G3ntle1
Thursday 26th August 2010 09:37 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| This is cool, I like this premise. |
| Sunday 24th October 2010 21:24 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Sorry for the late reply, I just saw your review. I hope you like the rest of the story. |
kash2210
Sunday 21st September 2008 10:42 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| A different, but interesting take on how it panned out after the battle, and from what I've read so far looks to be very promising! |
| Monday 22nd September 2008 12:32 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| thanks! |
TangoCharlie
Thursday 4th September 2008 20:37 | Lost in Transfiguration |
Hmmm... looks like this is going to be an interesting one! You've certainly got my attention...
I like the way you've mixed the present setting with flashbacks. Good way to develop the story, and it's done well enough to not be confusing.
I'm looking forward to reading more : ) |
| Tuesday 9th September 2008 15:24 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Thanks Tango. I hope you've kept reading and are liking the story. It's almost finished with the last chapter going up soon.
I appreciate the thoughts! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 6th July 2008 18:01 | Lost in Transfiguration |
this sounds like its gonna be a good read
lots of openers and cliffhangers already!
can twait :d
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PhoenixFeathers
Saturday 7th June 2008 19:59 | Lost in Transfiguration |
Great chapter, i really liked it.
harry living as a muggle? who'd've thunk....? |
PhoenixFeathers
Saturday 7th June 2008 19:59 | Lost in Transfiguration |
Great chapter, i really liked it.
harry living as a muggle? who'd've thunk....?
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chiantiqueen
Sunday 1st June 2008 13:59 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| Wow I've read one chapter and I'm hooked! On to the next! |
cckeimig
Friday 23rd May 2008 08:40 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| This is an amazing first chapter for a first fic. I'm off to read more! |
| Friday 23rd May 2008 20:47 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Thank you. I was worried that folks wouldn't like this story, since it's my first. The encouragement has been wonderful.
It's already motivating me to start thinking of new plot lines and stories |
lantis222
Wednesday 21st May 2008 11:17 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| very good. I can't wait to see where you take us. I hope you update soon! |
vt
Tuesday 20th May 2008 17:03 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| awesome story! I can't wait toread your next update! |
| Friday 23rd May 2008 20:45 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| Thanks for your review! Chapter 2 is up, and 3 and 4 are coming to a website near you soon. |
vt
Tuesday 20th May 2008 16:44 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| awesome story! I can't wait toread your next update! |
aroy924
Monday 19th May 2008 23:10 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| great first chapter! I already hate Ginny, lol. |
| Friday 23rd May 2008 20:44 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
I can understand that. Ginny doesn't come out in the best light, especially in these early chapters.
Don't hate her too much though, I need her in the end to make it H/G |
abrightertomorrow
Friday 16th May 2008 20:13 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| This sounds like its going to be a very good story I can't wait to read more of it. |
| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:45 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| I'm really glad..... |
abrightertomorrow
Friday 16th May 2008 20:12 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| This sounds like its going to be a very good story I can't wait to read more of it. |
| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:46 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
.....that you enjoyed the story.
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majolie
Friday 16th May 2008 16:08 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| very nice beginning ... you've caught my interest. it's all a bit too angsty for my usual taste, but i think i'm going to have to keep reading |
| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:31 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
hhmmm, to angsty eh? Thats too bad, because I'm afraid it just gets worse before it gets better.
I also think you to keep reading. Hold on a sec.
*gets out pocket watch*
You're eyes are getting sleepy.....you must keep reading....
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Firefairy
Thursday 15th May 2008 17:30 | Lost in Transfiguration |
WOW! I havent read a story like this in a long time! I love this, especially that Taylor is giving testing the potion! I cant wait to see what harry does when he finds out! Thanks so much and update soon please!
P.S The last story I read that was kinda like this was The Test of Time on Sugarquill, but I can tell this is going to be completely different and better! Great Job! |
| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:29 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Thanks for the review. When Harry finds out, well let's just say its gonna be explosive.
I actually go the idea for this story after reading legobeans great great work.
Thanks lego, you're fantastic! |
aimless`
Thursday 15th May 2008 16:58 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| don't think they would behave this way. Anyway nice story, at least the start of it. |
| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:26 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
I respect that. It took some thinking to write this story because everyone in Cannon is so supportive of Harry.
I guess the only thing I can say is that grief and stress make people do strange things, even people that are normally rock solid.
Please keep reading, and perhaps I'll even change your mind!
thanks for the review, it is appreciated |
semphora
Thursday 15th May 2008 16:27 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| this looks great so far. i'm really looking foreward to this story. |
The_Critic
Thursday 15th May 2008 15:03 | Lost in Transfiguration |
Ow. Poor Guys, Poor Harry. I Don't suppose I can fly into the story and play God to torture everyone a bit more before making it all right? wait, you are going to make it right arent you/
10/10
Critic |
| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:21 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
no no no. No God flying in to torture folks, thats my job, muwhahahahahah
I suppose I could make it right eventually....maybe.... |
RIPHedwig
Thursday 15th May 2008 13:26 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| That was really good and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!! Looks like we're in the same boat - My first fic, Lopsided, was posted a few days ago and Moments has just gone up! Arnel's my beta, too, lol! B |
| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:19 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Hey! Ya Arnel is great! By the way, I read Lopsided and I really enjoyed it. I'm not good at reviewing, I'll try to go better.
Right now I'm on my way to read Moments! Cheers. |
lisaq294
Thursday 15th May 2008 10:29 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| great beginning of a good story, I look forward to your next post. |
Rocky235
Thursday 15th May 2008 10:03 | Lost in Transfiguration |
I enjoyed that first chapter.
"Ron, Hermione, Ginny, George, Arthur! Breakfast is ready."
In all stories, not just yours, Molly, or whoever always gets the names right. My wife and I can't even get the cat's names right. I remember Mom couldn't get us kids names right. She'd always be doing two or three things and then try and call us. Anyway, your line brought back pleasent memories. |
| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:16 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. I agree with you, but even in JK's work Molly gets it right most of the time (with the occasional Fred and George Bit). I'm glad that it helped bring back good memories though. When I'm reading other work, I love stories that can connect with me. Thanks again. |
saulick
Thursday 15th May 2008 09:56 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| This is very good. Post updates often, please!! |
| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:10 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| Thank you. Expect to see another chapter up this week. |
Freckles
Wednesday 14th May 2008 23:04 | Lost in Transfiguration |
Good start! I'm looking forward to seeing more thoughts from all the characters--their reasons for their actions, and the actions themselves--soon!
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| Saturday 17th May 2008 09:05 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Wow! I go away on a business trip for a few days and look at the reviews! Thanks every one!
I hope I can explain their actions better in later chapters. I'll update soon, I promise. Thanks for reviewing! |
ejh0904
Wednesday 14th May 2008 16:06 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| I like the flashback way that you're telling your story. I can't actually imagine Ron, Hermione, and Ginny being so cruel to Harry after what he's been through, even if they were grief-stricken, but it's an interesting plot bunny. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. |
| Wednesday 14th May 2008 16:36 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
The first chapter does jump around a bit. Later on it will settle down into more of a story mode.
I try to explain a little more about what happened and why in later chapters, but it is a little bit of a stretch, I know.
Thank you for reading, its appreciated! |
aharkins
Wednesday 14th May 2008 15:39 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| You're off to a good start. I'm looking forward reading the rest of the story. |
| Wednesday 14th May 2008 16:35 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm very excited to posting a story here. Thanks for reading and I'll update soon. |
