littlemissgloom
Sunday 20th July 2008 10:17 | One Fine Day |
| aawww |
ibelieveintruelove
Friday 18th July 2008 00:33 | One Fine Day |
| Oh that was so cute!! Very sweet and the perfect amount of fluff! I loved watching Dudley get jealous lol |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 30th October 2007 21:11 | One Fine Day |
lol I love this! If i had been ginny, I probably would have kissed harry just to get back at dudley :p
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Felix Felicis
Saturday 16th September 2006 20:38 | One Fine Day |
I know I've read this story before. It's been a while and I'm surprised I didn't leave a review before. So here goes...
This is one of the best H/G stories I've ever read. I only wish it could have gone longer because I didn't want it to end. To start with, the idea of Ginny being set up by her family and friends to go collect Harry is great. Her insecurities as far as he's concerned are significant and her thoughts betray that through your writing. Then to have Dudley look at her that way was funny! At least he behaves like a typical teenage boy. The mental image of the three of them sitting and waiting for Harry to get his things was so funny. Ginny's so cleverly written there.
On Harry's side, your giving us his thoughts prior to Ginny's arrival helps fill out the story and lets us know how he really feels. It was quite enjoyable picturing their awkwardness on first seeing each other. Then when he gets dressed while she keeps her eyes closed, loved that. I can see him doing that, making her wait while he absorbs just how beautiful she is. It was sweet getting to see her through Harry's eyes.
The end was great. A few good kisses, a smack in the face to Dudley and smiles as they start their new life together. What wonderful fluff! Like I said, I know I've read this before and loved it just as much the first time, but now I'm telling you so. It was great! |
Uzamaki-girl
Saturday 9th September 2006 18:26 | One Fine Day |
^.^
Awesomely sweet. |
Novera
Thursday 29th June 2006 22:30 | One Fine Day |
| wow just wow |
Ron Obsessed
Sunday 29th January 2006 14:34 | One Fine Day |
| I love it! |
cwarbeck
Tuesday 17th January 2006 09:45 | One Fine Day |
| loved it. |
IHateSnakes
Tuesday 30th August 2005 08:20 | One Fine Day |
| Cute! Poor Dudley... |
Jake
Wednesday 6th July 2005 10:25 | One Fine Day |
Aww, that was sweet. I Can't believe I just used "aww" to start a
sentence. Word of this never gets out, ok? I was reading a post on the
perch and clicked the link as I somehow managed to miss the week when
this fic was fic of the week. It was fun, keep up the good work.
-Jake
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jeanne
Sunday 12th June 2005 09:43 | One Fine Day |
| I even like the reviews at the end., DITTO!!DITTO!! to every one except 1,and I won,t say which 1. I hate the Dursleys when they are being disgusting. |
jeanne
Sunday 12th June 2005 09:39 | One Fine Day |
| For an H/G fanatic,this was brilliant.To see Dud.shown up was good. I truly enjoyed it. |
Lady Ginny Potter
Friday 27th May 2005 13:04 | One Fine Day |
| That is brilliant...I mean just so perfect. I'm in a really sappy mood and you totally made me smile. My friend had already said that I was glowing today because of my smile and now I'm going to be teased non stop during lunch. Thanks! |
Fuzzy
Thursday 26th May 2005 18:15 | One Fine Day |
Beautiful! A great and wonderful story. |
Delfino
Thursday 26th May 2005 14:24 | One Fine Day |
Ooooohh! this was PERFECT!! thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this!!! I loved it!!!! It was so cute! I liked how you kept switching the point of view, from to . the final kiss was perfect!!!!!! Oh, well, I'm rambling and I sound like a lunatic.....once agian, thanx for writing this!!
Delfino |
Astrid
Thursday 26th May 2005 13:28 | One Fine Day |
| *happy sigh* There's a reason this is the story of the week. |
levotatingT
Wednesday 25th May 2005 18:32 | One Fine Day |
That was so cute. I loved it!!! I don't really see Harry as that straight forward, but it totally worked with that story. I see why it is story of the week.
Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
MrRobertsIII
Wednesday 25th May 2005 09:14 | One Fine Day |
| cute and sweet. I found it funny that Dudley could overcome his aversion to magic with the right incentive. |
critmo
Wednesday 25th May 2005 01:56 | One Fine Day |
| I've read this before, but obviously forgot to leave a review. Sorry for that. - The story is good, nicely written, however, the Dursleys are slightly too polite for me. I think that was part of my inspiration for "Cracking the Shell", to be read here on PS. So thank you for that! If you can spare the time to read it, tell me what you think. |
arwen_undomiel021
Monday 23rd May 2005 15:58 | One Fine Day |
| poor dudley. funny/good story.
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Nimbirosa
Monday 23rd May 2005 11:31 | One Fine Day |
| *grins like a halfwit* Pretty.
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martita
Monday 23rd May 2005 03:48 | One Fine Day |
| sigh! I've read this before, and it's just - wow. It doesn't matter that it's Pre-OotP, because it's so sweet and I like how you do Sulking!Dudley, and Harry kissing Ginny in front of him, and - wow. this is good. |
jellyjulie
Monday 23rd May 2005 02:41 | One Fine Day |
| Absolutely gorgeous. I'm a hopeless romantic and stories as beautiful as these make me week in the knees. Great work, and congratulations on getting Story of the Week- you earned it! |
weasleysrcool
Sunday 16th January 2005 12:51 | One Fine Day |
| I loved it. What a wonderful little fic. Keep on writing these, it was really good. |
