Felix Felicis
Wednesday 1st October 2008 19:08 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts |
| Ah, Christmas. There's a nice, comfortable, familiar feeling about this chapter. I especially loved that you threw in just enough of Harry and Ginny to keep us all interested. Without Percy I think that Molly would be a bit sad on Christmas day, but overall, I think that she really would enjoy having so many people around, even Fleur! She can't help but enjoy having a house full and you've shown her just like that. |
| Thursday 2nd October 2008 00:04 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
Hey Ryan! Thanks for taking time to review. I enjoyed writing the December chapters because it was fun to fill in the missing moments.
I just reread After the End because I wanted to try and get the Bill and Fleur interactions fine tuned. Molly has to work out how to be a mother-in-law. |
lantis222
Thursday 25th September 2008 13:04 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts |
| My favorite part was Harry and Ginny flirting over the icing. You painted such a vivid picture in my mind. I loved it! I can also just see Ron sulking off because he's feeling a little left out. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Great job! |
| Thursday 25th September 2008 15:10 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
| I'm glad that you liked this chapter. JKR gives us many foreshadowings of Ginny and Harry's romance. When I saw the picture of them hugging at the Burrow I knew what to write. Next chapter is fun, too. |
Domain
Sunday 21st September 2008 09:46 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts |
These days I don't have time to read HP fanfics. But for your stories I will always find time.
They're really interesting and nice to read!
Congrats!
Dome 36 |
| Sunday 21st September 2008 11:02 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
¡Muchas Gracias! I try and keep each of the segments short enough that they are a fast read. A few of them run over 3000 words but not many.
I hope you enjoy Molly's POV in the next chapter when Percy comes to visit Christmas Day. |
brown_eyes
Sunday 21st September 2008 07:43 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts |
Really good chapter but it begs the question are Molly and Arthur going to give Harry and Ginny 'the talk'? |
| Sunday 21st September 2008 10:57 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
| You got it! Actually, Molly and Ginny do have a talk on Boxing Day but you will just have to look for it next week. (very evil grin) |
Kathryn
Sunday 21st September 2008 05:55 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts |
| Great Harry Ginny moments - keep up the good work. |
| Sunday 21st September 2008 10:56 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
Hey Kathryn! May you have a safe journey and a warm welcome.
Thanks for reviewing. I will do quite a bit of foreshadowing between now and May. It's nice to be sure that everything will work out. |
Trelawney2213
Saturday 20th September 2008 21:02 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts |
| I love how you've expanded on all of Fleur's irritating little quirks and how Molly is keeping such a tight lid on her irritation. In a couple of chapters you've picked up subtle little things like Fleur not getting a jumper and now we know why. Can't wait to see how you get Molly to react to Fleur after Bill is attacked. I know you'll find something subtle and go to town with it. ;-) |
| Saturday 20th September 2008 22:15 | Ginny's Fifth Year at Hogwarts (Author Response) |
| Thanks for picking up on the conflicting emotions Molly has about Bill's choice of a life partner. Maybe because it was the first Fan Fic I read, I am still influenced by Arabella and Zsenya's Fleur in After the End. I see her as a strong and very sensual character. |
