kash2210
Thursday 25th September 2008 13:12 | No Place Like Home |
| I tell you what, this s developing into a really great story, ok this is only the second chapter but the writing is mature, filled with the right level of emotion, angst & humour!! Keep it up! |
ngayonatkailanman
Monday 14th July 2008 11:44 | No Place Like Home |
| Another quote worthy of a very good second chapter. Any more? |
| Monday 14th July 2008 20:18 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like the quotes. I submitted the next two chapters a couple days ago. They should be up soon. |
tknott
Saturday 12th July 2008 12:08 | No Place Like Home |
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| Saturday 12th July 2008 13:52 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| Thank you. |
jakjakattk
Friday 11th July 2008 17:45 | No Place Like Home |
Your doing good, but could you make your chapter longer. I need more to read
LOL |
| Friday 11th July 2008 20:59 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| Lol, sorry, except for one or two chapters most of them are this length. Glad that it makes you want to have more to read, though. I'll see what I can do. |
kori24601
Friday 11th July 2008 10:08 | No Place Like Home |
| Very nice story! I love thinking about what happend immpeidately after then end of the war. I'm anxious to see where you're going with this. |
| Friday 11th July 2008 12:06 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I should have another chapter coming up soon, probably in the next week or so. |
Talin
Friday 11th July 2008 08:39 | No Place Like Home |
This seems like a good story
Is Fred dead in this story I noticed George wasn't his normal self |
| Friday 11th July 2008 12:06 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| Yes, Fred is dead in this story. It takes place immediately after the end of the war. |
ejh0904
Thursday 10th July 2008 19:32 | No Place Like Home |
| I love the title and the quote; they are specifically appropriate to Harry's world and individual plight. I love how Ginny is gluing herself to Harry by not letting him out of her sight. I'm also enjoying the fact that Harry is jumpy right now and could be for a while - people who have been through a war-like situation like Harry has often suffer from such nervous behaviourisms - this is very accurate. More than once I have read about Harry being back to normal as soon as he wakes up, and while I sure he's relieved, there have to be some repercussions. I'm enjoying the angst level of this so far - especially Harry's and George's reactions. Very well done. Can't wait for the next update! |
| Thursday 10th July 2008 19:55 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoy the title and quote. When I wrote my first draft of the story, I left the chapters untitled at first and then went back to find quotes or other things that fit with the chapters for titles. As for Harry and Ginny, I figured Ginny was going to be very hesitant to leave Harry's side after being apart from him for a year and after a year of constant dueling, running, and fear Harry would continue to be jumpy as if he's still expecting someone to hurt him. Thanks for your thoughtful review; I like it when people give me something specific that they liked or that I should work on, instead of "Great job" or some other vague comment. |
Melindaleo
Thursday 10th July 2008 18:10 | No Place Like Home |
| You're off to a good start. Poor Harry's got some PTSD to work through, but I think that seems very reasonable. I liked the unified front he and Ginny instictively used against Bill. I also think having others who need to be cared for is the best way to help Molly get through the loss of Fred. |
| Thursday 10th July 2008 19:50 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| Well, Molly seems like the kind of person who'll try to take care of everyone else before she takes care of herself. Someone is going to get through to her, though. Thanks for your review. |
