I adore your characterization of him. (that’s saying something)
I liked Harry’s description of Ginny… “a dream. The figure seemed to have stepped out of a portrait from long ago – from the mind of an artist who had adored his subject.” Very nice.
Ron and Harry are funny in this chapter. I smiled all through their encounter at the bar. No one can repeat words pinned by Hermione without getting caught. I can’t remember right off which book, maybe the 5th book, but Harry tried that once and his professor saw right through him. Hehe. Remember that? Seriously tho, I’m amazed that Ron hasn’t said anything up until now about HG. I’m glad he did tho. Maybe it’s time for the “positive” reinforcement. I’m right tired of Tamsyn and Susan.
Thank you so much for the scene you gave us of them in the past. Harry’s words of love to her at the lake. I think I may have had the biggest sigh. That was lovely. But it’s funny how I went from scowling to smiling all within that moment. I just couldn’t stand the fact that Areids had his arms about Ginny dancing. Grr! But I felt much better once Harry got his chance with her. I was pretty much happy all the way through to the end of the chapter.
Why does Areids remind me of Snape? Could it be his arrogance? I’m not impressed by him at all. Every time I read a scene with him in it, I find myself rolling my eyes. I don’t think he should get the chance to touch Ginny, talk to Ginny, or even look at Ginny. I’m waiting on the day she gives him one good hex. Now that she has her wand back, maybe there’s a possibility? Hehe. *wishful thinking* It was good she got a jibe in tho. But it made him laugh so I’m not sure if it was good enough.
I wonder what she’ll make of the crimson footprints. That should tell her something no? When Harry told her to say put I laughed. I knew she wouldn’t. She never does. But this time I’m glad she didn’t. Her encounter with Simon was gold. It sheds more light on what’s happening and I’m glad that both Harry and Ginny has pieces of the puzzle. Maybe they’ll work together to solve the mystery of the letter and the Coven. I know, more wishful thinking. I just like it better when they are working as a team.
Again, great job. I’m looking forward to the 30th. |
| Monday 26th March 2007 21:48 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Hello my dear! I had such a rotten day that your review did me wonders. Thank you so very much.
I, too, liked the interaction between H&R. I like their banter in the books -- and I imagine that will only intensify as they age -- especially since Ron and HG are together in this fic.
I wanted to play with the idea in this chapter on how scents affect us. Harry with the lemon, Ginny with the foul smell on the balcony -- both propelling the characters ahead.
Unfortunately, I find myself fond of our American -- perhaps because he's my own creation. Now, that does not make him good or bad -- in fact, he skirts both camps fairly well. We'll learn more about him in the next chapter.
Yes, she did see the crimson footprints, and yes, they will factor into her thoughts. Hah, no, she doesn't like to stay put -- it must be a redhead thing. Meeting up with Simon has sealed her fate -- she's into this investigation now whether she wants to or not. And no, I don't think it's wishful thinking at all!
Thank you again for making my day brighter!
h. |
critmo
Tuesday 20th March 2007 07:55 | The Coven of Echoes |
Well, you've definitely trampled a few Scottish souls to the ground this time.
it was the singularly most glamorous event Kilgraith -- indeed England – had seen in years
England, indeed. And then you have the nerve to bring in a band from Culloden. My my, you really like living dangerously, don't you?
Apart from that, I was surprised at the H/G interaction, i.e. it went much better than I'd expected. The floor is an interesting invention, even though things that reveal one's thoughts or emotions always tend to make me nervous. They leave so little room for diplomacy. |
| Monday 26th March 2007 18:58 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
I fall on my sword and beat my breast while thrashing my back with nettles.
There is no excuse -- none. I am a lazy American who likes to use the term "England" versus "United Kingdom." Just plain ignorant.
Like sodium and water to use Culloden after that -- I was trying to do a mini-tribute to "Outlander." Oi.
