PhoenixFeathers
Thursday 13th March 2008 19:32 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
It was SO sweet of harry to give creature the house!
I almost cried! I never cry! the last italicised part, that was directly from Deathly Hallows, right?
NEway, Great Chapter! But wats with the é's?
Phoenix Pheaters, AWAY!!!! |
| Sunday 16th March 2008 01:01 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
| the last italicised part is what happens right after the end of deathly hallows, so it is right after Harry, Hermione and Ron leave the headmistresses office. |
Evenstar
Monday 26th November 2007 19:27 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| I did not mean any offense by saying that you should have a female BETA. I know your mad but i did not say that Harry was corny or that males proposals in general are corny. Proposals can be very charming in fact. I am saying this so you could have a females opinion on the proposal as a female (Ginny) is receiving it. I am just giving you reviewers advice. And also, I didn't bring your BETA directly into it, I just said that you should think about getting another BETA (a female one) so don't accuse me of anything. I do like your story. And I also know your BETA does a great job, as I didn't find any mistakes in the story (I currently study grammar so it has become habit for me proofread anything that is in front of me). So I do think you have a good story. |
pyromain
Sunday 18th November 2007 08:43 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| loved it, this story is just perfect, love all the details the relapse everything. I'm will be hanging on for the next chapter. |
D.A.D.A.chik
Thursday 15th November 2007 13:38 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| when is the next xhapter gonna b out??? i'm like jumping with expectations! |
| Thursday 15th November 2007 14:44 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
| lol just going to have to wait |
D.A.D.A.chik
Wednesday 14th November 2007 21:28 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| omigod, this actully made me cry! no joke, it was amazing! (tears of happiness) |
mexpems
Wednesday 14th November 2007 18:49 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
GREAT, love the proposal, and ver y fitting t to nervous Harry ,
looking forward to the next chapter |
Patches
Wednesday 14th November 2007 03:32 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| This is a wonderful chapter. I can't imagine where you came up with the idea of the Phoenix Tear! That is inspired. What a wonderful story the old worman told. That was beautiful. Harry did very well with the Snitch and everything else he did. I really loved the way he lead up to asking Ginny to marry him. The slight disappointment she felt when she saw the Snitch was just the opening Harry needed to tell her about the Snitch being the one she caught the first day they kissed. That was perfect. Then for the Snitch to light up and open when Ginny said she loved Harry to was just perfect. What a wonderful way to show her her ring. What a wonderful Christmas present. One that will last the rest of their lives. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
blue artemis
Tuesday 13th November 2007 21:44 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| That was so amazingly sweet. I love the proposal. |
brios
Tuesday 13th November 2007 20:10 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| What a wonderful story, you made me cry and for that I'll give you 3 cookies |
Trismegistus
Tuesday 13th November 2007 19:29 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| A wonderful chapter. It made me feel good just reading it. |
The Boss
Tuesday 13th November 2007 17:15 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
Together at last. Lets hope there is a chapter on the wedding still to come.Excellent work.
The Boss |
sweetdreamer285
Tuesday 13th November 2007 17:10 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| *fangirl squeal* what a great way to start the work week ^_^ |
minervarocks
Tuesday 13th November 2007 15:18 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Very nice chapter. One question, though, what about Kreacher's present to Harry? Did he use it as Kreacher wanted him to? Did Harry forget about it? |
| Tuesday 13th November 2007 15:29 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix (Author Response) |
| He used, it was the vial he opened while him and Ginny were dancing on the hill top. |
myketje
Tuesday 13th November 2007 14:35 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
LOVEly! It is a beauty, this chapter!!
Thank you! Can't wait on the wedding...
kisses
mee
xx |
lantis222
Tuesday 13th November 2007 14:09 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Wonderful chapter! I just realized that I missed your second chapter so I had to read them both. I loved the description of "the ring" and the fact that it came from Fawkes...lovely. I can't wait to read what happens next. Great job! |
fire_faerie
Tuesday 13th November 2007 13:59 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Awww! That's so romantic! I love Harry and Ginny, they are so perfect for each other!!! I really like the idea of the ring, it fits so nicely with everything going on between them. Beautifully written, I expect nothing less than a perfect update! Don't you dare disappoint me, understand??? Good. |
fire_faerie
Tuesday 13th November 2007 13:56 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| Awww! That's so romantic! I love Harry and Ginny, they are so perfect for each other |
harry_ginnyfan
Tuesday 13th November 2007 12:36 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
Great story! It was cool how Harry had put the ring in the snitch!
Romantic!
Keep on writing! Cheers! |
setgdf
Tuesday 13th November 2007 11:23 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
| brilliant..lukin 4 more |
RIPHedwig
Tuesday 13th November 2007 10:30 | Harry Potter and the Tear of the Phoenix |
Oh God i cried almost as much as the bit in DH when Harry goes to the forest... that is a great skill to have, making people sob uncontrollably with ur writing! lol
my fav bit:
"When he was younger, he used to think that every moment and every action led him to that final moment when he had had to face Voldemort for the last time, but now he realized that it wasn’t true. Every moment and every action lead him here, to the moment that he would ask the woman he loved to marry him."
sob.
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