sarah_90
Monday 14th May 2012 08:21 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| oh my this was sooo cute! |
J-TGriffy
Friday 23rd March 2012 15:04 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
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groezy
Saturday 19th February 2011 21:25 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| no?hehheh... |
Jeanne
Sunday 12th September 2010 09:01 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Still recieving reviews? Know that this is a really brilliant fic. It is so Harry who finally has his dream come true. The dream of not only his own but an extended family as well. I loved it. Many thanks, Jeanne |
winslow
Thursday 13th May 2010 21:44 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| What wonderful parents you have envisioned them to be! Thanks for writing. |
potters_love_redheads
Saturday 13th February 2010 15:27 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
Aww I love it! Hahaha it was sooo cute and very romantic. And it's wonderful that Lily was born on Halloween, because now this day can be a happy one for Harry instead of a sad one. Wonderful story!
P.S. Ron's last line is perfect lol |
bcollins
Sunday 1st November 2009 22:24 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
AWWWWWW how sweeet.
Thanks for this story, it's very touching |
heyy
Sunday 4th October 2009 11:02 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
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ThePhoenixLament
Monday 27th July 2009 13:38 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| brilliant |
Najam
Friday 12th June 2009 06:47 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| that was so good ....thanks a lot...I have always liked your writing style. |
| Friday 12th June 2009 06:53 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Oh hai! Thank you v. much!!! I am glad you enjoyed! |
lolipop
Monday 20th April 2009 03:31 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
"...and I'm not allowed to teach you how to fly."
Giggle! This whole story is so sweet. Thanks!! |
| Friday 12th June 2009 06:54 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like the fic! It was a joy to write! |
DukeBrymin
Friday 12th December 2008 09:57 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
I really love this story--very sweet, very in character.
My one nit is the part where Harry is heading back to the burrow--starts out: "he didn't know how they got back to the Burrow." Then is mentioned things he _does_ remember, then it says: Nor did Harry recall how... It seems somewhat confused to me. The "Nor" in that statement seems to indicate a continuing series of things he doesn't remember, yet it comes right after two things he _does_ remember.
Anyway, great story! |
| Friday 12th June 2009 06:56 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I am easily confused ... *sheepish* But I'm glad you liked teh fic! |
Hihavaniceda
Monday 1st December 2008 05:11 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
Hi, I needed a Harry Potter quick fix and I just clicked ramdomly at a story that was completed and not to long ..... and I clicked on yours ......well .. I do hope that you have written other stories as I am now going to check you out .. as Ron would say .. that was bl00dy brillent !
Thank you ! |
| Monday 1st December 2008 05:16 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I have written a lot of other things however they are not archived here. I am glad you enjoyed this snippet of my writing |
Hihavaniceda
Monday 1st December 2008 05:11 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
Hi, I needed a Harry Potter quick fix and I just clicked ramdomly at a story that was completed and not to long ..... and I clicked on yours ......well .. I do hope that you have written other stories as I am now going to check you out .. as Ron would say .. that was bl00dy brillent !
Thank you ! |
ebonyrose28
Saturday 22nd November 2008 21:49 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Wow that was a great story and i really enjoyed it. |
| Thursday 27th November 2008 19:18 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I'm glad. I enjoyed writing it. |
majolie
Saturday 1st November 2008 17:21 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| This was just lovely. Thank you for writing it. |
| Tuesday 4th November 2008 03:34 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed it - and you're welcome! |
RhiannonMei
Wednesday 15th October 2008 19:56 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
Awww Kezza!!!!!! I loved it so much!!! It was so sweet how Harry knew Ginny was in labor, and I grinned viciously when he was angry at the Minister. This is so great! I think I especially love the last line, when Ron said he wasn't allowed to teach Lily how to fly, because it seemed so like him. Fantastic story, Kez .
