hoss
Wednesday 26th September 2007 09:25 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| Very well started. I hope to see much more of this story. Thanks |
mexpems
Tuesday 25th September 2007 20:36 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| Great work, excellent way of telling the story after the war, can wait for the next chapters to come out, |
brios
Monday 24th September 2007 22:43 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| Awesome! excellently (hope that's a word!) written, nice flow to the story. The first one I read where Harry shares his memory of his final confrontation with Ginny which I think was very well done, specially the part when Ginny appears to give him that kiss, I love that scene in the book, when his final though was her, and know I love it here. |
lantis222
Monday 24th September 2007 17:00 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| Hi, I really liked it! I can't wait to find out where you go with this. I imagine that it was hard for Dumbledore to touch Harry's life and yet not at the same time. Update soon, I can't wait to read it! |
| Monday 24th September 2007 18:56 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams (Author Response) |
Thank you!
Your comment on Dumbledore's feelings got me thinking. I've never seen a fic from the perspective of someone in a portrait. That would be pretty interesting... |
but3rcupbaby
Monday 24th September 2007 16:15 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
What a wonderful beginning to a Post DH fic! I've been very selective about the fics I read since DH came out, as I found the last book to be so incredible, but I can definitely say that I will continue to read this one. Can't wait for an update!!!
-But3rcupbaby |
Reader622
Monday 24th September 2007 15:55 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| This was great but I think you should focus just a tiny bit more on when he died because that is a huge part in the story: |
Delfino
Monday 24th September 2007 14:56 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| Awww!!!!! This was very sweet! Well, not entirely obviously becuase of Ginny watching Harry 'die'.....but I'm sure you understand what I mean! Great job! Keep 'em coming! |
jeanne
Monday 24th September 2007 10:19 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| Since this is a WIP, I shall be back. If the rest of the fic, assuming that you have it well in hand, is as good as this chapter, I will stay tuned to the updates. |
| Monday 24th September 2007 10:25 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams (Author Response) |
| Thank you! That's very high praise - I'll try to live up to it! |
IxLovexSiriusx
Monday 24th September 2007 04:31 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
awww i love it!
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snavewun
Sunday 23rd September 2007 22:35 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
Why didn't Harry show her Snape's memories? They later name one of their children after him, for Heaven's sake! Harry feels he is one of the bravest men he has ever known. Those memories illustrate that. That is why Snape showed Harry, to vindicate Snape.
That is also the reason Harry has a lot of respect for him, enough to honor his request and not show anyone else those memories. |
| Monday 24th September 2007 06:24 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams (Author Response) |
I was going to answer this, but you said it for me. I felt that Snape could be vindicated by Harry explaining what he saw in Snape's memories, without actually showing them to anyone.
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snavewun
Sunday 23rd September 2007 22:34 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| Great start! Look foward to reading more! |
Arnel
Sunday 23rd September 2007 21:59 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| I really like this story, it's a nice first chapter that makes me want to read more. Your characterization of both Harry and Ginny are spot-on and I can easily believe that Harry wanted to be open and honest with her in just this manner. My opinion of Harry's integrity rose even higher than it already was when he honors Severus Snape the way he does. I think that is the highlight of this chapter for me. Well done! |
ginnypotter7
Sunday 23rd September 2007 21:43 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| I really loved this chapter. I think it definitely keeps Ginny and Harry moving forward and closer. I am a big H/G fan so any story that draws them closer together and they're happy I love to read. Thank you for a wonderful story. Will there be more? |
| Monday 24th September 2007 06:21 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams (Author Response) |
| Thank you! There's plenty more. I've got the first six chapters written and in the process of being Beta-ed. |
dcgirl
Sunday 23rd September 2007 18:46 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| Excellent! |
BaileyIC
Sunday 23rd September 2007 18:39 | Harry Potter and the Castle of Dreams |
| Why didn't Harry show her Snape's memories? They later name one of their children after him, for Heaven's sake! Harry feels he is one of the bravest men he has ever known. Those memories illustrate that. That is why Snape showed Harry, to vindicate Snape. |
