majolie
Wednesday 10th December 2008 18:56 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
| Wow - the drama! |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 10th April 2008 07:58 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
oh no!!! This is crazy!
I wonder why the blue moon made him like that...
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Ardie Bea
Wednesday 17th October 2007 16:41 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
| This reads really well, Seedy Bea. You've got the rhythms of speech moving nicely, some interesting inventiveness there with the glasses, good character development with James' bashfulness and Lily's teasing and a nice tense ending with Moony's disappearance and Sirius' somber warning. Cheers |
fire_faerie
Wednesday 17th October 2007 14:10 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
What happened to chapter 2?
By the way, this story is lovely. keep up the good work and post the next chapter quickly!!
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haileythefan
Tuesday 16th October 2007 21:44 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
| what about two |
alli
Tuesday 16th October 2007 15:06 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
| Oooh! That was very good! I can't wait for the next chapter. |
lantis222
Tuesday 16th October 2007 09:23 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
oh, very interesting, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope you update soon.
You're doing a wonderful job. I'm so excited for more. |
myketje
Tuesday 16th October 2007 06:22 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
Action! Liked it!
One question, why did you wrote chapter 3 instead of 2? Typo?
See you next chapter for a big fight and a romantic day in Hogsmade!!
Kiss kiss
mee
xx |
| Tuesday 16th October 2007 12:55 | Once in a Blue Moon ... (Author Response) |
| Yeah, typo. thanks for noticing, I'll have to change that... |
the_critic
Monday 15th October 2007 17:12 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
*takes out boombox*
*sets to McDonald's comercial*
*presses play*
badabababu "I'm LOVE-IN' IT"
I really like your story! update soon!!!
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RIPHedwig
Monday 15th October 2007 13:20 | Once in a Blue Moon ... |
Oh my God!! This is like romance with Lily and James, funfunfun, but now it just got exciting!!! sounding good, i really wana no whats going on.
However, i do feel James put on the censorus glasses a bit too willingly, i mean, this is james potter we're talking about! He's lovely, but he is a teenager! loved the idea of them, anyway, and moony being so organised!
hehehe i really like this story... can u tell? |
| Wednesday 17th October 2007 01:49 | Once in a Blue Moon ... (Author Response) |
| Thanx! I uv readin ur reviews... they always make me happy. ty! |
