J-TGriffy
Tuesday 13th March 2012 14:54 | Since Feeling is First |
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bleeblahblee
Wednesday 7th April 2010 11:40 | Since Feeling is First |
| This was a great story, I almost wish it wasn't over |
| Wednesday 7th April 2010 17:17 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! This was my first response to DH less than a month after it came out. I *had* to get H/G together as soon as possible. Thanks for reading! |
sherylyn
Monday 28th December 2009 22:47 | Since Feeling is First |
I don't usually review my author's ch's/stories all that often on-site, mostly b/c I've usually said most everything imaginable as we go through the files! But tonight, I re-read this fic for the 1st time in *eons* (maybe even since we'd 1st posted it!), partially b/c I found out today that two of my daughter's friends (who are HP nuts) tend to like H/Hr in fanfic (b/c they read at the "wrong" sites, obviously ), so I was looking for fics to "teach them the error of their ways"... And dang it, Mary, you went and made a hormonal woman cry! LOL!! Gah, this is just pure perfection. Every scene, every emotion is just *perfect* for this part of their lives, and if these kids don't come read it, I'm gonna spank 'em!! (or put 'em in detention w/Filch!!)
Seriously. Your "voice" for Harry and Ginny is just *so* true and so real and so THEM, it's breath-taking. I can't love it more!! |
| Thursday 31st December 2009 09:24 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
Hee - I'd love to convert a few H/Hrs if possible! You know, I don't think I've read this story since I wrote it. It's not my favorite probably because it was so painful (in a way) to write I'm glad I had a chance to re-read it since I'm working on my other H/G story right now. I'm not keeping a lot of the details from this story, but I do like the emotions of H/G here - how they slowly found their way back to happiness. (Same with the story I'm writing now!) I wish I had it done to send to you right now! I hope to do more this weekend. I think you'll like it.
Thanks again for the review and for *always* being so supportive of my writing. *hugs* |
moralitas
Friday 28th August 2009 07:36 | Since Feeling is First |
this is a great story! is did have a few problems with it, mostly with the..i dunno...distance between harry and ginny. i didnt fully appreciate the restraunt idea, but the rest was fantasic. i like the size of the story. i dont like short stories that are under 7000 words, and this one was perfect!
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| Saturday 29th August 2009 15:50 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Harry was very detatched at the end of DH and I took my cues from the ending (before the epilogue) Hopefully H/G and the Weasleys didn't have such a hard time after the war, but JKR did leave a big mess of issues to address. Thanks for reading! |
kash2210
Saturday 4th October 2008 18:13 | Since Feeling is First |
| A beautful end to a wonderful story! |
Wild Magelet
Saturday 16th August 2008 03:44 | Since Feeling is First |
You write so gloriously optimistically ; it's wonderful. I honestly think you have a gift, Mary, for making people feel better through your writing. I was in need of a pick-me-up tonight and I decided to load PhoenixSong, for the first time in about a year!, on a whim. I found this story while doing a post-DH search and settled in happily.
Fred's star would dance and Tonks' star would twinkle and Remus' star would be difficult to see at first and then would glow brighter as the night wore on . . .
I think that has to be my favourite quote; it captures their characters so perfectly. |
| Monday 18th August 2008 18:19 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad this story was a pick-me-up - that has to be the best compliment a reader can give me, since so often that's what I want in a book/story. I know there are a lot of aftermath stories out there - and I think it's because everyone wanted more of a transition from the battle to the epilogue. This was my attempt. Thanks for reading! *hugs* |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 26th April 2008 10:50 | Since Feeling is First |
this was cute! great way for harry and ginny to spend their day otgehter!
haha that is a great idea! just make a nonstop story about h/g and their lives that would be sweet!
