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MrRobertsIII
Tuesday 5th June 2007 08:03 | Muggle War | | Your flashback/dream sequences are a good read. However, you parts with Harry in the present feel a bit less polished. That or I just love the flashback sequences and am reading quickly through the rest to get the them. | | Tuesday 5th June 2007 17:02 | Muggle War (Author Response) | | Thank you! Those were the parts I had some trouble with because I wanted them to be interesting and enlightening. |
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