As for the floor -- I taught ballroom dancing in college. It was a perverse wish of mine to have such a floor -- although I definitely see your point regarding diplomacy -- especially when I was trying to teach my future husband at the time how to foxtrot... |
MartinDean
Tuesday 20th March 2007 07:47 | The Coven of Echoes |
Where did run off too? at the most important point of the chapter? Did he see Iain? was going to tell him about seeing Tamsyn!!! Wimsey that was just soo mean!! I really think we should discover the truth about "that" night sooner rather than later. That you left it on another cliffhanger really excited me for the rest of the story but also just a bit like when he thinks about
Another cracking chapter to keep me going till the next one, you really are a great story teller and this by far my favourite story i've read on any FF. Keep up the good work |
| Monday 26th March 2007 18:51 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Hello! Thank you so for your sweet words. I've had a horrible day so they made me feel great.
I'm so sorry -- I should have been more obvious about this. Harry ran after Simon -- I wanted to infer that -- but I think I ended up confusing more people in the process.
I think my mean days are behind me -- well, to a certain extent. The next chapter is a turning point in many ways.
Thanks again. I will try to limit my meaness (if possible!)
h. |
Melindaleo
Tuesday 20th March 2007 04:55 | The Coven of Echoes |
The vivid imagery of this ball scene was fantastic. I could picture it in my mind, and it made me long to get dressed up and go to a ball myself (not that I really ever get to do that, but you know what I mean.) Loved Harry in his dress robes with no tie - yum - and I thought the floor was a stroke of brilliance. Imagine the potential fights that might cause amongst couples though? Hee. I also loved your creativity with the drinks - I wanted to try a few of them, too. I recognized the Black Death from Cursed, as well. Didn't Marlow drink this at one point?
Now, we've had another mention about Harry's monk, although Ginny didn't share that detail yet. Did Ian utter the Taghairm when he died though? And Susan's silence is very intriguing - she hasn't even asked how things went with her grandmother, which leads me to believe she might already know. I thought Tamsyn's absence from the Ball was very telling, too. Were we not supposed to see the color of her and Harry's footprints on that wonderful floor? Hmmm.
My one bit of constructive criticism - and it's only my opinion - is that the plot device of an interruption is being used a lot. I wasn't surprised to see another one in this chapter, but it would be nice to get a completed scene to move us forward, too.
I look forward to the 30th. |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 23:35 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Hello!
Thank you, my dear, for the review!
The ball was a hoot to write. Actually, this chapter could have gone on and on but I'm trying to limit the chapter length -- otherwise I think I'll have to start paying my dear beta, Ivy lest she go on strike.
I thought up the floor because I used to teach ballroom dancing in college and wished I had it back them -- oh, my toes. But it could present problems. "What, I thought you liked me? Or, "Oh no, you like me?"
Yes, Myth let me borrow Black Death! I put out a cry for drinks in my LJ a while back and she graciously offered it up. I think I may have used vermouth, though.
Ian did utter the Taghairm when he died -- that phoenix-like song -- back in Chapter 1. So did Simon.
Your instincts are good regarding Susan. The reason Tamsyn was absent from the ball is that I needed to control this chapter. If I introduced her it would go in a direction that I wasn't ready to pursue just yet.
I understand your feeling about interuptions. But I am doing it on purpose. I want to create a whip lash feel -- a dizzy foggy feel also -- it also ties into the way Ginny is acting -- or has been acting in the past year. I need things to be slightly "off" if that makes any sense. If you've noticed, events as well as people in this story are not quite "right." There is a method to my madness (I hope).
Thanks again for the review!!
h.
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Patches
Tuesday 20th March 2007 02:45 | The Coven of Echoes |
| Thank you for a really great chapter. I have a feeling that Susan and her Grandmum had a hand in Ginny and Harry's breakup. Ginny obviously read things in Harry at the Gala that she knows in her heart are true. That and that things that Harry said about "Why did you leave without saying goodbye!" Even Ginny has had thoughts about why was there such a rush to leave. I look forward to more of this story. Thank you for writing. p |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 23:19 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you, Patches for reviewing!!
