hwimsey
Saturday 17th November 2007 15:18 | The Hex of Your Life |
Excellent -- as always -- you do a marvelous job of capturing the emotional peril that the characters are facing in the midst of trying to live ordinary lives. Ah, sigh -- all our stories are AU now -- to a certain extent -- but your is lovely. Can't wait to read more. Hope all is well.
S.
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| Monday 19th November 2007 15:19 | The Hex of Your Life (Author Response) |
| Thank you, S. I'm glad you like. All is well. Hope the same for you. |
The_Critic
Monday 12th November 2007 13:40 | The Hex of Your Life |
| good job, update soon! |
| Monday 12th November 2007 16:44 | The Hex of Your Life (Author Response) |
| Thank you. New chapters will be added weekly. |
lantis222
Monday 12th November 2007 09:24 | The Hex of Your Life |
| Another fabulous chapter! So, how is Ginny going to react when she sees Harry in the...well when she wakes up. I can't wait to find out. Great job! |
| Monday 12th November 2007 12:58 | The Hex of Your Life (Author Response) |
Well, Ginny (nor Harry) is not quite ready to wake up, yet. She has to sleep for awhile. And what does she do when she sleeps? Well, find out in the next chapter.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!! |
Windsong
Monday 12th November 2007 03:28 | The Hex of Your Life |
First, can I second your vote of thanks to Sherylyn - she's a wonder.
On to the story. Everybody is nicely in character, and your story line is flowing wonderfully. I look forward to reading more.
And I am so pleased you kept Remus and Tonks alive - I just can't bring myself to write anything with them dead! |
| Monday 12th November 2007 06:33 | The Hex of Your Life (Author Response) |
Yes, Sherylyn is absolutely fantastic. And I was so disappointed in the death of Remus and Tonks. I understand the appropriateness of all the deaths in DH, I just wish Remus and Tonks (and Dobby) hadn't been among them. But who to choose; that would be hard.
I'm glad you like the story. I'm glad the characterization is apt, but watch Ginny -- something isn't quite right with her |
Patches
Monday 12th November 2007 02:09 | The Hex of Your Life |
| This is really good. I'm glad Minerva called Molly to come and get Ginny. I think it is great that Ginny, Harry and Hermione are at the Burrow. Ron will get there soon. Now Voldemort is gone but it will probably be uphill for Harry until Ginny finds it in her heart to forgive him for being overprotective of her. I hope they can work it out soon. Thanks for writing. p |
| Monday 12th November 2007 06:29 | The Hex of Your Life (Author Response) |
| I'm humbled by your praise. Thank you. As for life for Harry. Well. you're right it will be uphill for him This isn't a long story, so it won't be much longer before they work it out. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. |
The Boss
Monday 12th November 2007 01:28 | The Hex of Your Life |
I think that this story is coming along quiet well. the only thing that I could recommend is that you make each chapter slightly longer. I like how you have incorporated this story with your other piece of wonderful work - Socks '. This story keeps the flow there and that is wonderful to see
The Boss |
| Monday 12th November 2007 06:26 | The Hex of Your Life (Author Response) |
| Yeah, I know the chapters are rather short. The first draft of this story was a oneshot. One of the readers recommended I break it into chapters. That was hard for me, trying to figure out where a good break would be (one of the reason this took so long after Socks in appearing). I struggle with writing longer chapters. But I'm glad that's the only problem you find with the story |
