majolie
Sunday 28th December 2008 19:28 | The More Things Change |
| Such a perceptive story - definitely not a problem I would have foreseen, but it makes a lot of sense. |
| Sunday 28th December 2008 23:45 | The More Things Change (Author Response) |
| I'm happy to hear you thought this was plausible. Thanks so much for reading. |
Sheepie_101
Thursday 14th August 2008 21:35 | The More Things Change |
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AriesGirl
Sunday 10th August 2008 11:38 | The More Things Change |
| loved the end the most. just couldnt stop laughing! |
| Sunday 10th August 2008 13:52 | The More Things Change (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you thought it was funny! Thanks so much for your review. |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 9th August 2008 20:17 | The More Things Change |
nice story
i cant really see lily smoking though... although i suppose that she might want to rebel some...
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| Saturday 9th August 2008 21:12 | The More Things Change (Author Response) |
Thanks -- glad you liked it!
I don't see Lily as a smoker, either (that's why she couldn't help coughing -- she's not experienced). I see her as finding a creative way to connect with Sirius and show him she's not his enemy! |
RIPHedwig
Saturday 9th August 2008 11:50 | The More Things Change |
Well written, good story!
Like how Sirius smokes, very... Sirius.
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| Saturday 9th August 2008 21:08 | The More Things Change (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm happy to hear you liked it. |
jovelyn_mark
Friday 8th August 2008 12:09 | The More Things Change |
| I absolutely love the story. Yey for Sirius haha. Now it's pretty obvious that I utterly love Sirius Black. |
| Friday 8th August 2008 12:41 | The More Things Change (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad you liked Sirius here. |
Talin
Friday 8th August 2008 10:50 | The More Things Change |
I thnk I am going to like this chapter
I hope Sirius doesn't feel left out to much longer that would be sad!
They smoke WOW thats cool nothing wrong with that |
| Friday 8th August 2008 11:50 | The More Things Change (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the comments! Smoking really isn't very healthy, of course, but I think it's in character for Sirius to do some stupid, risky things... |
Kelleypen
Friday 8th August 2008 07:26 | The More Things Change |
| This story held such promise: I love the Marauders and you really write well . . . but smoking turns me off. Sorry. |
| Friday 8th August 2008 08:43 | The More Things Change (Author Response) |
I appreciate your taking the time to let me know you read the story, and thank you for your feedback.
Just for the record, smoking turns me off, too! I have never smoked a single cigarette, and I expect I never will. But this is a work of fiction; I thought it was in character for Sirius, as a rebellious teenager in the 1970s, to smoke. And I thought it would show Lily's determination to connect with him if she participated briefly in something she didn't like and that was, moreover, against the rules. (Actually, lying, spying for Voldemort, and betraying your best friends turns me off rather more than smoking, but I've written a story about Peter doing all that, too... *smile*)
Thanks again for your comments. |