Your insights into the story are very good -- kudos to you!
We'll get an insight into Susan in the next chapter.
Take good care,
h. |
Lady Chi
Tuesday 20th March 2007 00:43 | The Coven of Echoes |
...It's evil to leave us hanging in this spot, just so you know.
Well, it took me a couple of hours but I read through the whole fic tonight and I wanted to say that you've got a good thing going here. Your world has a different texture than JK Rowling's might, but it's still very pleasant. In fact, it reminds me of CoS and GoF in how dark it is and how all the characters seem to wrapped up in their own worlds.
This fic reads very much like a serial television show, fast-moving events and quick-paced dialogue make it a fast read but one that still leaves you pondering the events that will happen in the next chapter.
I particularly liked the confrontation between Harry and Ginny in this scene. I could easily picture the surroundings and the movements of the characters, although how Ginny is always being pulled away dramatically is a bit disconcerting to me at times.
The other thing I wanted to express to you was my appreciation for the way that you consistently thank your beta. I, too, am a beta at Phoenix Song.net, and although we have beta appreciation days, it nice to see a "practical application of the method" (as Imogen's McGonagall would say).
A very nice fic, very enjoyable. I'm looking forward to your next chapter, apparently on the 30th. |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 23:17 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Hello Lady Chi!
Thank you so very much for reviewing this story. Well, first, I should say thank you for taking the to read it in one sitting!
You're exactly right about the atmosphere. I wanted it to be darker -- I think I'm drawn to that side of the stories. That and Edward Gorey prints. And yes, I wanted it to have a fast passed, whip lash feel to it -- at least to a certain point. There is a method to my madness -- and hopefully it will all make sense soon.
As far as a "practical application of the method" (I adore that saying, btw), I would be remiss if I didn't give Ivy the kudos she deserves. I feel blessed to have her guidance and support. Betas provide a wonderful service to writers (for FREE) I might add. It's a labor of love and takes a huge chunk of their time -- what's not to love!!
Thank you again for your kindness. It means the world.
h. |
girl from ipanema
Monday 19th March 2007 22:03 | The Coven of Echoes |
| I feel honored to have been of service to your muse. So, ginny and harry have each half of the puzzle, you devious woman So, I am REALLY curious about how the whole mischief was pulled off. How many chapters are you planning, and when should we expect at least this part of the puzzle solved? You are KILLING us here ! You know, Mr. Areids does not have much respect for the rules so long as he gets what he want. That is a truly disagreeable oaf, you know... |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:39 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
You are too smart by half, you know that?
More answers coming. Remember, it's a mystery, I need to keep it mysterious. I think the whole thing is heading toward 25 chapters at this point.
Mr. Areids is an interesting man to be sure. We learn more about him in the next chapter.
Take good care,
h. |
Delani
Monday 19th March 2007 20:46 | The Coven of Echoes |
Oh love love LOVe it!! This was absolutely di-VINE!!! I am completrly spellbound by your vapor crooner "Pleasure, pleasure." Oh that was a pleasure to imagine...
I loved the slight nod to "You've bewitched me body and soul"
Oh, and I've always said a women in a dress is a fierce thing to behold...Point proven.
Oh well done well done well DONE!!!
(well it needs to be said thrice, good things come in threes, no?)
Wonderful, as usual, and once again the delightful thrills whilst one pines for the beloved return of Marlow... *sad face*...
but *happy face* to you!
Del
ah yes, and woot. |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:36 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you so much, my dear!
I think Cursed may be updated this week. So no more need for sad faces --just make sure you don't forget about us!! Seriously, I'm looking forward to jumping back into that story -- I'm a fangirl extradonaire.
Me thinks you have been watching the most recent version of P&P? Ah, sigh.
Thanks so much for all you kindness, you're wonderful.
h.
