joes12321
Thursday 31st July 2008 03:20 | Maybe Not Today |
A great piece. I like the idea of Harry being a guest DADA teacher. I don't think he could ever stay away from his "first home," even if Ginny had not returned to school
The thing I liked best about this story is it made me rethink Ron. You might be right about Ron being a changed man post-war. It's not something I've given a lot of thought to previously, but now kind of accept to be true - because how could it not be?
Well written! |
majolie
Wednesday 26th March 2008 07:55 | Maybe Not Today |
| Loved this. The feeling of peace really filled the entire story, and the mixture of happiness and sorrow was perfect. |
| Wednesday 26th March 2008 08:27 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Thank you, majolie! It's interesting how one can feel at peace, but still feel intense sorrow and even lingering fear. I try to put a lot of what I feel into what I write, so I'm glad you felt that the feelings were communicated well! |
ngayonatkailanman
Sunday 23rd March 2008 14:18 | Maybe Not Today |
Excellent characterisation. Very good description of scenes and scenery. Interesting conversation and thoughts.
Well done, you. |
| Sunday 23rd March 2008 19:26 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much! I'm glad that you felt each of those elements were well written. Those are probably my top three concerns in any story ... getting the character moods right, describing what I'm picturing in my head, and writing realistic dialogue. Thank you for taking the time to review and let me know what you thought of my work. I hope that you'll read my other stories as well! |
Steven Carnell
Sunday 23rd March 2008 11:27 | Maybe Not Today |
| Excellent! 10/10. Well written and great interaction. |
| Sunday 23rd March 2008 19:24 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad that I got an A+, and that you liked the interactions between the characters. It can be really hard to make that realistic sometimes, especially when characters are dealing with weighty issues. I hope that you'll read my other stories as well. |
Astrid
Friday 21st March 2008 19:32 | Maybe Not Today |
| Aww, very sweet and nostalgic. Good work. |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 06:28 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Thanks, Astrid! I'm glad you appreciated the story. Hope you'll come back to read more! |
Oma
Tuesday 18th March 2008 17:31 | Maybe Not Today |
| Um, yeah, I cried. |
| Tuesday 18th March 2008 19:31 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| You know I did, and you know why. Thanks for your constant support and love! |
ARIESGIRL
Friday 14th March 2008 07:46 | Maybe Not Today |
| great story, now I want to gather the kids up and have our own romp in the snow. thanks for the vivid imagery. your story was worth the time to write. |
| Friday 14th March 2008 08:32 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much! I love imagery. Obviously, it's important to every story, but it's so much fun to play with and perfect. It makes you stop and think about how you perceive the world and design the best way to communicate that to someone else. I wrote the story primarily during a snow storm, so I had a lot of inspiration. I'm glad you felt it was worth the time to write, and the time to read! |
lantis222
Wednesday 12th March 2008 16:02 | Maybe Not Today |
| Wonderful story. I loved that they can still remember and live. Thanks. |
| Thursday 13th March 2008 05:47 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Hi lantis! Yes, it can be hard to both remember and live fully. It's important to remember that you don't have to be okay all of the time. I'm glad you liked this story just as you like "Heart of Gold!" |
brios
Wednesday 12th March 2008 12:15 | Maybe Not Today |
| Aww, that was a very nice reading. Thanks! |
| Thursday 13th March 2008 05:46 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I had been working on it for a long while, and it was only recently that I figured out how I wanted it to go. Thank you! |
harry_ginnyfan
Wednesday 12th March 2008 11:04 | Maybe Not Today |
| Cute story! Cheers! |
| Thursday 13th March 2008 05:45 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
parakletos
Wednesday 12th March 2008 10:40 | Maybe Not Today |
Really enjoyed reading this, thanks.
One small note;
'Harry had already started on a plate of bangers, eggs, and scones when the trio joined him at the Gryffindor table.'
Scones are not a British breakfast dish and no one calls sausages bangers any more. |
| Wednesday 12th March 2008 10:47 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much! I think it probably depends on where you are in the UK. My experience living there was that people still used bangers, and we did actually eat scones for breakfast! There is a lot of variation in the UK, so it's plausible. Thanks for your comments! |
aharkins
Tuesday 11th March 2008 22:20 | Maybe Not Today |
| Any story that draws out your emotions is a good one. This one made me cry and smile at the same time so I guess it was really good. Thanks for sharing your work. You're quite talented. |
| Wednesday 12th March 2008 06:57 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much! This was the first thing I read this morning, and it made me really happy. I try to put a lot of real emotion into my stories, so I'm glad that you felt the goal was achieved. |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 11th March 2008 21:10 | Maybe Not Today |
| aww ww ww!!! I lvoed this story!! |
| Wednesday 12th March 2008 06:56 | Maybe Not Today (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it. |
