DaniKay
Thursday 23rd April 2009 16:11 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
Fred would be happy. As long as people still unknowingly turned into Canaries, he'll always be happy
Aww Harry and Ginny ^_^
DaniKay
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 9th July 2008 22:11 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
nice chapter!
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ladybug
Wednesday 25th June 2008 23:16 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
Ginny, if I had stopped to talk to you, I never would have been able to do what I absolutely had to do.
Now this is exactly right - I really appreciated this coming out in their conversation. I liked how Ginny was ambiguous about feeling sad for her losses and happy for the ones she hasn't lost. The scene at the beginning was very sweet and gentle - I feel much more in tune with that.
But it didn't work. He didn't kill you.
I'm curious that Harry didn't correct Ginny on this point - I wonder if they'll ever discuss his afterlife experience - it seemed glossed over in this scene. |
Sheepie_101
Friday 13th June 2008 20:04 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
| + = LOVE ++LOVE + + LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!! |
RIPHedwig
Thursday 29th May 2008 06:48 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
| Short and sweet |
majolie
Wednesday 26th March 2008 09:33 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
Harry taking care of her so well when she was sick was perfect ... some people are able to do that and others are not - and some can only stand to do it for those they love most. I think your Harry is a bit of the first type and a lot of the last.
I'm glad to see their love breaking through the barriers that have been raised. And I enjoyed the segment with Percy, Bill, and Arthur at the end - I hope to see more of your Percy ... I think he seems to have some depth.
My one nitpick for this chapter (I think I like this story so much that I cannot stand to see anything imperfect in it! ) - eyes may sparkle with mirth and laughter, with joy, with tears, with mischief. They sparkle over many things but not devotion and yearning. I'd go for glowed, or shone, or maybe even gleamed - though that would be stretching it.
Yay - more to read! |
ngayonatkailanman
Sunday 23rd March 2008 16:26 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
| Arthur has become a philosopher in his old age? Bless him. |
harry_ginnyfan
Friday 7th March 2008 15:44 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
I like your story so far. Please keep on writing! I love Harry/Ginny stories!!
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Patches
Thursday 6th March 2008 01:46 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
| Thank goodness Harry and Ginny has started to work things out between them. I am so glad Harry wasn't turned away by Ginny being sick or having a running nose. It is great that Arthur and Percy have seen a glimpse of the future in Harry and Ginny and also Bill and Fleur. It says a lot for their character. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
ARIESGIRL
Wednesday 5th March 2008 19:39 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
A special moment. He held her hair! wait till the morning sickness comes in the future. Will he hold her hair then, or run like a rabbit? (my husband preferred to run!)
loved this chapter, Percy was so right in what he said to his father at the end. It is the perfect way to describe this story.
well done! |
ejh0904
Wednesday 5th March 2008 18:27 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
| Beautifully done. I don't know how I missed this story before. Will there be more? Great job! |
| Wednesday 5th March 2008 18:56 | I Saw My Lady Weep (Author Response) |
Beautifully done. I don't know how I missed this story before. Will there be more? Great job!
Currently open on my desktop is Chapter 14 (entitled "The News That Truly Shocks..."), so yes, there will be more. If the plan holds, we'll be adding three chapters at a time with each update.
I've got a wonderful beta, and she's working as quickly as she can to keep up with me. Please bear with us. |
The_Critic
Wednesday 5th March 2008 16:10 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
intersting.
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lisaq294
Wednesday 5th March 2008 14:14 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
this was beautiful, so well thought out and written... I found it so emotional, it completed things that had been left unsaid in DH.
Thanks for posting I look forward to your update soon |
gwenfrewi72
Tuesday 4th March 2008 05:55 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
| Friggin' beautiful. Totally heart wrenching and warming. |
| Wednesday 5th March 2008 15:13 | I Saw My Lady Weep (Author Response) |
Friggin' beautiful. Totally heart wrenching and warming.
Thank you. I put a lot of thought into it. |
curren
Tuesday 4th March 2008 03:40 | I Saw My Lady Weep |
| your writing is good, but the overall feeling i have from this story is overly emotional, so much so that it doesn't feel real. I've read quite a few stories that make the mistake of describing some highly emotional scenes without having the basis for it. |
| Tuesday 4th March 2008 04:38 | I Saw My Lady Weep (Author Response) |
Everyone is entitled to their opinion, regardless of how mistaken they are.
Even you.
Have fun! |
