Steven Carnell
Saturday 2nd February 2008 11:53 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts |
| Good story. Well written, good proof reading. I like the approach using correspondence from the Weasley children to tell the story. 7/10. Well done. |
| Saturday 2nd February 2008 15:44 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
Thank you for reading and reviewing. My Beta, Trelawney 2213, has been very patient and I am getting better at catching most of my mistakes. It is much easier to proof read something you haven't written.
Molly has to try and piece together what is happening at Hogwarts. She never knows everything. |
shilow
Wednesday 30th January 2008 16:47 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts |
| I like this story and Molly's adjusting to the empty nest, carving a different life for herself now that all her children are away at school. Changes...they affect us all and we all react to them differently. I am enjoying your ideas on how Molly is coping. |
| Wednesday 30th January 2008 20:20 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the positive review. I have the advantage of knowing how the story ends (thanks to JKR) and have lived through the 'empty nest' syndrome. She's got a few years to go before the Final Battle and a really empty nest. In my case, the kids kept moving back in with spouses and kids until I got a smaller place. I think Molly and Arthur enjoy being at the Burrow. |
lantis222
Tuesday 29th January 2008 14:41 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts |
Another wonderful chapter! Ron really annoys me while he doesn't believe Harry. Though what makes him so adorable is that he always comes back.
Very good job, can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Tuesday 29th January 2008 15:08 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
Thanks for being such a faithful reader. Yes, Ron always has some doubts but can be depended on in the end.
Did you have a good holiday? |
HiJane_2
Monday 28th January 2008 15:03 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts |
| I'm very much enjoying this story and its predecessor. Please update soon! I love how you've done Molly's character so exceptionally well! Well done! ~HiJane_2 |
| Monday 28th January 2008 15:22 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
| I am glad you are enjoying my attempt to tell the stories that JKR wrote from Harry's perspective from that of Molly Weasley. I hope to write a story for each of the books. |
pyromain
Monday 28th January 2008 09:07 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts |
| Loved it like always. Would have expected Ginny to go in more detail about harry's conquest of the dragon but than again none of her letters were real long. |
| Monday 28th January 2008 09:16 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
Thank you for your always perceptive review. It sets off alarm bells in Molly's brain when any of the kids besides Percy write long letters.
I have the advantage of readers who are familiar with the real story so can assign each letter writer the part they are the most interested in. Ginny makes more comments on her brothers than they do about her, usually. |
midnightwriter1213
Sunday 27th January 2008 20:17 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts |
Yay! I was so happy to see that my inbox had an e-mail in it telling me you had updated. Loved the letters, and nice use of the book's dialogue. Although I wish Molly wouldn't listen to Rita Skeeter. Ginny is so smart, she knows exactly what her brothers' true feelings and motives are. Loved the chap, can't wait for the next!
~MidnightWriter |
| Sunday 27th January 2008 20:51 | Ginny's Third Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
Thanks for writing such a positive review. The year of the Triwizard Tournament has a lot of things going on that Molly doesn't understand. She reacts to some information that is not true.
She and Corrine get to be at the Third Task. So much happens in such a short time. |
