kash2210
Sunday 21st September 2008 11:02 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| The story's going well, nice emotion in it, I especially loved 'Her soul was calling out with all her might', line, it brought tears to me eyes. Keep it going! |
| Monday 22nd September 2008 12:34 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| , sometimes I'm bit of a cheese ball. I'm glad you like the line. |
kash2210
Sunday 21st September 2008 11:02 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| The story's going well, nice emotion in it, I especially loved 'Her soul was calling out with all her might', line, it brought tears to me eyes. Keep it going! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 6th July 2008 18:07 | Lost in Transfiguration |
huh... so i guess harry took that potion and no longer remembers anything... so i wonder what will happen when ginny confronts harry...
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critmo
Sunday 6th July 2008 05:08 | Lost in Transfiguration |
Molly had her wand out, and her eyes were wild as she vaulted a chair and skidded into the room.
Interesting story, but somebody said it was a bit ooc. I have to agree so far. Really, can you imagine Molly vaulting a chair? |
| Friday 8th August 2008 19:32 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
um...maybe a really in shape Molly
Ok ok, you got me! |
PhoenixFeathers
Thursday 12th June 2008 15:30 | Lost in Transfiguration |
um, wats a pm?
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PhoenixFeathers
Saturday 7th June 2008 20:11 | Lost in Transfiguration |
nice cliffy..
i noticed that you seem to write "fist" instead of "first" a lot. Maybe you need a new beta... ( if you decide so, i'd be happy to help...) But seriously though, awsome chapter... |
| Thursday 12th June 2008 15:25 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
After reading your comment I went back and counted out of curiosity and I found 2 instances of fist in the story and 1 in the author notes.
I'm actually very surprised there isn't more of those, you should see my word docs BEFORE my beta's clean them up. *shivers*
In terms of spelling and catching things like that more eyes can't hurt. If you are still interested please send me a PM and we can discuss any help you might want to offer.
Thanks again. |
chiantiqueen
Sunday 1st June 2008 14:10 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| The plot thickens! Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
majolie
Monday 26th May 2008 19:34 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| Another intriguing chapter. I'm still trying to get over my initial resistance to the basic premise which is biasing me somewhat against the whole story. However, your ability to write cliff-hangers ensures I will come back next chapter to have my curiosity satisfied. I am very worried about Harry's wiped out memories and the fact that he's not going to react properly upon seeing Ginny again. |
| Thursday 12th June 2008 15:21 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Sorry it took so long to respond. I'm back now and ready to go!
I get that alot on the basic premise, and in all truthfulness I don't really disagree.
I guess I'll just have to keep writing cliff-hangers. If any one complains about the all the cliffs coming up, I'll just direct them to you ok?
In all seriousness, thank you for your comments and continued reading.
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sportsjunkee24
Friday 23rd May 2008 16:47 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| This is AMAZING!! It is my favorite fanfic. Please update soon. You are such a good writer. |
| Friday 23rd May 2008 20:41 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Ahhhh, thanks so much. You're making me blush! I appreciate the encouragement, it really makes it fun to write with you folks around.
thanks for the reviews, everyone! |
cckeimig
Friday 23rd May 2008 08:48 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| Another great chapter! |
| Friday 23rd May 2008 20:39 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Expect an update soon. |
deej
Wednesday 21st May 2008 22:50 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| You have me intrigued. I would like to see a little more of what happened at the memorial. Good job so far. |
| Friday 23rd May 2008 20:38 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
I'll add some more detail in later chapters. However there are some things left intentionally blank for the reader to fill in for themselves. I can never write a scene as imaginative as something that many of you can come up with on your own.
Thanks for the review! |
gwynevere101
Wednesday 21st May 2008 21:39 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| awesome! this is really unique! |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 22:46 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Thank you. Reviews like this are greatly appreciated. I hope you like the next chapter as well.
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aimless`
Wednesday 21st May 2008 18:26 | Lost in Transfiguration |
Please keep reading, and perhaps I'll even change your mind!
thanks for the review, it is appreciated
Well, I won;t change my mind that it's a bit OOC story, but I quite enjoy the way you do it, so of course I will keep reading .
btw have my ideas how this cliffy can realize, would be interesting to see |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 22:45 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Thanks, I'm glad you're going to stick with it!
This one could go alot of different ways, but I'm holding the fireworks back for a later chapter.
Thanks for your input. |
ejh0904
Wednesday 21st May 2008 15:33 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| Evil cliffie! Gotta know what happens next! Please update soon! |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 22:43 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
muwhahahahaha
I've said it before, sometimes I'm just down right evil |
aroy924
Wednesday 21st May 2008 13:39 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| AW come on!!!!! you can't just let it stop there!!! good chapter though |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 22:42 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| I know, I really should have made this chapter longer and put more into it. Sorry for the cliff. Next chapter will be longer and have more to think about. |
lisaq294
Wednesday 21st May 2008 13:06 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| oh this is getting very good thanks for the update |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 22:40 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the thumbs up! Look for more soon. |
RIPHedwig
Wednesday 21st May 2008 10:18 | Lost in Transfiguration |
OhMyGod! Quick update!
