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gymnastgal19 Thursday 3rd April 2008 21:24 | Adrift | nice story!
| basketkiwi Monday 10th March 2008 20:15 | Adrift | Wonderful details told with perfect, heart-breaking funeral numbness. I love some of the more random thoughts (ebony tears, the vampire in daylight, white toes curling in the grass) and the last sentence especially. Really well done! | gymnastgal19 Saturday 17th November 2007 16:50 | Adrift | awww!!! that is so cute!!!
| critmo Thursday 21st June 2007 08:36 | Adrift | What a pity that Harry doesn't seem to hav grown up as much. | Megan SQ Wednesday 20th June 2007 08:02 | Adrift | I loved the tone of this story - gentle elegy, I'd call it. Some events are too big to comprehend at first, and people try to distance themselves by paying attention to details. Remus was doing just that, in his thoughtful manner. He also comes across as very lonely until the last paragraph. Great one-shot. | ibelieveintruelove Tuesday 19th June 2007 17:21 | Adrift | Oh I really liked this story, great job! |
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