moralitas
Thursday 27th August 2009 07:19 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| that is a great opening chapter. its plainly obvious you are a good writer...loved the 8 ball idea, sooo suits arthur. *thumbs up* |
ngayonatkailanman
Monday 24th August 2009 13:48 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
I do not know if I have read this at SIYE or FF and could not remember if I have reviewed or not.
An excellent first chapter. |
QuirksnQuills
Friday 8th August 2008 02:07 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| LOL I loved the 8-Ball, perfect and completely in-character. |
Evenstar
Saturday 17th November 2007 13:14 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
I'm guessing that you are a male because of your user name and I just wanted to say that you should have a female BETA so the proposal scene doesn't seem corny or anything. (I have read the entire story. Not just this chapter)
*Evenstar*
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| Saturday 17th November 2007 19:51 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
| I am male and so is my BETA, i'm sorry that you think it's corny but you have to realize Harry is a male, and if you are stereotyping that males come up with "corny" proposals; then according to your logic harry's would be corny as well. I know that you are just giving your opinion which i appreciate but please don't bring my BETA into it, he does a wonderful job and works extremely hard. |
Patches
Wednesday 14th November 2007 01:59 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Christmas is a great time of year to ask the question Harry asked. It was very well done. I look forward to the next chapter to see where you are going with this story. Thanks for writing. p |
whimsy
Saturday 3rd November 2007 14:17 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
I have a small quibble about the funeral and most post-DH fics set right after the battle so I'm not criticizing your story in particular, but besides Fred, Remus, Tonks and Colin, fifty others died defending Hogwarts. Yet I have seen few post-DH fics which allude to those others. Who were they? Cho? Katie Bell? Anthony Goldstein? Justin Finch-Fletchley? Winky? Did Lavender survive her injuries? Regardless, their sacrifice is usually overlooked in fanfics.
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| Saturday 3rd November 2007 15:17 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
| well you have to realize that most of the ppl who died were students which means that their funerals would be very personal to their family's and friends and would have happened the same day as fred, remus, and tonks funeral. Yes it was sad they died but you have to be realistic Harry didn't know everyone who died (not saying he didn't care that they died or that he didn't go to some of their funerals or that the wizarding world didn't appreciate what they did) but those funerals really have nothing to do with this story but the funeral of Remus, Fred, and Tonks on the other hand would have been the most difficult for Harry because those were the ppl he knew the best that died, not to mention how it effected his loved ones. Plus it's always good to leave some questions unanswered for the reader so they can decide for themselves. |
thisgrlrox
Saturday 3rd November 2007 07:30 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| What a lovely start to the story. I appreciate that you took the time to get the events in a logical order. You wouldn't believe some of the timelines I've come across in post DH stories that don't seem to take cannon into account at all. I also loved Mr. Weasley with the "Magic 8-ball." That was brilliant. |
harry_ginnyfan
Friday 2nd November 2007 03:23 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Great start to the story! Keep on writing! |
fire_faerie
Monday 29th October 2007 12:58 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Amazing! Is there going to be more? If there is, can you please post soon? I love fics like this!!! |
damabeth
Thursday 25th October 2007 23:50 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Very good! Is there more? |
| Friday 26th October 2007 03:20 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
| yeah there is going to be more, the first few chaps are kind of fluff and a set up but the excitement will build up |
blue artemis
Thursday 25th October 2007 20:51 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| This is quite sweet. |
lantis222
Thursday 25th October 2007 10:00 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Very good start, I can't wait to see where you take us. I hope you update soon. |
myketje
Thursday 25th October 2007 08:04 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
hihi NUMBER EIGHT BALL! classic!
Loved it, Loved it LOOVED it!
Keep up the goods! (and soon, vacation is coming here :d)
Kiss kiss
mee
xx |
pixie7
Thursday 25th October 2007 02:21 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| this was such a sweet chapter |
