clare
Tuesday 8th December 2009 22:37 | Observations |
| So few people write Luna well and you have done that so well. And I love just how wise she is in this too, yet still quirky. |
| Tuesday 1st January 2002 05:30 | Observations (Author Response) |
| Indeed Luna is very wise |
blue_and_white_witch
Sunday 31st August 2008 09:11 | Observations |
| Your Luna is wonderful, so smart and insightful. |
| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 06:24 | Observations (Author Response) |
| The girl is a Ravenclaw for a reason. |
gymnastgal19
Monday 10th March 2008 20:06 | Observations |
wow.... luna's very deep....
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| Tuesday 11th March 2008 01:57 | Observations (Author Response) |
| she is indeed |
juliet
Tuesday 19th February 2008 23:58 | Observations |
Everyone knew that once Crumple-Horned Snorkacks, found their mates they mated for life and were rarely seen without the other apart from when they left the other's company to die.
Maybe that was why Harry had left Ginny's side; he thought that he was going off to die.
You have got Luna's interesting take on life just right.
Well done. |
| Wednesday 20th February 2008 12:03 | Observations (Author Response) |
Thank you,
there's no hiding that this was the chapter I was most nervous about so thank you again. |
RIPHedwig
Monday 11th February 2008 14:12 | Observations |
Loving this selection of stories... they're great!
I thought you captured Luna perfectly. You explained her dreaminess excellently. Loved this line, especially: 'Many people suggested that something was wrong with her mind but at least she didn't float in the air inviting people to throw heavy balls at her.' SO Luna!
I now understand her a lot better, i think. thanks.
how many stories are there going to be? |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:27 | Observations (Author Response) |
Its good to hear that about Luna as my beta will tell you this is the chapter I was most worried about.
There are going to be three more chapters. |
Patches
Monday 11th February 2008 03:07 | Observations |
| Luna has a way of bringing out the reality of a situation that others overlook or ignore. It is good having someone like Luna to point out the obvious even though it isn't always comfortable for everyone at the time. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:24 | Observations (Author Response) |
Luna has a way of bringing out the reality of a situation that others overlook or ignore. It is good having someone like Luna to point out the obvious even though it isn't always comfortable for everyone at the time.
Agreed, Luna says what needs to be and no one else dares to. |
brown_eyes
Monday 11th February 2008 02:05 | Observations |
Great, great, great chapter.
Luna is becoming a very wise woman with excellent observations. |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:23 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you |
ibelieveintruelove
Sunday 10th February 2008 22:27 | Observations |
| This is such a lovely story. Each of your chapters have been marvelous, you can write in character really well, and so far your chapters from Ginny's, Ron's and Luna's point of view have been very accurate. Update soon! |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:19 | Observations (Author Response) |
| thank you |
elvenlaughter
Sunday 10th February 2008 20:00 | Observations |
Can I just say how much I love the way you portray Luna?
Thank you for letting me say it. It has now been said. |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:19 | Observations (Author Response) |
| Thany you for saying it too |
lantis222
Sunday 10th February 2008 15:39 | Observations |
| That was beautiful, I love the way Luna's mind works. Well done. Update soon! |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:18 | Observations (Author Response) |
thank you
I've just got bak from holiday, so I'll have to check in with my beta over the next chapter, there maybe a small delay. |
The_Critic
Sunday 10th February 2008 15:35 | Observations |
So sweet. What were the changes on the chocolate frog card? I enjoyed Luna;s comentary, lol.
something had happened to part the pair that had become more inseparable than a pair of Crumple-Horned Snorkacks, and it was more than the headmaster's death. Everyone knew that once Crumple-Horned Snorkacks, found their mates they mated for life and were rarely seen without the other apart from when they left the other's company to die.
Very perceptive. |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:16 | Observations (Author Response) |
thank you
What were the changes on the chocolate frog card?
they were only minor but all the Order of the Phoenix stuff was new
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Grandma Kate
Saturday 9th February 2008 22:08 | Observations |
Another fine chapter. And what a wise woman Luna is becoming-
"But they will come back; they always do. We never lose the people that have loved us." |
| Saturday 16th February 2008 03:15 | Observations (Author Response) |
Cheers mate,
agreed Luna is a very wise woman. |
