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Friday 21st October 2011 11:09 | No Place Like Home |
Thus, four teenagers with little cooking experience ended up making breakfast.
Harry has lots of experience making breakfast. He did it for the Dursleys for all those years. |
kash2210
Thursday 25th September 2008 14:40 | No Place Like Home |
I got a feeling that this story will not be long enough for me. I'm looking at something at least the length of DH?
I love your writing style, the way in which you portray all the relevant emotions required for each scene. I also like the flashbacks and how you effortlessly seem to incorporate them not only in the chapter but also ensure that they are written in such a way that they woudn't have looked out of place in the books, where the scene would have taken place!
The scene with Narcissa & Andromeda was a nice touch!
Once again well done! |
jakjakattk
Friday 22nd August 2008 16:13 | No Place Like Home |
Im so glad that you have some Teddy in your story. Keep up the hard work and post agin soon.
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| Friday 22nd August 2008 18:06 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
ngayonatkailanman
Friday 22nd August 2008 05:08 | No Place Like Home |
| A very dramatic yet dignified funeral. Well written. |
| Friday 22nd August 2008 18:06 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
Melindaleo
Thursday 21st August 2008 14:10 | No Place Like Home |
| I don't know - I'm on Andromeda's side in this one. What Narcissa did for Harry is beside the point to her sister. They weren't close, Narcissa was part of the group that took Andromeda's family from her. In time, they might indeed work out their differences, but I think appearing at the funeral while Andromeda grieves is in extremely poor taste. I'm glad Andromeda lets her have it - I would too - plus it makes for wonderful drama. |
| Thursday 21st August 2008 16:34 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| Narcissa is trying to make up for her past misdeeds, but doesn't know how to go around doing it. Thus, ugly scenes like this occur. Andromeda's thoughts on this will show up later in the story, so keep reading. |
Patches
Thursday 21st August 2008 11:23 | No Place Like Home |
| This is an excellent chapter. I'm glad Hermione found out about Harry's bruise from the Avada Kedavra. At least she was able to help some. I don't know why Harry is concealing it from Ginny. Probably because he doesn't want her to worry about him with everything else that is going on. That was nice of him to thank Narcissa. I feel sorry for Andromeda. Harry is right she has lost almost everyone she loves. Thanks for writing. I like the way you are handling this "after" the battle story. p |
| Thursday 21st August 2008 16:31 | No Place Like Home (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