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| Monday 28th April 2008 06:57 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| You know, it wouldn't be that hard to write a nonstop story about H/G and their lives. They're both so interesting to me. Thanks for reading! |
Hollu
Monday 21st April 2008 22:57 | Since Feeling is First |
| Loved it. Enough said. |
harry_ginnyfan
Sunday 3rd February 2008 20:30 | Since Feeling is First |
A very sweet story! Are you going to had anymore to this story?
I hope so, good job! Cheers!
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| Monday 4th February 2008 06:33 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I haven't written a sequel - JKR is making it too hard to keep up with what the post-Hogwarts world should be. I do have two other H/G stories that take place after this one - Mr. and Mrs. Potter - and Three Trips on the Knight Bus (it's at SIYE) Thanks for reading! |
D.A.D.A.chik
Tuesday 27th November 2007 06:11 | Since Feeling is First |
| aw! when i was reading this my heart actully skipped a beat! harry + ginny = |
| Tuesday 27th November 2007 06:31 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. I was craving more H/G at the end of DH and had to write it. Thanks for reading! |
PhoenixFyre
Monday 8th October 2007 22:39 | Since Feeling is First |
| I love your writing! I've read all of your stories. My favorite is still Red is the Heart. But this story was great too! It made me laugh then it made me cry. You were right on, laughter after tears is a miraculous thing. Thanks for the fantastic read! |
Delani
Monday 24th September 2007 21:51 | Since Feeling is First |
hahaha "Dale-your-waiter-for-today" Priceless. You *are* a master of words, connoisseur of language.
I told myself visits to fanfic would be far and in between after DH, but lo and behold, I return again and again for you. *sigh*. Well, if there's ever more, I'll be reading.
Del |
| Tuesday 25th September 2007 07:26 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! I had fun writing that scene. I'm working on a missing moment right now, so there will be more. I can't imagine writing a big long epic anytime soon, though. But I'll never say never. Thanks for reading and letting me know! |
Felix Felicis
Wednesday 19th September 2007 18:12 | Since Feeling is First |
| Well, I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. The end in particular was just beautiful, with Harry and Ginny sitting under the stars enjoying the night and each other's company. It was a really classic scene that was fluffy but realistic at the same time. You did a good job of mixing in the good and the bad, just as what happens in life. One moment we're sad, the next we're laughing at a friend's joke, and the next we're holding hands with someone we love. Great job on the storytelling and thanks for sharing this piece with us! |
| Thursday 20th September 2007 06:57 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! It was the mixing of emotions that was so hard to portray - getting the balance right. I needed a strong visual of H/G at the end and the meteor showers seemed to be the right scene. Thanks for letting me know what worked. |
lantis222
Thursday 13th September 2007 09:44 | Since Feeling is First |
| Are you sure it can't just go on and on and on... I do love your writing. That was wonderful, I absolutely loved it, wonderful job! |
| Thursday 13th September 2007 13:48 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! I know - this really is the beginning for H/G. Thanks for reading! |
Grandma Kate
Sunday 9th September 2007 09:30 | Since Feeling is First |
Much as I have loved reading this story as soon as it came out, I think it is even better in 'one big gulp'. It flows together really well and I agree that St Margarets has nineteen years to keep the saga going.
Any story with Days of Destiny and romantic coffee mugs is dear to my heart. If Harry already has one that says, 'Someone at Hogwarts Loves Me.' from his birthday last year, he won't have to spend endless hours trying to find one of them to drink coffee out of. But I'd guess Kingsley will give him an assistant to be his "gofer". |
| Sunday 9th September 2007 18:53 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it all at once. It's rather long for a three part story, but I really did need the space to launch all of those ships.
I love to think of Harry looking at his mug. I just know he would, sentimental soul that he is. Thanks for reading - Again! |
CrumpleHornedkiwi
Saturday 8th September 2007 03:21 | Since Feeling is First |
Fantastic as always Mary. You really do need to continue this on.
I love how you weave all the details of your Potterverse throughout all your stories and nothing seems out of place. I love seeing all my fav's show up in cameo's - Lee, Oliver, Angelina.