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kat228
Monday 19th March 2007 20:24 | The Coven of Echoes |
I was so happy to see an update!! I thought I was going to have to wait til tomorrow
I have some questions -
When Simon asks "Would you die to destroy evil?" - Ginny doesn't answer? And the second glowing light, that's the Veraxlectum spell breaking, right? So we don't have to worry about her heart crushing...
And - it was her own footprints that were crimson, right? Harry's were burgandy? (I loved that detail - I want to see Areids...)
...I love the details regarding the drinks, the goblin chatter, the description in general. What makes JK's books so wonderful is the extra detail she gives us about this whole other world...you also do that - it adds so much. Also, your Harry/Ron dialouge is great.
Thanks for writing - I'm counting down to the 30th! |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:32 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Let's see what I can answer!
I suppose I should have had Ginny say, "No." I wanted the surge of light to be so strong (because her belief is SO strong) that Simon would just understand. Let's have her whisper it under her breath. It's that strong belief that makes Simon trust her.
The Veraxlectum ceases if the caster dies. Once Simon died -- it held no more sway over Ginny.
Harry's footprints were burgendy when they saw Ginny on the staircase. BOTH of their footprints were crimson on the dance floor (Two pairs).
Thank you so for the kudos regarding detail. I love that about the original books also -- it's a wonderful world to get lost in.
Thanks again -- perhaps an early post this time?? I better start cracking on Ch. 17 -- I'm way behind -- yipes!
h. |
choco1
Monday 19th March 2007 20:06 | The Coven of Echoes |
| extremely well written, angst filled (loving it). The song is amazing, thank you paladin. "I saw you, Harry..." please tell me she is going to finish this sentence in the next chapter! |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:28 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you so much -- I'm glad you're loving the angst -- half the readers are ready to hang me from the highest branch at this point.
Paladin is amazing, isn't he? He did a marvelous job and it was so much fun to work on it with him.
Take good care and thanks again.
h. |
Tesgirl123
Monday 19th March 2007 19:41 | The Coven of Echoes |
Oh my god! I loved the imagery and the descriptions of the ball...its definitely a spot-on image of a society ball. I loved the glimpse of Harry and Ginny together with the dance, though I wonder what it was that Harry saw that made him walk away from her. And I really want to smack Ginny for continuing to wander off by herself.
Can't wait for the next chapter because hopefully then you will give us more H/G goodness! |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:26 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
I'm so glad you enjoyed the ball -- it was a hoot to write.
Harry saw Simon and that is what made him exit stage left fairly quickly. I'm sorry for the confusion here -- I wanted it to be understood but it wasn't!!
Ginny tends not to listen when she is enraged -- and she was definitely ticked at that point.
H/G in the next chapter I do believe!
Thanks again,
h. |
gryffindorgirl72000
Monday 19th March 2007 19:39 | The Coven of Echoes |
Oh I loved this chapter! Totallly frustrated that Harry and Ginny didn't get to have their "talk" but it gives me something to look forward to!
Very exciting story - I can't wait for the next update! |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:23 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you so very much. I glad you're enjoying the story. Sorry about the frustration. It won't last forever.
Cheers!
h. |
girlspell
Monday 19th March 2007 19:29 | The Coven of Echoes |
"Lets see...I'll take a Amortentia Ale...no make that Forbidden Forest Punch. Oh heck make that the Black Death, and mix it with a Ogden's." Who knows..I might get lucky tonight".
Oh wow...I don't know what to say, except I loved the whole chapter. I was on pins and needles through out the scene with Simon. Yes..no Harry and Ginny at the end, but something better. She dressed for him and she never felt more alive. That is a heck of lot better then what she felt when seeing Harry before.
Reading about Susan, her appearance and behavor...not sure she is going to make it to the end of this story.
Of course Tamsyn was not there. She has been strangely silent in their disucussions about what course to take. I think what Ginny saw was kind of a pensieve. She did think she saw her own body. Cooked up by Susan with maybe help with Tamsyn. Kind of helping each other toward the same goal. Maybe she wants to get hold of the codes for herself.
