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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows by Ari

the_critic
Tuesday 28th August 2007 20:51
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
Yay! an update! wait, thats it??? no! I want more!!! Very interesting starting mystery with the gravestones... I hope the
hide from the search party I dont want them to be found!!! why didnt they heed the note?
"dont search for us we wont be found"


update please though! I need to know what happens next!!!
*begs* please? *begs*
Wednesday 29th August 2007 01:54Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response)
Sorry, The Critic, but my beta's gone on holidays. He'll be back by the end of September.

Don't worry, I will continue to work on it while he's gone, so that you won't be lacking for updates.

And you have no idea how good it feels to see the 'please' picketing guy in a review. All warm and fuzzamiey
MartinDean
Monday 27th August 2007 04:00
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
Enjoying the story so far, although the chapters are a little short. I like the idea of an Island for Godrics Hollow.

Looking forward to the next chapter
Monday 27th August 2007 04:24Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response)
If the chapters were longer, they wouldn't be half as good. I can only write a chapter in one sit-down, or I lose the plot, making the story-telling almost worthless (not that it isn't near-worthless anyway ). One sit-down is almost 10 minutes, so that's the longest I can do. I think my longest chapter has been a grand total of 1800 words, the longest I have. I'm afraid that if you're looking for long chapters, you're better off going to the masters - Jeconais, Viridian and Melindaleo. Those three are my favourite long-chapter authors. Highly recommended
twinklegirl
Saturday 25th August 2007 20:57
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
Oh my god!!!!!! u know when to stop!!!!! plz write the next chapter soon!! plzzzzzz.... im going to die!!!! 'unless...' what????
Sunday 26th August 2007 03:20Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response)
If there's only one good thing I can write in a story, it's a cliffhanger, ey? don't worry, it's coming soon!
arkanoth
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:27
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
I agree, the story is good so far but i hate waiting for new chapters
hurry please
Sunday 26th August 2007 03:20Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response)
It all depends on my lack of understanding with time; I tend to make Harry and the others do 4 things within 20 minutes when it should take a few hours.

veghindu101
Saturday 25th August 2007 12:22
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
awesome job. when are the next chapters coming out? and how many? i hope you're not going to make us wait a week for each chapter - i'll go crazy!
Sunday 26th August 2007 03:19Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response)
It comes through when it comes through - I have noticed, however, that reviews tend to happen more and more the longer I wait between chapters... Don't worry! I refuse to scrounge for reviews like that! It always depends on how much work I need to do!

And there's at least 20 chapters. This story should be around for a while.