kash2210
Tuesday 23rd September 2008 10:47 | Rebuilding Life |
Boy that was a tough chapter to get thorugh with all the tears!!!
Well written and emotionally filled!! |
Emeralds and Rubies
Monday 18th August 2008 10:35 | Rebuilding Life |
| Oh! So sad! Very good chapter, though. |
| Monday 18th August 2008 17:59 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
majolie
Saturday 19th July 2008 20:41 | Rebuilding Life |
So angsty! I am not a bit angst fan, but I am sure there would be very little fluff in the days immediately following the battle ... and you write the angst pretty well. You manage to maintain a bit of humor and hope thoughout which keeps the reader from giving up in despair.
Noe I'm all out of chapters and I DO feel full of despair about that - please post soon! |
| Saturday 19th July 2008 23:30 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Oh never fear the angst does not stay ... well it does ... but it doesn't ... it comes and goes let's put it that way! lol New chapters soon |
Crumplehornedkiwi
Tuesday 8th July 2008 04:01 | Rebuilding Life |
oh
you made me cry, that was written so well. Grief can hit you at such strange times and be completely debilitating you portrayed that beautifully
i will watch for more |
| Tuesday 8th July 2008 08:30 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| I once began to cry over my sister at the sign on the back of a bus ... grief sure does hit you at strange times. |
tragic
Thursday 3rd July 2008 23:09 | Rebuilding Life |
| Perfect reaction for harry when the enormity of it all hits him. Of course the only person that can bring him back would be ginny just like in HBP when died |
| Saturday 5th July 2008 03:29 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Poor DOn't worry is there ... |
jeanne
Saturday 28th June 2008 06:32 | Rebuilding Life |
| Why have you switched to another site instead of working on your other site with the same fic. As others have done this same thing, I rather wondered. |
| Saturday 28th June 2008 06:37 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| I haven't 'switched'. As many people do, I have added my story to this site at the suggestion of other authors because a story will get wider readership if it is in more than one location. Eventually I imagine the two fics will be at the same point. I haven't stopped working on it. |
Grandma Kate
Friday 27th June 2008 05:30 | Rebuilding Life |
You can pack a lot of imagery in a short chapter. It was easy to picture. I liked-
Without really thinking about it, he let the small hands take the baby and then he let them encircle him in a hug
You then closed with the "flowery scent". |
| Friday 27th June 2008 06:12 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| loves ... |
Patches
Thursday 26th June 2008 23:28 | Rebuilding Life |
| This is a sad time for Harry. Seeing Teddy made it real to Harry that he has lost Remus and Tonks in addition to Fred and other friends that he will miss in the years ahead. This is deffinitely a time for him to grieve. Thank Goodness Ginny is there for him. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of these little stories. p |
| Friday 27th June 2008 05:04 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Oh I would't call this story little anymore ... there will be more than 35 chapters of goodness I hope you enjoy every one of 'em |
CarolinaGirl
Thursday 26th June 2008 14:42 | Rebuilding Life |
| great story so far...I especially love the ending of this chapter...lovely imagery and very realistic in Harry's reactions. |
| Friday 27th June 2008 05:00 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much. I like to be realistic. |
deej
Thursday 26th June 2008 13:32 | Rebuilding Life |
| I really like this story so far. Keep up the good work. I will add it to my update list. |
| Friday 27th June 2008 04:59 | Rebuilding Life (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! |
