kash2210 Thursday 25th September 2008 13:23 | No Place Like Home |
I said I hoped that this would become a great story, well it IS a great story.
This was another great chapter, it was so...simple but the way you portrayed the depth of feeling they had for each other was..well great!!
I do like chapters like this, I read a few fanfics and the ones where a character is espanded or explored in more detail are generally the best ones!! |
ngayonatkailanman Friday 22nd August 2008 04:58 | No Place Like Home |
This is most profound. It encourages the reader not only to read but also to ponder and feel. |
Friday 22nd August 2008 18:02 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
Thanks! |
jakjakattk Tuesday 19th August 2008 16:25 | No Place Like Home |
you did a great job on this chapter. I wish that you had the rest to post but I understand that writing takes a bit of time to produce something worthy of reading. keep up the good work and post again soon, |
Tuesday 19th August 2008 16:28 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
Thanks! Don't worry; you shouldn't have to wait too long until the next update. |
Unexpected Angel Tuesday 19th August 2008 13:25 | No Place Like Home |
So far I really enjoyed your work. I like that you show different points, you show how Harry is feeling, and Ginny. You also give us a peek into Hermione's "normal" life. I can't wait to read the rest of this story. |
Tuesday 19th August 2008 16:25 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
Thanks! I really like examining different point of views. It's amazing how different people react to the same situation. And I've always wondered about Hermione's "normal" life; I hope I've come up with a satisfactory theory. Please keep reading |
Patches Tuesday 19th August 2008 11:08 | No Place Like Home |
This is a good story. I look forward to more. Thanks for writing. p |
Tuesday 19th August 2008 16:26 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
Thank you! |
Melindaleo Tuesday 19th August 2008 06:08 | No Place Like Home |
I'm enjoying the realistic portrayal of how events are having an effect on Harry. The jumpiness and inability to sleep seems very appropriate. |
Tuesday 19th August 2008 16:28 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
Thanks; I'm glad that his behavior seems to fit how it should be. I don't believe that he could just go back to being "normal" after everything he'd been through. Please keep reading. |
debbie1407 Monday 18th August 2008 12:25 | No Place Like Home |
I'm really loving this story, you've got a lovely style. Not too schmaltzy or cheesy, Definitely in keeping with JKR! can't wait to read the rest |
Monday 18th August 2008 13:03 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
Thanks! |