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DaniKay Monday 16th February 2009 14:55 | Socks | nice ^_^ loved it. I liked it both ways, I can definately see why you'd have only dialoge, and it's a great change of pace. but I must say, with the discriptions of whats going on is great too.
either way, great story, moving on! (to the other stories of yours)
can't wait for more of Echoes!
DaniKay
| majolie Monday 21st July 2008 20:08 | Socks | Yeah - I like the other version better ... | RIPHedwig Wednesday 28th May 2008 13:08 | Socks | Hahaha! That was really good, really enjoyed it! I've definately read 'Socks' before, but a long time ago - this was nice! | VegHindu101 Tuesday 27th May 2008 08:18 | Socks | You know, I like this version just as much. I can't decide which I like better though. When do you think Shoes will be out? | VegHindu101 Tuesday 27th May 2008 08:16 | Socks | You know, I like this version just as much. I can't decide which I like better though. When do you think Shoes will be out? | critmo Monday 26th May 2008 13:19 | Socks | Nice! | Grandma Kate Monday 26th May 2008 11:01 | Socks | Ah, now I am torn. I still think I prefer the all dialogue one but since I am one of the people who believe that Harry's 'Monster" actually grew out of the "Chocolate in the Library" scquence, how can I not love the following?
Harry had to blink at the abrupt change of topic. It made no sense to him, but there was something in her face, in her voice, that reminded him of a bit of chocolate in the library last Easter. And he is almost there when=
Ginny’s smile was downright scary, and when it was combined with the voice and determination from that chocolate caper, he wondered with some trepidation over what strange tale was unfolding now. | aharkins Sunday 25th May 2008 23:22 | Socks | I like both versions and my imagination seems to be working quite well with both of them. A nice bit of fluff. Thanks for writing. I'm looking forward to the next one shot. | KateB Sunday 25th May 2008 22:51 | Socks | This was delightful! I look forward to "Shoes"! Thanks for the revised version. Ginny makes me laugh. |
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