I was thinking about half way through the chapter (with the present for Teddy), 'sob... this is heartbreakingly sad!' then Harry! mmm yay! B |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 22:39 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
You know she had to find him sooner or later. I decided that it had to be sooner
Thanks for the review. |
RIPHedwig
Wednesday 21st May 2008 10:18 | Lost in Transfiguration |
OhMyGod! Quick update!
I was thinking about half way through the chapter (with the present for Teddy), 'sob... this is heartbreakingly sad!' then Harry! mmm yay! B |
The_Critic
Wednesday 21st May 2008 09:51 | Lost in Transfiguration |
Ahh. Poor, Poor ginny. She'll be a bit upset when she realizes he doesn't know who she is. LOL. you have to update soon. I swear, I will stalk you to where you live, and sit as a zombie in front of your house screaming UPDATE. Or, you just could update. Noww...11/10. no, no.
13/10. Now update. Please! this is my favorite fanfic ever, and thats somthing because untill recently it was NoFP.
Pweaty Pwease Update?
:p
Critic |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 22:38 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
wow, thanks for the review!
No pressure of anything huh? I promise I will try and live up to your expectations. Just remember this is my first story!
Seriously, thank you for such a nice review. I'm beaming! |
saulick
Wednesday 21st May 2008 07:48 | Lost in Transfiguration |
OK, there better be another post soon...
Excellent story by the way. |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 08:59 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
No worries. Expect an update soon, mid next week at the LATEST. It will also be about twice as long. Sorry for the short chapters, but I'm just getting started.
Thanks for the comments and the thumbs up!
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potter345
Wednesday 21st May 2008 05:55 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| this is a great story |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 08:57 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Well I CERTAINLY think so. My friends tell me that I might not be entirely objective though...
Thanks! |
Firefairy
Wednesday 21st May 2008 05:25 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| Why why did you have to leave it on a clifffhanger like this? Great chapter by the way,please update soon! I can't wait to see if Harry remembers Ginny or not, or if that is even harry! I bet he doesnt remember but I really want him to! Thanks for such a great chapter! Update soon please! |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 08:56 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
I know, I know! It's childish, and probably a bit immature but I just can't resist a cliffie. It makes me happy
I'll update soon, scout's honor.
Thanks for the comments, it's greatly appreciated. |
KateB
Wednesday 21st May 2008 01:01 | Lost in Transfiguration |
Ack! Please don't leave us hanging for too long! I was a little dubious at first, as I couldn't imagine *all* the Weasley's turning on Harry, but you have drawn me in and now I can't wait to see how this develops.
I'm agog for more.
KateB |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 08:53 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
I'll try not to leave it for too long. Look for an update by the end of this week or the middle of next at the latest.
To be honest, I was the same way when I started *writing* this story. After chapter 1 I almost stopped because it seemed dubious to me as well. However, I think I can make it be realistic at the end.
Thank you for your review. |
Patches
Wednesday 21st May 2008 00:44 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| This is a gret story. It is hard to think that Harry would try to forget his friends and family but it is also understandable that if he felt really rejected he would run away. It seems as though even though he has a girl for a roommate she isn't a love interest. I think deep inside he still loves Ginny. Thank goodness he sent Teddy a Christmas present. Now Ginny has Harry right in front of her. I look forward to how you handle this. After taking the forgetfulness potion it is going to be a tough ride for Ginny to get through to Harry again. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
| Wednesday 21st May 2008 08:51 | Lost in Transfiguration (Author Response) |
Thank you for the nice comments. You are right about his roommate. She is NOT a love interest, nor will she be. This story is about Harry and Ginny
Leave it to Harry, even emotionally hurt and with little memory left, he still manages to take care of those he feels responsible for and send a present to little Teddy.
Thanks again for the review |
Patches
Wednesday 21st May 2008 00:44 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| This is a gret story. It is hard to think that Harry would try to forget his friends and family but it is also understandable that if he felt really rejected he would run away. It seems as though even though he has a girl for a roommate she isn't a love interest. I think deep inside he still loves Ginny. Thank goodness he sent Teddy a Christmas present. Now Ginny has Harry right in front of her. I look forward to how you handle this. After taking the forgetfulness potion it is going to be a tough ride for Ginny to get through to Harry again. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
Patches
Wednesday 21st May 2008 00:43 | Lost in Transfiguration |
| This is a gret story. It is hard to think that Harry would try to forget his friends and family but it is also understandable that if he felt really rejected he would run away. It seems as though even though he has a girl for a roommate she isn't a love interest. I think deep inside he still loves Ginny. Thank goodness he sent Teddy a Christmas present. Now Ginny has Harry right in front of her. I look forward to how you handle this. After taking the forgetfulness potion it is going to be a tough ride for Ginny to get through to Harry again. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
