ngayonatkailanman
Monday 24th August 2009 14:05 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
Hmmmm. Very interesting. What a creative imagination you have.
Descriptive.
Excellent formatting. |
QuirksnQuills
Friday 8th August 2008 02:21 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Wow, what a profound emotional investment on Harry's part. Reminds me of a fanfic I read where the vows included Goblin-forged rings that could not be removed and burned horribly if the other person cheated! |
calleighpotter
Friday 28th March 2008 13:02 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| So romantic! That was a really lovely idea, you have a great imagination. |
calleighpotter
Friday 28th March 2008 13:02 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| So romantic! That was a really lovely idea, you have a great imagination. |
pyromain
Sunday 18th November 2007 08:09 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| This is so lovelly, the story really lifted my mood. hope you can keep up this level of qaulity. |
Patches
Wednesday 14th November 2007 02:47 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| I'm really glad that Harry is being kind to Kreacher. I really like the idea that Harry and the others finally realized that Kreacher has had a bad life. It is amazing what kindness can do to smooth over the rough spots in life. I'm glad Harry talked to Ron. I just hope Ron and Hermione don't spoil Harry's surprise. I hope Ginny really likes the ring and can also hear the song. It would be tragic if she can't. I hope things go well for Harry's proposal. This is an important step in their lives. He really loves Ginny and she loves him. At least I hope she does! Thanks for writing. I look forward to the next chapter. p |
Lindaleeann
Tuesday 13th November 2007 09:36 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| The story of the phoenix tear and the love of the four left me with tingles and a smile. Thank you. |
kandib293
Monday 12th November 2007 13:41 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| wondeful story update soon plz |
harry_ginnyfan
Friday 9th November 2007 10:35 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
Great chapter, now onto the big question to Ginny!Cheers!~
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RIPHedwig
Thursday 8th November 2007 10:04 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
Oh, don't worry about the American English, I didn't notice!
I absolutley love this! There isn't NEARLY enough stuff on the Harry/Ginny proposal and this is just great - I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! xxx |
TreyFury97
Tuesday 6th November 2007 12:56 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
Wow... that chapter was amazing. I like the description of the Phoenix Tear. It was very believable. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Trey
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D.A.D.A.chik
Monday 5th November 2007 21:26 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| plz write more! i'm dying to know bout the proposel (did i spell that right?) |
| Tuesday 6th November 2007 00:06 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
| don't worry the next chapter will be posted soon, it's done just waiting for my beta to give it the ok. |
damabeth
Monday 5th November 2007 16:01 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| I like the story so far! Please continue. Grandma Beth |
D.A.D.A.chik
Monday 5th November 2007 14:05 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| OMG i'm in luv with this story so far! great ideas! |
blue artemis
Sunday 4th November 2007 17:14 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| I think that will be an excellent ring for Ginny. And that was a lovely chapter. |
jennvellcs
Sunday 4th November 2007 13:59 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Loved it! You have a flare for writing! |
Trismegistus
Saturday 3rd November 2007 17:53 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| I do hope you keep writing this story. It was most enjoyable, especially on this rainy Saturday evening. |
The_Critic
Saturday 3rd November 2007 15:12 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
NO it is impossible, -THE NEXT BUTTON ISN'T WORKING!!-
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| Saturday 3rd November 2007 15:19 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
| I promise that me and my beta are working hard and the next chapter will posted quite soon. |
jeanne
Saturday 3rd November 2007 10:51 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| I write down home, Can, east coast lingo when writing my fics, and I don,t apologize for it. Don,t you either. It would take forever to look up the proper words to use, and with the influx of immigrants from every place in England, there is very little of so called *English speak* still in use. This fic is super, and I am enjoying it. Kep up the great work. Jeanne. |
mexpems
Saturday 3rd November 2007 09:17 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Great story, loved the theme, very good work, looking forwad to the next chapter |
a4cjaunt
Saturday 3rd November 2007 07:59 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
Wow - Great chapter - I like the fact that the phoenix tear came from Fawkes.
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thisgrlrox
Saturday 3rd November 2007 07:52 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
I liked your choice of ring for Ginny. It's simple, but with a long and detailed history. Just the ring I would imagine would suit her. It also fits for Fawkes and Dumbledore to still have a connection with the couple. Very original and interesting idea.
I can't wait to read about the proposal. |
myketje
Saturday 3rd November 2007 02:16 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
That was soo cute. And you created somthing new here. A phoenix tear...
VEry good job!!
Keep it on!
Kiss kiss
mee
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