bronyb
Friday 30th December 2011 12:06 | Longing |
| i LOVED it! more please!!! |
GinnyWeasley4ever37
Wednesday 15th June 2011 17:12 | Longing |
So sad!
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clare
Tuesday 1st December 2009 23:37 | Longing |
| Best one shot i've ever read. |
| Tuesday 1st January 2002 05:07 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you - i am rather fond of this one too |
creativeartist
Saturday 6th December 2008 13:57 | Longing |
| should force to get back togeher with her. |
| Friday 3rd July 2009 22:46 | Longing (Author Response) |
| well its a canon fic so we know everything works on in the end |
snuggle the muggle
Tuesday 7th October 2008 06:45 | Longing |
| I just wanted to let you know that someone has rec’d your story and I have posted a link to it in the new HP LJ community http://community.livejournal.com/hpmssgmoments, or Harry Potter Missing Moments, as well as its search site. Your story fits nicely into canon and makes a nice addition to our archives. Please feel free to come over and take a look at what we are doing and your entry (posted under "Dogs of War"). We are a small group at the moment, but we hope to get your story some new readers and some new reviews as we grow. |
| Wednesday 8th October 2008 05:06 | Longing (Author Response) |
| Thank you for letting me know and thank you to the person who rec'd it. |
blue_and_white_witch
Sunday 31st August 2008 07:49 | Longing |
| Oh my, Oh my, this is favourite one so far - it is just perfect and has everything, the happy, the sad, the laughs, the tears not to mention some truely great characterization! |
| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 05:49 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you, this is one of my personal favourites too. |
bazza28
Tuesday 3rd June 2008 15:00 | Longing |
| an amazing story just so moving and the injustice of the situation is horrible. hard to imagine what it would be like to feel the longing for someone you care for so much |
| Friday 4th July 2008 11:54 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you |
Skvidd
Thursday 7th February 2008 16:20 | Longing |
such a powerful story. I have tears in my eyes after reading the last part. It's just so unfair and I think you captured it beautifully.
One of the saddest part is the Harry/Hermione situation. They are both hurting so much, but still not helping each other deal with the pain. Harry because he doesn't know how to help or even that he can help, and Hermione because she doesn't know what to say. |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:33 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you |
chiantiqueen
Tuesday 15th January 2008 08:57 | Longing |
| Fab! I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall when Ginny told the Death Eater where to shove her essay!! Loved it, you captured all the emotions and the characters well and the story flowed well. Great job!! |
| Wednesday 16th January 2008 09:50 | Longing (Author Response) |
I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall when Ginny told the Death Eater where to shove her essay!!
I have to admit that is a scene I'm very tempted to write. |
savingsaturn
Thursday 3rd January 2008 10:57 | Longing |
| This was wonderful! I can picture them both looking back on good times as it get harder and harder to be away from each other. You characterized them beautifully and realistically and everything fit together nicely. Great job! |
| Saturday 12th January 2008 16:03 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you, this actually came from taking to a mate about both Harry and Ginny looking back on the goodtimes and one of us saying, what if that happened at the same time. |
hmrpotter
Saturday 29th December 2007 20:02 | Longing |
| This is the first story I've read on this site, and it's a great piece of work. |
| Saturday 12th January 2008 16:00 | Longing (Author Response) |
| well I'm honoured and hope this just is first of many you read here. |
writest
Thursday 20th December 2007 01:39 | Longing |
This is fantastic. It gives you such a warm feeling, and the emotions in your stories are amazing. Not only the relationship of Harry and Ginny, but the friendship between Nev and Ginny, and the helplessness Harry feels when he can't comfort Hermione, everything is beautiful. I seriously love your work!
Oh, and Snape. Terrific |
| Saturday 12th January 2008 15:59 | Longing (Author Response) |
I think that friendship was a very important part of DH, so I'm glad that came across.
