capt_everything
Friday 5th June 2015 10:06 | Master of Life |
| Will you be finishing any of these stories? |
hermione&ginny
Sunday 21st August 2011 19:06 | Master of Life |
| Great chapter! Your characters are spot on! |
harry_ginnyfan
Saturday 1st November 2008 19:34 | Master of Life |
Great beginning to the story, keep on writing!
Cheers!
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TangoCharlie
Sunday 28th September 2008 20:11 | Master of Life |
At first I thought this chapter was moving a bit too quickly and only brushing over some fairly important events. Having finished it, though, I quite like the fast pacing. It kind of gives an almost-montage feel to it. I liked the combination of some serious issues (such as funerals, a trial etc), but also a bit of fluff.
I really like the moments between Harry and Ginny. It's good to see that they've still got some issues to deal with and can't just skip traight to happily ever after. A nice touch of realism!
I love the language you've used, and the finer details you've dropped in - it makes a big difference to the overall quality.
I'm looking forward to reading on... |
kash2210
Tuesday 23rd September 2008 13:55 | Master of Life |
A nice solid start to what hopefully will become a great story!
I though you handled the mix of drama, angst and humour very well!! |
Prongs739
Thursday 21st August 2008 12:07 | Master of Life |
| At least Malfoy is given a fair trial. |
The Boss
Monday 18th August 2008 03:58 | Master of Life |
Great start - looking forward to a great story
Keep the chapters coming
The Boss |
toskin
Thursday 14th August 2008 19:38 | Master of Life |
| Nice story. Interesting twist, Harry being taken by a mob to make a speech. I would have like to have seen the speech, just to see how he got out of it. I like that you included Malfoy's trial as well. I don't think that's something that I've seen covered in other fanfics. |
GhostWriter
Wednesday 13th August 2008 22:08 | Master of Life |
This is a great beginning!
Hooray! + = happiness!
I liked the ending to the chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing this story unfold.
Cheers....
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ngayonatkailanman
Monday 11th August 2008 18:21 | Master of Life |
| Very interesting. |
TaylorErvick
Monday 11th August 2008 17:03 | Master of Life |
| Great, Very Good! |
summer daisy
Monday 11th August 2008 16:51 | Master of Life |
I enjoyed the Bargain immensely, so was pleased to receive an email informing me you had written some more fanfic.
This is going well so far -- I enjoy your style!
This is the first ffiction I've read for a while actually. |