Can I start up a chant: WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE .......
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| Saturday 8th September 2007 04:13 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| LOL - they do have good icons here. LJ should get those. I'm glad you liked the story. I can't seem to leave NZ out of anything these days. I wonder why? Thanks for reading! *hugs* |
rebekah_sc
Friday 7th September 2007 19:55 | Since Feeling is First |
Oh, freaking, WOW. That was AMAZING. There's so much to say about it, but I think it's been said. The close was perfect...it's really hard to end a good story in just the right way, but...the last line made me cry...
So, so well done. Thank you |
| Saturday 8th September 2007 04:11 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I had a terrible time with the ending, so I'm gald it worked for you. Thanks for reading and for letting me know. |
minervarocks
Friday 7th September 2007 18:37 | Since Feeling is First |
| I think the story was wonderful! So sweet and filled with laughter. I agree with the Beta note-I would love to see more of Harry courting Ginny. Loved, loved, loved the restaurant scene-they should go back there for their engagement dinner-the penguins could carry out the ring! |
| Saturday 8th September 2007 04:10 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| LOL - if Harry gave her a diamond, the penguins could carry out the 'ice'. What a good idea! I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for reading! |
QuidditchLover
Thursday 6th September 2007 19:50 | Since Feeling is First |
once again, AMAZING! i was very mad that we didnt get to see the harry ginny reunion. i enjoyed this one. i have now officially read all of your stories. you are most definitly my favorite authro so far. please keep writing!!
emilygail0323@aol.com |
| Friday 7th September 2007 08:42 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Wow! You've read all of my stories? That's a lot. Thank you. I was happy to give them a reunion since JKR wouldn't/couldn't. They are my OTP. |
akissinacrisis
Thursday 6th September 2007 17:05 | Since Feeling is First |
| Oh, and - Harry's thoughts about "foreign food" were alarmingly perfect. Considering who he grew up with, I suspect Harry would be inclined to regard pasta as "strange foreign food"! |
| Friday 7th September 2007 08:41 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Yes, Aunt Petunia didn't seem like an adventurous cook! Old habits die hard, I guess. Luckily Ginny can get Harry out of his meat-potato-veg diet. |
akissinacrisis
Thursday 6th September 2007 17:03 | Since Feeling is First |
Just lovely. I love forget-me-nots.
One thing that I'd feel bad about if I didn't point out: Harry calls Mr Weasley "sir", which is a big Americanism. Anyway, I really enjoyed this whole thing. You should be proud of it. |
| Friday 7th September 2007 08:39 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
The sir was a nervous tic. on Harry's part - since he does that in canon, I didn't think it was out of character. (Only people in the Southern US or in the military use "sir" a lot -it's not something you hear from kids or adults north of the Mason-Dixon)
I like forget-me-nots, too! And sapphires. |
yiota
Thursday 6th September 2007 12:22 | Since Feeling is First |
I've been reading your stories for quite a while, but this is the first time that I review. I really love your stories, but this one really is special, perhaps because it takes all the canon into consideration. All of your stories have made me cry at some point and this was no exception. At least this time you didn't kill anyone, it was JKR I know you have completed this story, but don't you think that you should show us more than how the characters get over Fred's death? Just a thought.
Thank you for sharing this story, you did a great job |
| Thursday 6th September 2007 13:08 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
I'm so glad you did review! And I think JKR killed off quite enough people! I wouldn't want to add to the number.
You're right - it's a long road ahead for some of the characters - George is the longest, I think. And that would require a much longer story. Thanks for reading and letting me know. I appreciate it. |
ravenclawchaser66
Thursday 6th September 2007 08:56 | Since Feeling is First |
Great ending to the story. The restaurant scene was interesting- particularly the live animals. And the end had me grinning like an idiot in the middle of the law library. I like how you kept this story connected to the Lee Jordan and New Zealand ones. It adds a little something extra, I think. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Thanks for writing!
