LJpotter
Sunday 14th March 2010 01:02 | The F Words 2: Fame |
was funny hahaha. I feel sorry when they were teasing and him. Bahaha. (: good story! I love this series!
look! an owl--> |
bridgetkelly
Monday 25th January 2010 22:17 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| V good McGonagall speach. So perfect. |
| Tuesday 9th February 2010 17:40 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
V good McGonagall speach. So perfect.
Thanks! |
Aragorn
Friday 30th October 2009 20:27 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| Two great speeches! What fun those must have been to write. |
| Tuesday 3rd November 2009 00:25 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
Two great speeches! What fun those must have been to write.
Thanks! They were. Harry's was actually harder—it was tough keeping him from sounding too polished and not-Harry, you know?
In any case, I'm glad that you enjoyed this!
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RIPHedwig
Friday 30th October 2009 16:03 | The F Words 2: Fame |
hahaha at the Weasleys, love it
Just reading through all your F Words, I may have read one or two but I thought I'd avoid cw and got for it! Really enjoying them all, your writing is lovely
B |
DaniKay
Sunday 5th April 2009 21:06 | The F Words 2: Fame |
Luna is quite the odd ball eh? Haha but I love her anyway!
Percy can certainly can crack a joke huh? I'm glad that Fred got to hear one just before he died.
Can't believe McGonagall said all that about Harry. When he hugged her I couldn't stop laughing. And she was blushing after it too! *shakes head* will wonders never cease?
Loved the chapter!
DaniKay
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Astrid
Saturday 21st February 2009 14:32 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| amazing job. I love how down-to-earth Harry is. you've really captured him. |
kash2210
Friday 19th September 2008 17:14 | The F Words 2: Fame |
Wow, oh, WOW!!!!! That was a FANTASTIC piece of writing, I'm not sure I read a speech as good as the one you had Minerva deliver, it was astounding! WELL DONE!!
I also loved the way you broke up the seriouslness of the pieve with nice touches of levity, the “Harry Potter was never one of those students.” line made me laugh out loud!
Nice touches with the Malfoys and with the small reconcillation with Andromeda & Nacissa!
All in all loved it! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 10th August 2008 12:49 | The F Words 2: Fame |
haha i wonder what ginny's gift will be...
im glad that harry ran into reg and got to chat with him... it was a nice thing for him to do for his family
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joes12321
Saturday 2nd August 2008 05:57 | The F Words 2: Fame |
with each passing chapter, i'm loving your stories more and more. i love how you portray the "new" percy. this is exactly how i imagined percy being, once he was able to reconcile with the family.
keep up the good work! |
Delfino
Thursday 5th June 2008 16:14 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| Brilliant, as usual. I laughed + I cried = the perfect blend of Harry Potter. Great job! |
pyromain
Thursday 28th February 2008 11:25 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| Harry the true herro, not forgetting the hardship other had to endure will he him self was suffering. Loved the story found it perfect with the scene of Reg Cattermole. |
Patches
Monday 25th February 2008 00:58 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| This is a great continuation of the story you started with Friends. Thank you for writing. I really like the way you handle "the rest of the story" that JKR left out. There was so much unsaid and writers like you have really helped fill in the gaps. I look forward to more of this story from you. p |
krypa dakay
Sunday 24th February 2008 05:16 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| Another excellent story! |
bludgerbanger
Tuesday 12th February 2008 14:04 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| Friends and Fame are both so good. I love them both. Will there be more?! I need to know what Ginny's present for Harry is!! |
majolie
Wednesday 28th November 2007 05:56 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| Have you written the story of Harry collecting his present yet? |
| Wednesday 28th November 2007 10:28 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
Have you written the story of Harry collecting his present yet?
Not yet, but soon, I promise! |
D.A.D.A.chik
Monday 26th November 2007 20:40 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| oh, cant wait for the update-there will be one right? omg, i love it |
| Wednesday 28th November 2007 10:40 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
oh, cant wait for the update-there will be one right? omg, i love it
Ah! You did find this!
Well, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. And yes, there will be an update! |
majolie
Friday 23rd November 2007 13:49 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| Absolutely fantastic. Thank you! |
| Tuesday 4th December 2007 22:17 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
Absolutely fantastic. Thank you!
Thanks so much! |
Jonathan-Avery
Thursday 1st November 2007 20:00 | The F Words 2: Fame |
It's interesting to see Harry taking the mantle of his fame as a responsibility rather than as a burden or a license to become domineering. Both options pop up quite regularly in fanfiction, disturbingly so at times, and I dislike cliche a great deal. So your tack is an uncommon one, but in a way, how could he not take a humble approach to his fame and use it for others more than himself? Was that not the entire point of his sacrifice, to give everything for others?
Good job with the speeches. Those are tough to write in any circumstance. I liked the counterpoint of McGonagall's from the heart words and the more polished prepared comments from Harry. It was rather obvious that he was awkward with the speech, but had taken the time to prepare, and there was little surprise when Hermione's roll in it was mentioned.
Anyway, thanks for sharing this,
-Jonathan |
lantis222
Thursday 1st November 2007 08:07 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| The ending was perfect. I'm so glad that Harry and Reg Cattermole were able to talk. I like to think that they made it out as well. Wonderful job, I loved it! |
starkllr
Wednesday 31st October 2007 09:56 | The F Words 2: Fame |
This is excellent! I really enjoyed it, and I think you captured the characters very well.