The whold ghostly entertainment was wonderfu. Yes, the lyrics were woven wonderfully together. Part of the reminded me of a long ago 1950's rat pack Los Vegas. The touch with slipper left behind was wonderful.
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| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:22 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
You had me laughing no end with your drink order. You want an umbrella in that too?
I'm very happy you enjoyed the chapter -- you know it was a labor of love. It could have gone on twice as long but I am trying to keep the chapters to around 5,000 words -- although this one and the next go over.
As for Susan, interesting insight.
I can say that Ginny definitely saw Tamsyn that night, no pensieve involved -- although that is a fascinating idea.
Thank Paladin, the brilliant man for the entertainment and lyrics. Isn't he wonderful? Rat pack exactly.
And I couldn't resist the slipper -- I'm an old softie -- sometimes.
Hugs,
h. |
Soul_Blade.ville
Monday 19th March 2007 19:06 | The Coven of Echoes |
| AGAHGHAGS SO CLOSE.... excuse me while i beat.... my head... on the wall.... with frustration... and beg for you to hurry and spill what ever it is going on between harry and ginny.... i have a thought about what it is and i could be wrong but i wont know till someone explains whats happening, i dont even need to give a pointed look here do i? |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:17 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
I feel your pain, I do! The fact that I wanted you to feel that pain doesn't make up for it -- but....
The next chapter marks a turning point of sorts. That's all I can say right now.
Please, don't beat that marvelous head -- those are precious brains in there!
Take care,
h. |
KEDme
Monday 19th March 2007 19:01 | The Coven of Echoes |
| Loved this ball scene... it was straight out of Cinderella. More interruptions! Urgh! But Ginny saw his footprints, and that hopefully will mean something to her soon. More mystery, more intrigue. Can't wait till the 30th (or sooner). Excellent work. Where do I get a team like yours? I want one too. |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:14 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you -- as for the team -- they were drafted, pure and simple. I just asked and they said yes. I knew I could never do as good a job as they did!
As far as interruptions go -- we probably won't see anymore in the classic sense -- it was a feeling I wanted to imbue in the story and I've gotten to that point.
I think an early post is in our future, but I can't say.
Thanks again!
h. |
DaFalcon
Monday 19th March 2007 18:32 | The Coven of Echoes |
OMG!!! No Way! I wasn't expecting this update today. What a pleasant surprise. Going to read. Will come back tomorrow some time and give proper review.
Dee |
CrumpleHornedKiwi
Monday 19th March 2007 18:31 | The Coven of Echoes |
So close! you're such a tease!
I loved the footprints on the floor, that was cool,
As always I'm waiting with baited breath for and to get it together
And I hope that nasty Susan gets what she deserves |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:12 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Yes! I liked the footprints also!
And as for Susan.... we'll see.
Take good care,
h. |
Grandma Kate
Monday 19th March 2007 17:23 | The Coven of Echoes |
What glorious details! I loved-
'Well, he could not stand the idea of balls where one loathed one's partner. Imagine that? So in a fit of brilliance, he bewitched this opalescent floor to display the mood of whoever stands upon it.' Followed by -
'Harry stared down at his own feet. They left no trace whatsoever.' and-
'She stepped back and lifted her shoe then hesitated, perplexed at what she saw at her feet. Two pairs of footprints lay emblazoned on the floor. Crimson as fire.' True Love!
You have moved the plot along in a meaningful way with the death of Simon. So Aidan must appear, after all.
The song was perfect, as were the drinks, and the romance. Sigh!
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| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:11 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Hello my dear!
Oh, goodie -- you've posted another chapter! So after this I will go off and read that one.
I do enjoy that floor also -- kinda like a giant mood ring for your feet?!
And Aidan will neer to appear, yes.
Thanks go to Paladin for the song, RJ for the drinks (Myth for Black Death) and as far as the romance --- Ivy has helped tremendously in that department.