Jay |
| Thursday 6th September 2007 13:01 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
I don't know if it shows a lack of imagination to connect all of my stories or not. It makes it easier for me to keep the details straight.
I'm glad someone could smile in a law library! Thanks for taking the time to review. |
Lily Flower
Thursday 6th September 2007 02:18 | Since Feeling is First |
Loved the chapter! Brilliant. I love the first time you say 'I love you' It is so sweet and just so wonderful. And then it gets better and better if you found the right one! And we all know Ginny and Harry are PERFECT for each other!
Also I love how you are able to write so wonderfully. You had a completely different story, yet you are able to write another one, completely different and still add facts that make it undeniably yours. Congrats and having mad skills!
Lils |
| Thursday 6th September 2007 04:06 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Yes, I think that I love you moment is special and it was nice (in a way) that JKR didn't include it so we could devise our moment in fan fic. That's nice to know I have a style. I just can't resist the normal life details like soap operas and mugs. Thanks for reading! |
mexpems
Wednesday 5th September 2007 23:17 | Since Feeling is First |
| Great story, you should keep going, its really good, its true you 19 years to play with |
| Thursday 6th September 2007 04:00 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| LOL - it would end up being Days of Destiny - the H/G story. Yes, JKR left us a lot of material and story lines to play with. Thanks for reading! |
Yakshaver
Wednesday 5th September 2007 22:05 | Since Feeling is First |
| Beautiful work, as I've come to expect from you. I believe I commented to one of the earlier parts about how nicely you handle the reality of loss; that certainly carries through here. But as I write this, about half a day after reading part 3 and without reviewing it, here's what sticks in my mind: The description of the meal was fantastic (also mouth-watering in places) --- but, having grown up with a mother whose idea spicy food was to use an onion in the beef stew, I was most struck by Harry's first encounter with Indian food. I also liked one thing that was absent from the story: When Harry's gift is so much more expensive then Ginny's, she doesn't get weird about it. Which is as it should be: they're past that. |
| Thursday 6th September 2007 03:59 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
I'm glad some of the last chapter stuck with you - there was so much there that I was worried about overwhelming readers with so much new detail. LOL - I grew up with the same kind of cooking background - so I had to research that restaurant scene.
I want that necklace Harry gave to Ginny - Ceylon Sapphires are gorgeous! And yes, Ginny doesn't have the same hangups about money as Ron does since like you say, they're past that. Thank you for reading and thanks for reviewing. It's very helpful to know what stuck with readers. |
dollface
Wednesday 5th September 2007 19:31 | Since Feeling is First |
| i loved this chapter! Are you thinking of writing more for Harry And Ginny because it was really really good! |
| Thursday 6th September 2007 03:55 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I don't have any more plans for H/G now - but I always end up writing them! They're addictive! |
nerd2006
Wednesday 5th September 2007 17:27 | Since Feeling is First |
| Aw, how cute! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 17:32 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. Thanks! |
narumi
Wednesday 5th September 2007 17:10 | Since Feeling is First |
| This was fan-tabulous! I loved it! What a day!!! It's like the best parts of your fics, all wrapped up! I actually haven't read R&L yet (I was saving it), and it's been a while since LJ, so I'm definitely going to have to go and read them now! *sigh* I know you've got Ron the Builder coming up- is that going to sort-of pick up where this takes off? And since RtB & the NZ Chronicles are rather linked, how are you dealing with the merge? Like is RtB going to be the sequel to NZC or to DH? Sorry to bug you with so many questions you wouldn't necessarily want to answer in a review reply! GAH I LOVE YOUR WORK! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 17:32 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
I don't mind answering in a review reply. As far as Ron the Builder goes, I can't use most of it, since JKR's interview - but then she contradicted herself on the webchat - so I don't know what to think. I was thinking I could take parts of the story that I've already written (and haven't posted) and turn into a three part story like this one. So it would follow DH not NZ Chronicles. I'm also thinking about a missing moment and a Hufflepuff fic. So who knows? Of course H/G is still my first love.