I think you summarized Harry perfectly with this description: "his utter lack of a sense of self-preservation"
Great job! |
GhostWriter
Wednesday 31st October 2007 03:34 | The F Words 2: Fame |
A wonderful one-shot! I really liked 's humility and his desire to not see the victory wasted. I also liked McGonagall's speech about 's abilities and true talents.
Loved the touch at the end with Reg Cattermole. Very nicely done! |
ejh0904
Tuesday 30th October 2007 16:01 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| What a tease! I love the way this is written - it's professional, with a nice hook. Now on to the next chapter and some Harry/Ginny goodness . . . Please?! |
Patches
Tuesday 30th October 2007 11:35 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| This was excellent. I really liked the fact that Harry hugged McGonagal. That was perfect. Then to have Kingsley hug him! That was icing on the cake. Very well done and the implication of things to come with Ginny was great. Thanks for writing. p |
blue artemis
Sunday 28th October 2007 15:47 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| That was sweet. I love the end part with Reg. |
| Monday 29th October 2007 12:19 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
That was sweet. I love the end part with Reg.
Thanks so much! I wondered what had happened to the Cattermoles, you see...
In any case I'm glad that you enjoyed this! |
lisaq294
Sunday 28th October 2007 11:49 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| this is great I hope you continue, I would like to know what Ginny gives harry for his birthday |
| Monday 29th October 2007 12:18 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
this is great I hope you continue, I would like to know what Ginny gives harry for his birthday
Thanks so much! I do indeed intend to continue—wouldn't want to leave poor Harry (or Ginny) hanging!
(By the way, this is the second story in the series. The first was Friends.) |
narumi
Sunday 28th October 2007 11:27 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| I like it! Very much how I would hope the ceremony would go. |
| Monday 29th October 2007 10:44 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
I like it! Very much how I would hope the ceremony would go.
Thanks so much!
(Me too. Though it did feel a bit sad to send Harry home alone. ) |
Lorelei Lynn
Sunday 28th October 2007 09:28 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| It's hard to pick out my favorite part of this story. McGonagall's speech? Harry's? Percy making a joke that helps his family heal? Or Harry's meeting with Reg Cattermole? It's impossible. Excellent work! |
| Monday 29th October 2007 10:18 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
It's hard to pick out my favorite part of this story. McGonagall's speech? Harry's? Percy making a joke that helps his family heal? Or Harry's meeting with Reg Cattermole? It's impossible. Excellent work!
Thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed this. |
the_critic
Sunday 28th October 2007 09:17 | The F Words 2: Fame |
great job, but Reg wouldn't actually know that it was Harry who saved them, as he was disguised as Runcorn at the time. but, other then that, good job!
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| Monday 29th October 2007 00:41 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
great job, but Reg wouldn't actually know that it was Harry who saved them, as he was disguised as Runcorn at the time. but, other then that, good job!
Harry's involvement in the Great Ministry Breakout was, IIRC, public knowledge—and Harry and Hermione called each other by name during Mary Cattermole's trial. So I felt comfortable having him simply acknowledge Harry.
In any case, thanks so much! |
prongsjr.
Sunday 28th October 2007 00:43 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| This was fantastic!! I do hope you intend to carry it on but if not, it's a great one-shot! |
| Monday 29th October 2007 00:29 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
This was fantastic!! I do hope you intend to carry it on but if not, it's a great one-shot!
Thanks so much! This is actually part of a series of fics—but the series functions isn't working no PS.net just now. ;-) The first fic is Friends, and I have a few more "F" titles coming! |
nerd2006
Saturday 27th October 2007 22:16 | The F Words 2: Fame |
| So good! I liked how Harry found Reg Cattermole, but I do wish there could have been more Harry/Ginny interaction. |
| Monday 29th October 2007 00:28 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
So good! I liked how Harry found Reg Cattermole, but I do wish there could have been more Harry/Ginny interaction.
Thanks! That story's coming too!
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DebbieO
Saturday 27th October 2007 19:57 | The F Words 2: Fame |
That was delightful. I love the reunions with Reg, Doris Crockford, Narcissa and Andromeda. Harry's speech was great with his references to the werewolves, house-elves, and goblins, and I loved his line about never being alone while looking at Ginny. You painted a realistic picture of fame and how it would feel to have such high expectations placed upon you. Crockford bursting into tears because Harry remembered her name.
Thanks! I hope this is a chapter fic. I'd like to read more. |
| Monday 29th October 2007 00:27 | The F Words 2: Fame (Author Response) |
That was delightful. I love the reunions with Reg, Doris Crockford, Narcissa and Andromeda. Harry's speech was great with his references to the werewolves, house-elves, and goblins, and I loved his line about never being alone while looking at Ginny. You painted a realistic picture of fame and how it would feel to have such high expectations placed upon you. Crockford bursting into tears because Harry remembered her name.
Thanks! I hope this is a chapter fic. I'd like to read more.
Thanks so much! This is actually part of a series of fics—but the series functions isn't working no PS.net just now. ;-) The first fic is Friends, and I have a few more "F" titles coming! |
DebbieO
Saturday 27th October 2007 19:32 | The F Words 2: Fame |
That was delightful. I love the reunions with Reg, Doris Crockford, Narcissa and Andromeda. Harry's speech was great with his references to the werewolves, house-elves, and goblins, and I loved his line about never being alone while looking at Ginny. You painted a realistic picture of fame and how it would feel to have such high expectations placed upon you. Crockford bursting into tears because Harry remembered her name.
Thanks! I hope this is a chapter fic. I'd like to read more. |