As for Snape, I pretty sure this was the first time I wrote him, so i'm happy you liked him. |
ladybug
Saturday 15th December 2007 20:19 | Longing |
| This is just wonderful. I love the balance of drama and tension with romance and happiness - you've captured the essence of each side so beautifully. Everyone just seems perfectly in character - Neville, Snape, McGonagall - everyone, but especially Ginny and Harry of course. This is the kind of story I wish I could have written - but I assure you, it's much better left in your hands. |
| Saturday 12th January 2008 15:55 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you, characterisation is important to me so I'm glad their characters came across so well |
harry_ginnyfan
Friday 7th December 2007 18:19 | Longing |
| Nice story |
| Sunday 9th December 2007 16:16 | Longing (Author Response) |
| Cheers |
everylittlething
Thursday 11th October 2007 08:36 | Longing |
nice missing moment!
a great spot to fill in some details and i liked your use of flashback too.
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| Thursday 11th October 2007 12:45 | Longing (Author Response) |
| Cheers |
juliet
Thursday 11th October 2007 05:40 | Longing |
Oh that was perfect Kathryn, just perfect.
I loved the different point of views, the flashbacks and the descriptions of the growing love between Harry and Ginny and the friendships between the others.
It followed DH perfectly.
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| Thursday 11th October 2007 12:44 | Longing (Author Response) |
Oh that was perfect Kathryn, just perfect.
thank you
I loved the different point of views, the flashbacks and the descriptions of the growing love between Harry and Ginny and the friendships between the others.
Cheers, I think one of the main themes in DH was friendship. I think its very telling that Ginny is the one that mentions Neville in the epilogue. |
alli
Wednesday 10th October 2007 14:42 | Longing |
| Ooh! Very good! |
| Thursday 11th October 2007 12:38 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you |
Emerika
Tuesday 9th October 2007 09:29 | Longing |
| That was amazing! I love it! You did a fantastic job with the characters and gave me that SQUEE feeling when I read. It was so cute and heartbreaking and happy and sad and everything it should be! So cute! |
| Tuesday 9th October 2007 13:59 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you, it was a bit of a challenge including all those different emotions you described, I'm glad it seemed to come across so well. |
pyromain
Monday 8th October 2007 12:30 | Longing |
| I found it a good story, I liked to read about what ginny went through at school, though I didn't like to read about her suffering I think it is needed to build the story. |
| Monday 8th October 2007 14:37 | Longing (Author Response) |
though I didn't like to read about her suffering I think it is needed to build the story.
I think Ginny suffered a lot in DH at Hogwarts. I mean, I Snape and very likely the Carrows knew about her relationship she had had with Harry. Likewise she is a Weasley and it is known that nearly her whole family are Order members. Add to that she actually fought Carrow in the Hogwarts raid in HBP. She is a big target, and thats without even thinking that she helped run the DA (look what happened to Neville) and is hardly one to stay quiet at what is happening. My bet is that Ginny had a very hard year. |
timbers
Monday 8th October 2007 09:40 | Longing |
This was just lovely, K. When you sent it to me, I knew it was good--I just wish I could have been more of a help. Alas, I will have to make it up to you
Good work, dear. *huggles* |
| Monday 8th October 2007 14:31 | Longing (Author Response) |
Who are you again?
When you sent it to me, I knew it was good
Cheers mate.
Alas, I will have to make it up to you
oh yes you will, *evil laugh* |
lantis222
Monday 8th October 2007 08:40 | Longing |
| That was wonderful, I absolutely loved it. Poor Harry and Ginny, I wish they could have had more time. You did a wonderful job! |
| Monday 8th October 2007 14:29 | Longing (Author Response) |
Poor Harry and Ginny, I wish they could have had more time.
I know, but at least we are given 19 years to let our imaginations run wild in. |
Patches
Monday 8th October 2007 00:27 | Longing |
| Poor Harry and Ginny. They would both feel so much better if they knew how the other was feeling right now! I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p |
| Monday 8th October 2007 14:27 | Longing (Author Response) |
This was a one shot, but look out for Ginny's sixth year at around christmas.
They would both feel so much better if they knew how the other was feeling right now!
I think deep down they do know. |
ejh0904
Sunday 7th October 2007 17:04 | Longing |
| Lovely and poignant missing moment - beautifully rendered. I hope you write some more. |
| Monday 8th October 2007 14:25 | Longing (Author Response) |
I hope you write some more.
It won't happen with this piece as it was only a one shot but I do have similar works in the fire. |
myketje
Sunday 7th October 2007 14:15 | Longing |
It was so beautiful! It really shows Harry's love for Ginny. That it's not a highschool love, but a real one!
thxs
Kiss Kiss
mee
xx |
| Monday 8th October 2007 14:23 | Longing (Author Response) |
It was so beautiful! It really shows Harry's love for Ginny. That it's not a highschool love, but a real one!