Anyway, thanks for reading and thanks for all of your nice comments. They're very encouraging! |
mary-v
Wednesday 5th September 2007 15:30 | Since Feeling is First |
| This was an absolutely lovely story! ^^ You always blow me away with your never ending talent! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 15:58 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Thank you. You always write the nicest reviews. |
pyromain
Wednesday 5th September 2007 12:43 | Since Feeling is First |
| Another great and lovely work from a true artist. thanks for sharing it. |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 13:21 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. I struggled with it! Thanks for reading! |
Ginny WcPr
Wednesday 5th September 2007 12:32 | Since Feeling is First |
OMG, really great, beautiful, i dont really have the words to express, but its really good.
forever |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 13:20 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! Thanks. |
RIPHedwig
Wednesday 5th September 2007 10:43 | Since Feeling is First |
| ahh, im so sad that this is over. It was a really mint story and I was on tenterhooks waiting for the last installment, but if ur not gonna continue with this one, please keep writing anyway! i love ur style! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 11:35 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Well, it had to end somewhere, although there are lots of avenues to explore with these characters, that's for sure. Thanks for reading! |
Melindaleo
Wednesday 5th September 2007 07:03 | Since Feeling is First |
Sniff. Aww, bravo, Mary. I sat down to read this already sniffling because I'd just put my youngest on the Kindergarten bus for the first time, and I'm still sniffling at the end. I loved the hints of George and Padma, and really enjoyed Harry and Ginny's stuffy dinner. The part that got to me the most though, was buying a new owl. Sigh. Life moves on indeed.
RIP |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 07:48 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
Oh, what an emotional day! My son left today for 4th grade, and I'm feeling a little sad since we were together all summer. But that kindergarten first day has to be the worst.
I'm glad you liked Harry buying a new owl - I really think he needed a whole year before he could take that step.
The dinner was fun to think about, but a pain to write, since I don't dine out too often anymore. LOL.
Thanks for reading. I hope you do something for you today. *hugs* |
DaFalcon
Wednesday 5th September 2007 06:16 | Since Feeling is First |
Fantastic as always. There were just too many wonderful happenings in this third installment to give proper comment, but I would like to say how much I thought your Harry and Ginny remided me of your NZ Harry and Ginny and that was very kewl.
I think I may have to read your Roger and Lisa story just for George and Padma. And I enjoyed the little scene between Angelina and Oliver. I can so see that happening.
Life goes on. Even when our loved one has passed on, life still seems to travel forward. George, who is a favorite of mine in the HP universe, seemed like he's coping very well. My heart still breaks for him though. My daughter keeps asking me who I think the mother of George's son, Freddy, is. I think I'll tell her Padma. ^_^
I'm looking forward to more wonderful stories from you in the future.
Dee |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 07:50 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| There's quite a bit of George/Padma in Roger and Lisa, since Lisa and Padma are best friends. I think you might like it. Yes, life does go on, but it's hard to let go some times. Thanks for reading! |
MartinDean
Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:50 | Since Feeling is First |
Another great chapter, I loved the restaurant scenes and an owl that laughs like Sirius .... brilliant.
Can't wait for more!! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 05:32 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| This is it for now, but I'm sure I'll write more H/G in the future. Thanks for reading and always leaving such nice reviews. |
parakletos
Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:34 | Since Feeling is First |
Up to your usual standard as ever and lots of wonderful references to your own universe as well
A couple of points:
"They're a new, untried team, although Captain Gwenog Jones is back as Seeker."
I could be wrong, but I always thought that she was a Beater not a Seeker.
I also wondered why you used Ceylon rather than Sri Lanka.
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| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:45 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
There wasn't anything about her position beyond Captain on the Lexicon, but canon may have mentioned it. Since I needed a Seeker with a name, I gave her that position.
