J-TGriffy
Sunday 19th February 2012 18:37 | Disciplinary Cards |
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Cirquedufreakfan
Monday 24th January 2011 17:56 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Honestley I think McGonagall was worried about Ginny. |
Cirquedufreakfan
Monday 24th January 2011 17:52 | Disciplinary Cards |
| AW! So Cute! You're right Fred does like attention.+ well...Forever! |
littl_nita23
Tuesday 21st December 2010 23:19 | Disciplinary Cards |
| u deserve a cup of , and a new i really liked it |
clare
Saturday 21st November 2009 22:32 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Oh you just have to love McGonagall in this. Great characterisation there and another wonderful story. |
| Tuesday 1st January 2002 04:30 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
DaniKay
Wednesday 6th May 2009 18:59 | Disciplinary Cards |
Aww ^_^
I was kind of worried there at the beginning haha. We all know Gin can be as pig-headed and as stubborn as Harry.
I'm glad they worked it out though
Amazing!!
Cheers,
DaniKay
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| Friday 8th May 2009 23:11 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
We all know Gin can be as pig-headed and as stubborn as Harry.
Indeed she can, they are pretty well suited eh? |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 20th September 2008 21:32 | Disciplinary Cards |
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| Sunday 21st September 2008 05:32 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
blue_and_white_witch
Sunday 31st August 2008 07:34 | Disciplinary Cards |
| I really like this fic, especially the idea of Ginny's card and the fact that the Death Eaters knew about Harry and Ginny. |
| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 05:27 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
DukeBrymin
Tuesday 8th April 2008 15:00 | Disciplinary Cards |
Well, rather angsty--not my favorite style, but good resolution. I have two quibbles, though:
1) Ginny seems to really make an about-face rather quickly--all-of-a-sudden she\'s happy. If she\'s been burying her emotions and working herself to death for so long, I would think it would have taken a little more conversation before she could break through that persona.
2) They hadn\'t kissed yet? No kisses after the Final Battle? I find that somewhat jarring.
Anyway, good writing, keep it up. |
| Friday 4th July 2008 11:44 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| Everyone has their own version of what happened after the battle and some how I just see that first kiss taking a while to come. |
ariesgirl
Monday 7th April 2008 21:10 | Disciplinary Cards |
| I loved this , and wouldn't change a word. Great piece of work |
| Friday 4th July 2008 11:43 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you, sorry for the latereply |
acciowand
Monday 7th April 2008 07:04 | Disciplinary Cards |
| I just love everything you write! The subtleties you use to convey the emotions of the characters are brillant. |
| Monday 7th April 2008 13:58 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
pyromain
Sunday 6th April 2008 14:07 | Disciplinary Cards |
| a lovelly little story, which I trully enjoyed. thanks to you and your beta's. |
| Sunday 6th April 2008 15:42 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| cheers |
kriti
Sunday 6th April 2008 09:58 | Disciplinary Cards |
| That was very well written.....thank you for this fabulous peice. Looking forward to more of your work! |
| Sunday 6th April 2008 15:42 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
the_critic
Saturday 5th April 2008 08:14 | Disciplinary Cards |
lol. you always gotta got Mcgonagall in there...
very sweet! |
| Sunday 6th April 2008 04:49 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| yeah Mcgonagall is great and you know she was not too angry with them. |
Steven Carnell
Saturday 5th April 2008 01:38 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Good story, very well written. |
| Sunday 6th April 2008 04:48 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
tknott
Friday 4th April 2008 19:44 | Disciplinary Cards |
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| Sunday 6th April 2008 04:47 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
majolie
Friday 4th April 2008 18:34 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Nice. I really like that you called out the fact that there was no way the Death Eaters would not know she had been Harry's girlfriend. I love the books, and Harry, but I always thought that was an illogical leap to think that by breaking up with her she would be protected. |
| Sunday 6th April 2008 04:47 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
I really like that you called out the fact that there was no way the Death Eaters would not know she had been Harry's girlfriend.
I know, without too much thought going into it, I can think of at least half a dozen death eater children and Harry and Ginny hardly made a secret of their relationship. |
sillygillie
Friday 4th April 2008 12:28 | Disciplinary Cards |
Really cute story!! Aw I'm glad Ginny's alright now!
RESISTANCE : The Burrow, Ottery St Catchpole, England
Do you mean to say Residence there?
And this one:
"Well, Weasley." He was grinning. "I'd have do go with that look in your eyes that shows that you want to jump me."
I'm pretty sure you mean to.