Take good care and thank you so for the review,
h. |
nerd2006
Monday 19th March 2007 17:22 | The Coven of Echoes |
| Ah, so close! I think you're trying to kill us all. :-P |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 17:07 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
So sorry. I do not want you dead!! The next chapter will be a turning point and hopefully not "death" worthy!
Cheers,
h. |
lantis222
Monday 19th March 2007 17:13 | The Coven of Echoes |
| I loved the crimson foot prints left behind. Though I do wonder why Harry left her just then. I almost feel jilted for Ginny. What a chapter, the 30th is just too far away, though I guess I'll just have to wait. It's intersting that Simon finally trusted her. It's so tragic. You know no matter how good this story has been all along, I think it's about to get better. As always, you did a wonderful job! |
| Sunday 25th March 2007 00:38 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Thank you, lantis!
I think many people got confused by Harry's departure, so I apologize. He saw Simon and went after him.
And as for the story getting better -- well it's definitely going to take a turn in the next chapter.
h. |
HiJane_2
Monday 19th March 2007 17:08 | The Coven of Echoes |
| Yeah! I'm so very happy! I know I say it like every week or so, but I just LOVE this story! Thank you, thank you, thank you for giving more Harry/ Ginny action! I hope we'll be seeing more of it now that they are having to be in close proximity with each other. I really loved the memories from Harry, they were so very sweet! great job and I can't wait for the 30th (I'll be crossing my fingers for the 29th) so I can read another chapter! I loved the whole floor mood reflection thing, it was so cleverly thought of and an interesting insight at the lvery least. Loved it all! ~HiJane_2 |
| Saturday 24th March 2007 16:33 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Hello HiJane2!
I'm very glad that you're happy -- I must be doing something right, yes?
Well, I think we can make you happier: more HG interaction in the next chapter as well as potentially an early posting. Bows to Iviolinist here!
As for the floor -- that was my invention -- but I could imagine it could just throw off the social dynamic if ever developed. "I thought you liked me? Your foot prints are black as tar!" Plus, I get cold feet so I'd always be sending out the wrong vibe!!
Hugs,
h. |
leiselily
Monday 19th March 2007 16:59 | The Coven of Echoes |
Oh oh oh wow! Fluff? That's full on romantic heart-rending drama, not fluff!
Loads of clues in there. I'm cringing at Ginny not wanting to hear Harry's denial. NOOOOO! She has to believe him, she has to.
Think I need to know what's going on with Susan, she's like a shadow of doom in the background at the moment. There is so much going on in this story, I don't know which thread of the plot I want to have developed next! Just as well it's up to you.
I loved the floor with it's tell-tale colouring. And Tieless!Harry grabbing Ginny for a dance. He needs to keep on with that. Cinderella indeed!
One thing - isn't Kilgraith in Scotland, not England?
This was brilliant once again. Well done and many thanks to you and your team, you are the business. |
| Saturday 24th March 2007 16:27 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Yes, Kilgraith is in Scotland. I beat my breast and beg forgiveness. This is the second time I've made that mistake so there is not excuse. Please, please forgive. I think it's an aversion to saying United Kingdom -- I like the sound of England better. Still, I am an idiot.
Hah, I feel like taking on a Mafioso accent and saying, "We are da business." I truly had some remarkable people help with this chapter: Paladin, swngblues, fritz42 and Iviolinist. It was great fun to roll up our sleeves and create this evening at the Galean Mansion.
As for Susan, information about her will be revealed in the next chapter....
Thank you so for your kind review. You keep me motivated!
h. |
fredandgeorgeweasley
Monday 19th March 2007 16:58 | The Coven of Echoes |
Oh. My. God. (and yes that was said in a horrible Janice voice ... if you watched Friends I'm sure you just shuddered with me lol.) This chapter is just ... amazing? I don't think the English language can do it justice.
I love the idea of the floor there. And the fact that it glowed red around Harry/Ginny. And yay! answers! Although, why does it always go back to Aiden? I swear he's like Dumbledore, only not. Yeah. But, they don't even know what the codes are, how are they supposed to figure it all out? But at least Aiden can help, that way maybe they'll have a shot in the dark at getting it right.