The wizarding world seems to use the "old maps" for place names (Assyria) so I went with Ceylon. At estate sales they do call them Ceylon sapphires - and their gorgeous.
I'm glad you reviewed - I've been worried about you since you deleted your journal. |
pixie7
Wednesday 5th September 2007 03:45 | Since Feeling is First |
Thank you for a really marvellous chapter as always
i miss hedwig just as much as Harry, she was a bright owl that provided a great source of comfort & companionship to Harry will he lived with his dreadful aunt, uncle & Dudley. It was really shocking to have read in DH that Hedwig was killed. I'm glad that Harry has another owl, that is unusual, it even has an unusual name Q
it was nice to know that Harry & ginny got to spend their day together. I loved the restaurant, that made me laugh.
the match was entertaining. itwas nice to have read about some very familiar faces as well. I miss Fred, it just doesnt feel right to just say george if you know what i mean, as it has always been Fred & george the two pranksters of Hogwarts
Anyway i hope you keep on writing more fanfic, because you are really good at it. Till your next fanfic Au revoire (ps: mind my sp, in a bit of a hurry) |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:42 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I was so sad about Hedwig - so I was glad to include her death here - and to find the right owl for Harry now that she's gone. Yes, Fred left a huge hole in the canon universe and I didn't want to disregard it even on H/G's fluffy day. Thanks for reading and for your detailed review! |
icegirl
Wednesday 5th September 2007 03:29 | Since Feeling is First |
That was fabulous! And the restaurant scene was ! The end scene was very sweet!
But it`s going to continue isn`t it? or was this the end!
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| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:39 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| This was the end of this particular story. I'm sure I'll find more to write about with H/G, though. Thanks for reading! |
jbr
Wednesday 5th September 2007 02:59 | Since Feeling is First |
| Loved your complete story. Fills in lot of the gaps left in DH, 19 years later. |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:38 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm was happy to fill in a few of those gaps. Thanks for reading! |
myketje
Wednesday 5th September 2007 01:45 | Since Feeling is First |
It was brilliant and beautiful! Lovely ending!!
Hop you'll write more like this!!
xx
Mee |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:38 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad the ending worked. It was the most difficult part to write. Thanks for reading and letting me know. |
arios
Wednesday 5th September 2007 00:43 | Since Feeling is First |
Lovely! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:35 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
lenzlaw1
Wednesday 5th September 2007 00:38 | Since Feeling is First |
| It's also sort of funny, while I was reading part 3, I was listening to music and the song You're My Best Friend (by Queen) came on as it got to the end when Harry and Ginny exchanged gifts. I don't know if you've heard this song, but it really seems to fit Harry/Ginny quite well |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:35 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I love when that happens - the music fits what's going on. It's been a hundred years since I've listened to Queen - I'll have to check it out. Thanks for letting me know! |
lenzlaw1
Wednesday 5th September 2007 00:02 | Since Feeling is First |
Who knew that a 9500 word chapter could read so easy, heh. The restaurant scene was great, and you're right, the ties between each character are quite intricate and it takes something like Fred's death to really shine a bright light on those ties. The ending almost brought me to tears, I must say. It was the essence of Harry and Ginny. I loved the mug and Harry's description of why he chose the forget-me-not. Great stuff, as usual. :-)
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| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:34 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I know it's so long - I tried to cut, but I needed a lot of room to describe their very busy day together. I'm just glad it didn't drag (that's hard to tell after writing for two weeks straight) I was a little teary at the end, too. H/G are such great characters. Thanks for reading! |
bookish327
Tuesday 4th September 2007 21:29 | Since Feeling is First |
I love all your work!!! You really ought to be a published author (besides on the internet), you are THAT good.
