kash2210
Tuesday 30th September 2008 11:40 | Towards King's Cross |
Oh that was yet another good chapter, particularly the scene at Gringott, nicely written.
You've a nice easy style of writing, that makes it easy to read your work! |
| Tuesday 2nd December 2008 06:47 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
| thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it! this is such a blast from the past, it feels like ages has passed since I wrote all this!!! I guess that's what pregnancy does to you... |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 9th March 2008 17:35 | Towards King's Cross |
wow!!!! This was a nice chapter!!! I love ginny's cunningness towards griphook :p
dang harry has a lot of money....
i wonder what he is going to get ginny... an engagement ring? although that does seem fitting seeign as they arent dating right now....
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| Tuesday 11th March 2008 00:07 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
thanks - lots of exclamation marks!
haha, I'm looking forward to reading your comments on the later chapters now that I've read this one.
Thanks for being so dedicated to giving feedback! |
ladybug
Thursday 15th November 2007 21:44 | Towards King's Cross |
I've just started reading your enjoyable story, and I have to say it's worth reading just for this one classic line: "Yeah, no worries," Neville responded quickly. "I'm sick of Gran making me get it out every time she has friends round for tea."
Hilarious! (But all the rest is pretty sweet, too.) |
| Saturday 17th November 2007 06:21 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
| Ah, thanks - yeah, I loved thinking about how Neville's Gran must have gone completely mental with pride after the Nagini incident. Thanks for reviewing! |
mexpems
Wednesday 14th November 2007 13:31 | Towards King's Cross |
| Another excellent follow up, I liek the way the gobblin was handle, very smart |
| Thursday 15th November 2007 01:23 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
| thanks! i'm really glad that it worked for you! |
Patches
Saturday 10th November 2007 05:49 | Towards King's Cross |
| This is really good. At least Harry is reinstated in fairly good terms with the goblins. I'm glad he is planning on Ginny's birthday ahead of time. This will be a very special birthday for Ginny and in retrospect also for Harry. Thanks for writing I look forward to more of this story. p |
| Saturday 10th November 2007 14:55 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the feedback! yeah, I'm actually in the thick of writing Ginny's birthday right now so i hope that you'll like it. |
nem18
Friday 9th November 2007 17:46 | Towards King's Cross |
| Great Chapter whens the next one commin? |
| Saturday 10th November 2007 14:53 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
thanks for the feedback!
the next five chapters are with my beta, I'm writing Chapter 10 right now, so hopefully Chapter 5 will be up soon! |
harry_ginnyfan
Thursday 8th November 2007 20:34 | Towards King's Cross |
| Great chapter! |
| Friday 9th November 2007 04:49 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
thanks! glad you liked it! |
lantis222
Tuesday 6th November 2007 09:21 | Towards King's Cross |
| Wonderful chapter, it's good to see George smiling again. You are a wonderful author keep em coming! |
| Tuesday 6th November 2007 14:46 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
thanks! yeah, i couldn't see George completely losing himself to grief, he has such a great family to support him.
thanks heaps for the reviews! you're awesome! |
ksingh
Monday 5th November 2007 23:22 | Towards King's Cross |
| Excellent writing! Good story. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. |
| Tuesday 6th November 2007 02:17 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
| thanks! it's a deal! |
blue artemis
Sunday 4th November 2007 17:20 | Towards King's Cross |
| Sweet. And I'm glad that Harry's friends didn't see that as him showing off. |
| Monday 5th November 2007 01:17 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
| yeah, I figure that by this point, now that he's got all Sirius' money as well, they'll all just have to accept that he's loaded so there's no point him being coy about it! |
fire_faerie
Sunday 4th November 2007 13:17 | Towards King's Cross |
| That's an amazing chapter! I love the way you present your characters, they are so close to the ones in the books (as in, more than other fics that I've read!) But I want Hermione back soon! I miss her !!! Please release the next chapter quickly, so that I'll have less sleepless nights!! |
| Sunday 4th November 2007 17:16 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
sleepless nights? really?!
thanks for the great feedback, i really didn't want to create my own characters as I'm so happy with JKR's. Hermione will be back, I promise! thanks heaps for reviewing, I'm really glad that you like it! |
The_Critic
Sunday 4th November 2007 08:25 | Towards King's Cross |
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rileysmygirl
Sunday 4th November 2007 06:47 | Towards King's Cross |
LOVE IT! Keep 'em coming!
I love how we see more of Ginny's POV, rather than just Harry. She's been a favorite character of mine all along. |
| Sunday 4th November 2007 12:34 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
thanks so much!
yeah, i love Ginny. I just had a flash of inspiration for her for chapter ten which is where I'm up to now and I think I'm pretty happy about how it's going to work out. she is a very cool girl. |
myketje
Saturday 3rd November 2007 23:27 | Towards King's Cross |
Good Plan! But I really want to know what Harry and George are up to...
Nice job, it's cute to see Gin and Harry dance around each other like that :d They both know they're deeply in love
Kiss kiss and please post again soon!!
xx
mee |
| Sunday 4th November 2007 04:38 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
you'll find out what Harry and George as up to soon enough, it's all written!
I really enjoyed writing these early interactions between Harry and Ginny - man, I love those two! they're both such fantastic characters! |
Trismegistus
Saturday 3rd November 2007 19:36 | Towards King's Cross |
| Thank you for the new chapter. I've always imagined Harry's apprehension in going back to Gringott's as you have written it, but i would think they (if only begrudingly) would not be quite so hostile due to the primary effect of the break-in and perhaps some of Bill Weasley's diplomacy. Nice character development with Griphook, too. |
| Sunday 4th November 2007 04:36 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
| thanks for the review. yeah, the whole thing with the goblins is just to give me some small semblance of plot! |
Grandma Kate
Saturday 3rd November 2007 19:16 | Towards King's Cross |
| This is a delightful tale of what could have happened after the battle but before the Epilogue. |
| Sunday 4th November 2007 04:35 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
| thanks, i've had heaps of fun trying to imagine how those gaps would've been filled! |
guruvee
Saturday 3rd November 2007 18:17 | Towards King's Cross |
| Love love LOVE it!!!! I can't wait to read what they are giving each other as gifts. Please update soon!!!! |
| Sunday 4th November 2007 04:34 | Towards King's Cross (Author Response) |
| thanks for all of the enthusiasm! it's very cool of you to review! there are many more chapters all ready to go with my beta so hopefully you'll be finding out soon... |
