gymnastgal19
Sunday 11th May 2008 21:51 | Mercury |
nice chapter I wish thtat petunia took better care of harry... eve if it would have been behind vernon's back...
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gymnastgal19
Friday 11th January 2008 20:32 | Mercury |
nice story! idk it kinda didnt really seem to have that much of a plot line... unless i missed something, which i probably did... lol
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SmellyCat710
Friday 12th October 2007 06:14 | Mercury |
I really liked the begining of this story!
I hope you will update soon! |
The Boss
Thursday 11th October 2007 21:29 | Mercury |
I like the general concept of the story. Keep up the good work
The Boss |
everylittlething
Thursday 11th October 2007 08:51 | Mercury |
oh nice! if only Petunia had softened like that and given him Lily's trunk!
And this story makes Fred's death even sadder. I really enjoyed reading this. |
harry_ginnyfan
Wednesday 10th October 2007 03:25 | Mercury |
| great story! |
pixie7
Tuesday 9th October 2007 06:18 | Mercury |
A really great story
Wow Petunia it seems is human, she actually sort of apologised to Harry for the way they treated him |
pakruse
Sunday 22nd July 2007 22:40 | Mercury |
| Excellent story. I suppose I could have commented in person, but this proves that I read it. |
aurora luminis
Monday 16th July 2007 23:00 | Mercury |
| Hi! As one of the challenge authors, I want to say how much I really enjoyed your story. You make us see everything, feel it, hear it. The plot line was very simple, which gave room for meeting the characters. Being a 'character' person, I particularly enjoyed it. It was one of the better stories, one of the ones that made me think, "Chocolate frogs, I haven't a chance in the world." Thanks a million for the work and time that gave us such an enjoyable trip |
but3rcupbaby
Monday 16th July 2007 08:37 | Mercury |
| In light of the mess-up with the contest, I just wanted to let you know your's was my favorite out of all the the entries and that I voted for "Mercury". It was beautifully written and gave me a feeling of hope for H and G in DH when it comes out this Saturday! |
Tw1ggy
Thursday 12th July 2007 18:18 | Mercury |
Wow, that was a really great story! You have many wonderful descriptions and are obviously very good at visionary writing techniques. I loved how you used the ongoing inportance of mercury throughout the story. Short, sweet and beautifully written. Lovely.
Twiggy |
emicav
Thursday 12th July 2007 10:10 | Mercury |
| i really enjoyed this! ive been reading all these fan fics to give me ideas about what will happen and i think this is entirly plausible. i enjoyed the fact that you added the part about Petunia being nice to him and tipping him off about the trunk. it was very entertaining. congats!emilygail0323@aol.com |
Hoss
Tuesday 10th July 2007 17:00 | Mercury |
| A fun little story to be sure. Thanks |
DeborahSu
Tuesday 10th July 2007 16:38 | Mercury |
Wonderful imagery! I felt like I was in the house with Harry, feeling that stifling heat!!! The sort-of make-up conversation was real, the phone conversation was real--are you sure you weren't eavesdropping? ;-)
One small correction ... or something ... nobody who wants good results will try to chocolate-coat anything if it's so hot that the chocolate will melt without added heat. You'd need to put it in the refrigerator to harden, and it would get an unattractive white "bloom" on it. In addition, it'd melt all over the place when you go to serve it.
Great ending to a wonderful one-shot! |
lantis222
Monday 9th July 2007 20:40 | Mercury |
| Very good. I really liked that one. I loved Harry's decision, it's a good one. I also liked your description of Fred. Good job! |