Arieds was a little odd in this chapter. Not going to lie. He was odd. I can't help but wonder just WHAT is going through that man's head. But, then again, do I really WANT to know? And, and, and ... no french tart!!! When Harry walked off in the middle of his dance with Ginny I was so sure he was going towards her and that would just ruin any hope he'd had of making progress with Ginny. Who knows, he may have; but Ginny doesn't know that and, at least in my head, that's the important thing right.
I can't help going back to what the guy said, about finding Ian's code and destroying the letter and going to Aiden. I somehow imagine no one's going to have any idea who that is in the next chapter and then Harry's just going to be like "Oh, Aiden ... here let me let me give you the life and times so far for one Friar Aiden ... what? You don't trust my knowing about him? Whyever not?" But I can't wait to see what happens next chapter!
Ya know, I never would have thought it was possible for your writing to get any more amazing than it already is. Yet with every chapter I read I am once again proven wrong. I really just cannot fathom how you do it! It's truely astounding!
Anxiously awaiting your next chapter,
♥ Kasey |
| Saturday 24th March 2007 16:22 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Oh, you do make me laugh and smile. Thank you so much -- it's a pleasure to write for readers such as you, Kasey.
Ahhhh. The Janice voice. The funny things is that I was raised in New Jersey and can do that voice very well especially when I'm back home. But I have to be with my sister and holding a glass of wine.
Yes, Aidan is important to a certain extent. The codes are too.
As for our friend, Areids. Hmmmmm. His motives are his motives. He's a fairly secretive creature.
Sorry, no Tamsyn in this chapter. She is a hoot to write -- she's in the next chapter, however.
When Harry left Ginny he was heading after Simon. He had probably seen him outside the window and went to investigate. Sorry I didn't make this clearer.
Thank you again for such a tremendous review. I can't tell you how your kindess touches me or how happy I am that you are enjoying this story.
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cwarbeck
Monday 19th March 2007 16:36 | The Coven of Echoes |
First of all, I'd like to commend you on your description of the ball. I got quite caught up in the moment you know, feeling as if I stepped back in time when lavish balls were de rigeur and all sorts of romance and intrigue could be found in every corner of the ball room.
But why, oh why, did you have to cut off Ginny just as she was about to tell Harry her reason for leaving him? Who did he see? Simon? Agh. Woman, you are just too cruel with your cliffies.
But then again, I think that Ginny's starting to realise (finally!) that Harry does still love her - truly, madly, deeply (great - you've got me quoting song lyrics ). If I were Ginny, that little speech of Harry's on the dance floor would have had me begging for him to take me back right then and there. How can she doubt his feelings about her any longer? Yay for Harry saying that he won't let her go again without a fight. I hope that Veraxlectum works long enough for Harry to get some straight answers from Ginny, so that they can have some closure over what happened between them once and for all.
And what do you mean that we have to wait until the 30th to read the next chapter? |
| Saturday 24th March 2007 16:12 | The Coven of Echoes (Author Response) |
Hello dear!
Yes, I love a ball -- who doesn't? Well, I'm sure many but it's a great vehicle to display personalities bouncing off each other. I think this chapter could have been twice as long, but I need to respect my dearest beta, lest she go on strike. Yikes!
As for cut offs, I believe this is the last of them -- at least abrupt cut offs. I tried to craft the first half of this story to have a whip lash feel -- it can irk readers -- but I wanted to create that off balance feel. Everything right now is off balance.
Ah, Truly, Madly, Deeply is one of the best romantic films -- staring Alan Rickman, himself!
As for the Veraxlectum -- it ceases to be effective when the caster dies -- it won't have anymore power on Ginny, unfortunately.
Oh, don't be angry. You know we post every 10 days. Although I think Ivy is trying to post this next one early.
Face it, we are a mutual admiration society. I adore "Getting Over Harry Potter." I am your true fangirl.
Hugs,
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