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Wolf's Scream
Monday 2nd July 2007 07:02 | The Essence Divided | Hmmm... interesting. Curious that Ollivander didn't appear to make arrangements for them to establish contact again should he get to a point where Harry's direct involvement (e.g., in testing the new wand) might be warranted.
Looks as if theTrio *really* need to pay more attention to Moody's "Constant Vigilance" mantra. And get the order straight in the sequence: Observe, then evaluate, then act. And while I can hardly blame Hermione for not liking the fighting, it seems that the best way to do that is to be seaky enough to avoid most of the confrontations. Or perhaps there might be protective counter-measures available -- though I'd expect wards and such to be a bit involved for casual use.
Well done. [And with respect to the expected reviews, I encourage "domestic tranquility." :-}] | Sherbert
Saturday 30th June 2007 15:03 | The Essence Divided | A new story - yipee
I thought it might be Ollivander. It is interesting the way that he is never mentioned as being a possible death eater but he does refer to Voldemort as the Dark Lord in book one. It's interesting that he knows about what is happening to them in terms of Hermiones attack etc. Presumably its not been n the paper's so how does he know this? I'd be a bit worried about accepting the tent from him. Especially as it's obviously been moved probably by death eaters.
Am interested about what Hermione and Ron are keeping from Harry. Sure;y it isn't just that they are together? Also intrigued why Harry doesn't approach them (Just thought maybe the bump on Hermione isn't just the bandages... That would cause Harry to be more protective)
Am slightly concerned about Harry going to the ministry. Why is he being prosecuted for side along apparition. I thought that was acceptable for underage wizards?
Nice Prachett reference by the way...
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Thursday 28th June 2007 12:23 | The Essence Divided | | Amazing story thus far! The characterization is brilliant. | | Sunday 1st July 2007 12:08 | The Essence Divided (Author Response) | | Thanks! Here's hoping I keep it up | Grandma Kate
Sunday 24th June 2007 02:04 | The Essence Divided | This tale grows more and more interesting. The tent being on the table rather than in a cupboard in the second bathroom seems very strange. Mr Ollivander's flat seems unlikely to have a second bathroom.
Poor Harry, always having to find out secrets for himself. | | Sunday 1st July 2007 12:09 | The Essence Divided (Author Response) | Well, Harry was quick (or slow...) to realise that it was a trap - by entering Ollivander's, they warned the Death Eaters that someone had returned to the flat.
And Harry does have a bit of help - but a lot of it is up to him Poor kid...
Thanks for the review! | Melindaleo
Saturday 23rd June 2007 08:52 | The Essence Divided | | Hmm, so Harry's going to the Ministry? I'm really worried about him letting them take his wand. Hopefully, he can find a way to swing the press to his side and make Scrimgeour look bad. |
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