Patches
Tuesday 13th November 2007 01:45 | Curse Breakers: The Maya |
| This is really complicated. I like it. Ginny is finding more and more mysteries as the trail of Ravenclaw's Staff evolves. I look forward to Ginny interacting with Harry on their quest. I am sure there are going to be broken hearts along the way. I just hope Ginny's and Harry's aren't included. Thanks for writing such a great story. p |
| Tuesday 13th November 2007 17:04 | Curse Breakers: The Maya (Author Response) |
It is a bit complicated at this point. Between the flashbacks and main story, you've got several plots running that take time to develop without giving away too much. However, as you'll find out in the next chapter. What Harry and Ginny are searching for in the past is not much different than what they are looking for in the present.
Thanks for reviewing and reading,
Jonathan |
narumi
Friday 9th November 2007 07:50 | Curse Breakers: The Maya |
| Woo, creepy amulet. So excited to see what's next! |
| Sunday 11th November 2007 14:56 | Curse Breakers: The Maya (Author Response) |
| A bit more than creepy. Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for all the reviews. |
MartinDean
Wednesday 27th June 2007 11:50 | Curse Breakers: The Maya |
| Great story, can't wait to read more please write again soon. I love the interaction with the Mayan legends and Ginny as a curse breaker is excellent |
critmo
Sunday 24th June 2007 03:56 | Curse Breakers: The Maya |
| This is getting increasingly complicated. I certainly don't understand a thing, so I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter. |
| Tuesday 26th June 2007 20:20 | Curse Breakers: The Maya (Author Response) |
Well, I'm glad you like complicated. It is going to get a lot more complicated before things begin to worked out and then become less complicated. I hope you can hold out.
thanks for the reviews
-Jonathan |
bonbon_13
Saturday 23rd June 2007 01:59 | Curse Breakers: The Maya |
| Great job, as usual...are you going to get back to the flashback ending the 3rd chapter? It was pretty interesting |
| Saturday 23rd June 2007 06:00 | Curse Breakers: The Maya (Author Response) |
Yes. Chapter 4 and 5 were originally one chapter but it ended up as a 20K chapter, and that is too long for a single sitting for reading. So, we get a little more development of H/G in Egypt next chapter, but the story in the past follows the story in the present, so they both get cleared up at the same time, roughly.
Thanks for reading and the review. |
hedwig5221
Friday 22nd June 2007 08:45 | Curse Breakers: The Maya |
This is certainly an intriguing story. I really like it! Looking forward to more.
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| Saturday 23rd June 2007 05:58 | Curse Breakers: The Maya (Author Response) |
Chapter 5 should be posted some time next week. After that the wait will be a bit more as I've spent the last month tearing apart my outline so that the rest of the story flows better. Hopefully, by mid July Chapter 6 will be ready and then I should be back on a monthly posting schedule.
Thanks. |
Jonathan-Avery
Thursday 21st June 2007 17:54 | Curse Breakers: The Maya |
| This is probably one of my favourite chapters so far. I think it is really Caldwell who makes it for me, plus the Egyptian back story that is developing. But mainly Caldwell. He was a bit character in the initial plot but I rewrote him a bit after his interaction with Harry, and he just became fun. |
| Thursday 21st June 2007 18:00 | Curse Breakers: The Maya (Author Response) |
| Well that was stupid of me. I hit the wrong thing when trying to respond to another review. Oh well. We all make mistakes . . . |
Grandma Kate
Thursday 21st June 2007 17:20 | Curse Breakers: The Maya |
| I am glad you are posting this story at Phoenix Song. It is fascinating. |
| Thursday 21st June 2007 17:58 | Curse Breakers: The Maya (Author Response) |
| Arghh! See the review above yous. I hit the wrong thing to respond to your review. But basically, this is on of my favourite chapters. And I'm glad you are enjoying it. |