Anywho wonderful story! Very cute and enjoyable! |
| Sunday 6th April 2008 04:44 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
I've pasted those comments onto my beta, thanks for pointing them out, you know what its like when you look at something over and over again you just miss the small things.
Glad you enjoyed the piece. |
lantis222
Friday 4th April 2008 08:24 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Loved it. Absolutely loved it. But then I love everything you write, you really are talented. Great job. I can't wait for more from you! |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:50 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
mlc872
Friday 4th April 2008 08:01 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Another great story! I love how you shows Ginny's hard times at school using the card. I think we forget sometimes how hard it was for Ginny and all those at Hogwarts that year. |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:49 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| cheers, I think your right, since we spent the time with Harry and Ginny had been forced into hiding by Harry's return its easy to overlook her year but the hints are all there. |
krypa dakay
Friday 4th April 2008 06:38 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Awesome story, and I love your writing style. So clear and to the point, with perfect tone for this somber piece. I look forward to reading more from you! |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:45 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
Grandma Kate
Friday 4th April 2008 06:01 | Disciplinary Cards |
Well Done Mate! I went ahead and read your story first because of my strong admiration of your writing, but I promise to go over and read Ladybug's A Whole Minute as soon as I can.
I liked the way Arthur pleaded with Harry for help. He's a great father. |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:45 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
I liked the way Arthur pleaded with Harry for help. He's a great father.
Oh he's the best in the series.
btw, can't wait until you get to Ginny's sixth year in your series. |
Grandma Kate
Friday 4th April 2008 06:01 | Disciplinary Cards |
Well Done Mate! I went ahead and read your story first because of my strong admiration of your writing, but I promise to go over and read Ladybug's A Whole Minute as soon as I can.
I liked the way Arthur pleaded with Harry for help. He's a great father. |
Arnel
Friday 4th April 2008 05:48 | Disciplinary Cards |
I really like this story, but for some reason it leaves me feeling as though there was more to it. I would have liked to see the result of Harry's talk with Ginny developed a little more because you spend so much time developing the problem; the talk with Arthur, the explanation of how the Weasley family is adjusting to Fred's death, and Molly putting her foot down that Ginny was absolutely NOT going to join Harry, Ron and Hermione in searching for the wayward Death Eaters. You did a nice job of showing how Harry resolves his own problem of needing a subject to talk Ginny into opening up a little about her year and the reasons for why she did what she did. I also realize that Ginny makes the effort to talk about Fred, which at least for her and Harry, solves that little problem and starts the healing process for them. Bravo! Maybe what I'm looking for is a sequel to this one in which life around the Burrow isn't quite so gloomy and the family and Harry begin to heal from their hurts.
I give this story for keeping my attention and making me want more than was here! |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:43 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
Wow that was a great bit of feedback, thank you. I'm not writing multi-chaptered pieces at the moment and I rarely write sequals but I won't rule it out here. There is a good chance though I will do a getting things back to normal at The Burrow though. |
brown_eyes
Friday 4th April 2008 04:35 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Another great, really well written story. Keep up the good work and give us something else soon. |
topbabe
Friday 4th April 2008 02:34 | Disciplinary Cards |
wow, i love this, the end mae me shed a tear as it so beautiful. im glad you have followed the wishes of many other by having Harry and Ginny get beck together, also showing how it could have happened in correspondent with the book. your story really flows
Holly x |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:38 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
ladybug
Friday 4th April 2008 00:33 | Disciplinary Cards |
| That's wonderful! I'm so impressed with how you expanded the idea of those student records and made it the catalyst for healing ... I really like the idea that Harry and Ginny had trouble returning immediately to an easy relationship after the turmoil and tragedy of that year. You've done a great job portraying their difficulties and the also the reconciliation - which was so sweet and funny. Congratulations! |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:35 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.
I really like the idea that Harry and Ginny had trouble returning immediately to an easy relationship after the turmoil and tragedy of that year.
Well they haven't had the easiest year, there's a lot to get through. |
rdprice29
Thursday 3rd April 2008 21:33 | Disciplinary Cards |
*love*
This was wonderful. Harry and Ginny are just so meant to be, no matter what obstacles are placed in their way, and this highlights it perfectly.
GREAT JOB! |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:32 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
Harry and Ginny are just so meant to be
cause they are |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 3rd April 2008 21:18 | Disciplinary Cards |
aww!!! i loved this story!!!!
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| Friday 4th April 2008 10:30 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
brios
Thursday 3rd April 2008 21:05 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Lovely, lovely story. |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:29 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| cheers |
mary-v
Thursday 3rd April 2008 20:49 | Disciplinary Cards |
| Loved this! Lovely work! |
| Friday 4th April 2008 10:29 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
