Patches
Tuesday 3rd July 2007 13:28 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past |
| Wow! This is quite a story. I wasn't sure how I felt about it when Draco came to and realized he had killed his own mother. I cannot believe that Harry is dead but finding out that Dudley is a wizard is quite a surprise. I look forward to more of this story. I am sure it was Remus that took Harry away. Thanks for writing. p |
| Tuesday 3rd July 2007 20:15 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like it so far. Chapter 4 should be up soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
Shade32
Tuesday 3rd July 2007 11:36 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past |
...Harry's dead? I can't see where you're going with this now, unless the prophecy protects him from being killed by anyone except Voldemort, or something.
I'll just have to stick around until the next chapter comes out, I suppose! |
| Tuesday 3rd July 2007 20:13 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past (Author Response) |
| I guess you will have to stick around - although if you gave the chapter a closer re-read, you might pick something up... Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
rach_jean
Tuesday 3rd July 2007 01:53 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past |
| Im sorry but i really dont like the way this story is so far at all...it is by far the darkest fanfic i have ever read..its great if your readers appreciate that kind of read but i dont think it should be on this fanfic site...try www.harrypotterfanfiction.net |
| Tuesday 3rd July 2007 11:13 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past (Author Response) |
| I'm sorry you feel that way. While I respect your right to an opinion, I make no apologies. This is a story about a war. War is dark. War is ugly. War rips families and friends apart, and I have no intention of "Disney-fying" it to make it easier to swallow. As far as whether or not it should be on this site, that is a decision for the site admins. |
Lily Flower
Friday 29th June 2007 13:07 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past |
| I read it again, and I still don't know what is going on! Please hurry! |
| Saturday 30th June 2007 12:49 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past (Author Response) |
| My super fantastic beta Laurabeth is working on chapter 4 as we speak, so it shouldn't be too long of a wait. |
Lily Flower
Thursday 28th June 2007 18:26 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past |
WTF?
You are clearly a good writer, also awesome on making it flow and the plot keeps twisting, but WTF? Malfoy was forced to eat his mother's heart, Dudleys a wizard ( I can buy that) but now Harry's dead? *Glares* He better not be. |
| Friday 29th June 2007 12:27 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past (Author Response) |
| Please don't hurt me. I'm pretty confident that anyone can figure out what really happened in Chapter 3 if they read it carefully. Thanks for the compliments and for reviewing. |
Frylocke
Thursday 28th June 2007 10:50 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past |
| Was it Tonks pretending to be Harry?! |
| Thursday 28th June 2007 11:17 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past (Author Response) |
| If you read the chapter carefully, you should be able to figure it out. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
lantis222
Thursday 28th June 2007 09:08 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past |
| What did you do? You can't kill Harry, it's only chapter three. Alright you're the author you can do whatever you want. Something tells me that things are not entirely what they seem. Great chapter even if you did do the unspeakable. You have to update soon and get Harry out of this. I can't wait for the next. |
| Thursday 28th June 2007 10:31 | Harry Potter and the Pawn of the Past (Author Response) |
| If you read the chapter carefully, there is one line in it that will tell you exactly what happened (okay, maybe not exactly what happened, but close enough). Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate it. |
