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fatcat1992
Tuesday 1st January 2008 19:08 | Look to Your Dreams | | FINSH IT WILL BE GOOD WHEN YOU DO | Stormdelver
Monday 22nd August 2005 16:18 | Look to Your Dreams | | Oh, very nice- just finished HBP and in my state I needed this- the beginning of hope again, mmm very nice to see the Ginny side of things- and very nice insite as well into her feelings. I look forward to more, keep it going you have a nice start, but maybe start to develop a deeper story arounf these emotions as well- devlop you plot line on what our pairs are doing and just how to mash them together, it would make the whole story fuller, but I like your start. |
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