I think you could tell Harry was falling in love with Ginny at the end of HBP when he breaks up with her, and in DH for me it was really absence make the heart grow stronger. |
The_Critic
Sunday 7th October 2007 11:20 | Longing |
aww Soo cute!
& FOREVER! |
| Sunday 7th October 2007 11:27 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you |
Trelawney2213
Sunday 7th October 2007 08:47 | Longing |
Are you sure Luna was at Hogwarts. At first I wasn't sure but someone assured me she was there until Christmas. |
| Sunday 7th October 2007 11:14 | Longing (Author Response) |
Ah a very wise person that must be.
Anywho, thanks again. |
Enchantedgurls
Sunday 7th October 2007 08:28 | Longing |
| This was such a good story. I really liked the way you incorporated HBP missing moments into it too! There just aren't enough missing moments out there, especially as well written as this. Nice work!! |
| Sunday 7th October 2007 11:17 | Longing (Author Response) |
I really liked the way you incorporated HBP missing moments into it too!
If you want missing moments that include both Harry and Ginny, you really have to go to HBP, theres not too many from DH, especially of the happier nature unless you count those 19 years. |
Delfino
Sunday 7th October 2007 07:49 | Longing |
This is very well written. I especially like the scenes of Harry and Ginny's "happy moments"...they're very sweet, but not too fluffy
This was a nice missing moment piece. Thanks for writing! |
| Sunday 7th October 2007 11:19 | Longing (Author Response) |
I especially like the scenes of Harry and Ginny's "happy moments"...they're very sweet, but not too fluffy
Thank you, I try not to write toothache fluff and I'm glad this seemed to work. |
Trelawney2213
Sunday 7th October 2007 06:22 | Longing |
| As another reviewer mentioned, this was an excellent look into life at Hogwarts and what was happening there while the students were supposedly safe. Great references to Luna and Neville and their part in keeping the DA going. Beautifully done. |
| Sunday 7th October 2007 06:57 | Longing (Author Response) |
this was an excellent look into life at Hogwarts and what was happening there while the students were supposedly safe.
Oh I think Hogwarts was very dangerous place to be especially for someone like Ginny. Molly must have had kittens that year at the thought of having to send her back, especially knowing that Ginny would hardly stay quiet over what was happening there. I wouldn't be surprised if Ginny came home for holiday with a few injuries.
Great references to Luna and Neville and their part in keeping the DA going.
Are you sure Luna was at Hogwarts.
Beautifully done.
Cheers mate. |
brown_eyes
Sunday 7th October 2007 02:37 | Longing |
Another excellent piece.
I'm glad you have shown Ginny's experience at Hogwarts too, so many fics wash over it. Just because she was at Hogwarts, does not mean that she was safe! |
| Sunday 7th October 2007 06:50 | Longing (Author Response) |
I'm glad you have shown Ginny's experience at Hogwarts too, so many fics wash over it. Just because she was at Hogwarts, does not mean that she was safe!
Oh I think Ginny was in alot of danger at Hogwarts, as a Weasley, Harry Potter's (ex)girlfriend and as someone who fought Carrow in HBP, plus she was a sitting target in a way as in the school there was probably not too many places for her to hide. |
Grandma Kate
Sunday 7th October 2007 01:39 | Longing |
Kathryn,
I thought the contrast between the bad things that were happening to Harry and to Ginny and the earlier happier times worked well.
I look forward to reading more. |
| Sunday 7th October 2007 06:44 | Longing (Author Response) |
I thought the contrast between the bad things that were happening to Harry and to Ginny and the earlier happier times worked well.
thank you
I look forward to reading more.
This is just a one shot for the ps anniversary challenge, so I guess more will have to come in another piece. |
DebbieO
Saturday 6th October 2007 22:43 | Longing |
| Very nice. |
| Sunday 7th October 2007 06:41 | Longing (Author Response) |
| cheers |
dcgirl
Saturday 6th October 2007 20:00 | Longing |
| Excellent! |
| Sunday 7th October 2007 06:40 | Longing (Author Response) |
| thank you |
