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Wednesday 5th September 2007 07:14 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows | Nice improvement
did the the little sneak of a thief really think that he was going to be freed so soon and after all the trouble they had catching the disgusting little bugger. tho i must admit for a few minutes i thought that they were. going to, i should have known it was a trick.
I just happen to agree with ariesgirl end a chapter with a cliffie | | Wednesday 5th September 2007 19:09 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response) | The next one won't be a cliffie, but don't worry, it's a good chapter, to make you want more. If I do say so myself. The short cliffies, like in earlier chapters, aren't on the menu, but, I think that I have placed a good bit of suspense in the chapters.
*salutes* I shall keep your recommendation in my bag of tricks, never the less. Bear with me. Keep an eye out for chapter 11 My favourite one. | AriesGirl
Tuesday 4th September 2007 15:01 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows | Hi there!
with a little added filling, your writeing has improved.
My interest is perked. A good job well done.
I'm glad you started the chapter out cozey. Instead of stunning the poor teacher when they showed up at the door , then giving the rat some truth potion then off to the hallow!
slowing down the train does have the benifit of a little sight seeing.
for a little challenge... end one of your chapters with a cliff hanger. then check your reviews. It's alot of fun.
cudoes! on a good chapter.
| | Tuesday 4th September 2007 17:54 | Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (Author Response) | Don't worry, there's plenty of cliffies coming up. I tend to leave most chapters on them.
Hollow, not Hallow. The Hallows have yet to make an apperance
Thanks for the review! I think I've improved, if not on these chapters, then on later ones.
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