In the A/N of Part One, you wrote that this was a three-part story, but it's still listed as a WIP here in Part 3. Does that mean there will be more than three parts? (I'm hoping you'll answer in the affirmative, since I can't get enough of your fic.) Even if this particular one is over, please keep writing more fic for us, your ardent fans. (I know, I'm gushing, but I mean it. :-) ) |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:31 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Bless your heart, Sherry just forgot to put this in the completed category. I'm sure I'll write more H/G in the future - they're that addictive to me. My husband wants me to write for money. LOL. We'll see - but for now, thanks for reading and letting me know. |
snuffles007
Tuesday 4th September 2007 21:29 | Since Feeling is First |
| Excellent story! I really liked the gift that Ginny bought Harry. It was the perfect device to get to the end here. I can't wait for the next story! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:30 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I wanted something that didn't cost too much (since the Weasleys really wouldn't have a lot of money after Arthur not working) but was still something Harry wanted and needed. Thanks for reading! |
dcgirl
Tuesday 4th September 2007 21:18 | Since Feeling is First |
| I really enjoyed this chapter! I think you gave a realistic picture of family and friends grieving. |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:28 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like it! Grieving is not my favorite topic, but it's a part of life and now part of canon. Thanks for reading! |
MandaEvelyn
Tuesday 4th September 2007 21:16 | Since Feeling is First |
I'm so sad to see this story end. I know that you were very up front about this being a three chapter fic, but........... I really want a fourth chapter! I'm dying to know what is said in the papers about Harry being sited on what was very obviously a date. And how Ginny reacts to being trust into the lime light becaue of it.
Is there any chance of that happening? Maybe a series of one-shots like your other HP-verse? Please. Just think about it. Pretty please! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:28 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Bless you, after reading this very long chapter you want more. LOL - Sherry just forgot to change the category. I'm sure I'll want to write more H/G - they're addictive. So I won't say never. And I did set up a lot of threads to be explored, didn't I? Thanks for reading! |
stardust610
Tuesday 4th September 2007 21:16 | Since Feeling is First |
| This is really an amazing story. I love all the emotions in it and how you included all those characters during the Quidditch match. I like the "twin" connection between George and Padma.. cute It's such a wonderful transition for Deathly Hallows! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:26 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I think we all needed a transition from DH! I know I did. My friend, Gabriella Du Sult wrote a beautiful scene where Padma stands with George over Fred's body. I just had to include them in this story. Thanks for reading! |
ibelieveintruelove
Tuesday 4th September 2007 21:03 | Since Feeling is First |
| Oh that was a beautiful chapter. The beginning was light and fluffy and funny; and then end was sweet and loving and romantic. It's just so cute, congrats on a job well done! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:24 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! I was happy to give H/G a fun day together (and a meaningful night) Thanks for reading. |
anniepaulie
Tuesday 4th September 2007 20:17 | Since Feeling is First |
| Well, I love all Kiwi facts:p Great fic, again, which is not much of a surprise. |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:22 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| LOL - I did so much crazy research for NZ that it keeps spilling out in odd ways. Thanks for reading! |
Indigo
Tuesday 4th September 2007 20:09 | Since Feeling is First |
| Your story has brought joy to my romantic soul. Thank you so very much! I admire your writing style and hope to enjoy many more of your stories. Well done! |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:22 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad this very long chapter brought you some joy. I love those kind of books, (for romantic soul) so it makes me happy to read a comment like that. Thanks. |
brios
Tuesday 4th September 2007 19:58 | Since Feeling is First |
| Oh wow, this was beautifull to read. Thank you. I really enjoy every tear I shed while reading the end of this chapter. And I also think that George and Padma could be a possible couple. |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:21 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I felt a little teary writing the end of the chapter. I do think H/G deserve a beautiful love story so that makes me happy to hear. George (like Ron) can handle someone intelligent. I just like that pairing. Thanks for reading! |
blue artemis
Tuesday 4th September 2007 19:05 | Since Feeling is First |
| That was so amazingly sweet. |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:18 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. Thanks! |
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Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:44 | Since Feeling is First |
| What a marvelous chapter. I really enjoyed your depiction of Harry and Ginny spending their day together. Especially effective were the small touches throughout showing the extent of the havoc caused by Voldemort and his Death Eaters. Each glimpse reinforced the last. The whole effect was very moving. Added to the awkward bits of conversation as they all tried to skate around Fred's death after the match, they provided a somber counterpoint to the fluff of the narrative; a delightful mix of sorrow and joy. This final chapter really elevates the piece as a whole. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. |
| Wednesday 5th September 2007 04:16 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Oh, thank you for all of the specifics in your review! At one point when I was writing this I thought I had so many separate details that I had created quiet a mess. It's hard to counterbalance fluff and geniune angst (that isn't going to change) Anyway, thanks for reading and letting me know what worked. |
ChaoticK
Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:28 | Since Feeling is First |
As always,
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Wonderfully done - I'm simply speechless. |
| Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:31 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. You're probably worn out because it was so long. Thanks for reading! |
snarkhunter
Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:25 | Since Feeling is First |
I admit, when I saw George & Lee together here, for a moment I thought you were going to go the Mapleandmahogany route and have a nice George/Lee pairing.
Alas.
Chaser’s gloves that actually fit her small hands is a wonderful gift. I don't think people realize how hard it is to find gloves that fit when you have childlike hands. I often buy my gloves in children's stores.
Also, the penguins following the goats? HILARIOUS. A stroke of pure genius. I love it. There should *always* be penguins in your stories.
One minor thing--wasn't Edgar Bones the one who was in the Order the first time 'round, and was killed? Or am I misremembering that? |
| Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:31 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
LOL - I'm glad you enjoyed the penguins. I thought they were fun. Yes, Edgar Bones was one of the Order members. I should have thought of a different name for Susan's dad. Hmm. I might change that so it's not confusing.
LOL - no Lee is taken in my world - although I can see why some people like the pairing. At least they like each other compared to *shudder* Draco/Harry. |
Kezzabear
Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:20 | Since Feeling is First |
| Oh that was so cool...loved it. Don't even know where to start with what I loved, just ALL of it! It's all fluffy and squishy adn funny and romantic...awwwwwwwwww |
| Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:24 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I don't blame you for not knowing where to start - it's a looong chapter. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading! |
bbnaz
Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:03 | Since Feeling is First |
ACK! The food description made me famished! Wonderfully done and so precise.
I loved the day together and the way you finished it. Your universe is intricate also and I love visiting it. |
| Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:23 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked the food descriptions - that took forever to write! LOL - I don't frequent fancy restaurants. Thanks for your kind review(s)! |
DebbieO
Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:00 | Since Feeling is First |
| Awesome! I can't wait to reread it all in one sitting. You're right about the detail and all the people touched by one life. You brought that out very well by bringing some minor characters back into play. It was lifelike. |
| Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:22 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I think this is why it took me so long to write this part - it required a lot of detail and description and I set myself up for a lot of loose ends to tie off. Anyway, I'm glad it turned out okay. Thanks for reading! |
acciobook
Tuesday 4th September 2007 17:51 | Since Feeling is First |
I love this story. Actually I love the way you write as a general rule. You do a really great character point of view - kind of like the author Suzanne Brockmann.
This was just excellent. Very worth the wait. |
| Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:21 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| Oh, that wait. Between vacation and trying to get this right, it was a long delay, I know. I'll have to check out Suzanne Brockman - I've heard of her, but haven't read anything. Thanks for reading and your kind review. |
Kamalia
Tuesday 4th September 2007 17:18 | Since Feeling is First |
| Ahh...just what a person needs after a long day! Lovely. I really hope you get some more fluff up here soon! This was perfectly brilliant - you do an amazing job of tying everything together at the end. Cheers! |
| Tuesday 4th September 2007 18:19 | Since Feeling is First (Author Response) |
| I'm glad it felt tied together - that was the part I had a hard time with. Thanks for reading! |