*tacklehugglespounces*
~ June
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| Thursday 16th October 2008 03:39 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Thanks, dear! It seems the last line is indeed a winner! |
Miri
Wednesday 15th October 2008 18:05 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
Congratulations Kezza! I was hesitating between this one and another one but voted for this one because it gave Harry what he's always wanted..a family. But I will say I didn't recognize it as yours.
I loved the interaction between Harry and all the children in the scene where he's reading to them...it was so full of quiet emotion. And so was Ron's interaction with the children--that last line was a classic and made me laugh.
The interaction with Harry and Ginny was great too. Thought she was going to put one over on him did she? And George really should have known better.
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Kathryn
Wednesday 15th October 2008 14:58 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| I've been waiting to review this piece for obvious reasons, but I knew despite my very poor form at reviewing I wanted to write on for this. It is a really good fic that includes so many different emotions and has the characters so well written as well as some very witty lines. But I think my favourite part to it is that Harry and Ginny finally get that good Halloween, I mean what with everything that has happened to Harry on that day and it being the anniversary of Ginny first opening the chamber of secrets, it was hardly a happy holiday. Hopefully that will change now. A very worthy winner. |
| Thursday 16th October 2008 08:34 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I think it will change now and it will be a very happy day indeed! Poor harry's had a bad run on Hallowe'en ... not any more! Thanks for the review and congrats back atcha! |
parakletos
Wednesday 15th October 2008 13:34 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
I should stop by more often, then I might have spotted this :-)
Excellent as ever. |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 17:21 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Ah ... but would you have recognised it as mine? (Probably lol) I do strive for excellence .. I'm sure that's someone's school motto ... |
The Doctor
Saturday 11th October 2008 08:09 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Sweet. A nice change of pace from the laugh-a-second fics which make up the lions share of the fics. Well done |
| Thursday 16th October 2008 08:35 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
ladybug
Friday 10th October 2008 23:00 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Such a sweet and enjoyable story - plenty of humour and not too treacly - in fact, just right! I can't tell you my favourite parts as I'd be repeating the whole story back at you! Lovely, thank you for sharing it with us. |
| Thursday 16th October 2008 08:36 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I enjoyed sharing it - thanks for enjoying it with me! |
lety77_7
Thursday 9th October 2008 03:00 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Okay! This one is my favorite of all the stories written for this challenge. It's got my vote. The birth of Harry and Ginny's little girl gives him a beautiful memory of Halloween at last. |
| Thursday 16th October 2008 08:37 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Yay for happy memories! |
harry_ginnyfan
Tuesday 7th October 2008 20:36 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
Very cute! Great job!!
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| Thursday 16th October 2008 08:38 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
drummersgirl
Monday 6th October 2008 09:06 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| This was so cute!!! Love the OBHWF!! |
ksingh
Saturday 4th October 2008 23:10 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Nicely done. I even teared up at the naming of Lily. |
aurora luminis
Saturday 4th October 2008 05:59 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| I was torn between this piece and "The Final Five" and in the end I did vote for the other. You have captured the things the heart holds dearest and added a good dose of homespun humor. It was a little hard for me to accept a Harry that was so aggressive from the first word with the Minister. Somehow it didn't come across as being courteous Harry. The last line is a true gem. Anyone would be proud of writing a closing line like that. |
Dad
Friday 3rd October 2008 12:25 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Good, original stuff. Great last line. |
twinsmom
Thursday 2nd October 2008 23:23 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| That was awesome! I love the picture you painted with words! And you made Halloween a happy time, too! |
sillygillie
Wednesday 1st October 2008 23:00 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Brilliant!! |
lilystar
Wednesday 1st October 2008 15:07 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| I love this story. I like how you focus on Harry and the children in the beginning and then end it centered on Ron with baby Lily. Excellent! |
jeanne
Wednesday 1st October 2008 08:09 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Truly an excellent read. I loved the picture of a loving Harry at the beginning, and Ron at the end. Well done. |
Arnel
Tuesday 30th September 2008 23:15 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
What a terrific story! I can just see Harry and Ron surrounded by their children, first four, then five. I love how, instead of going straight to Molly, Harry took Lily to his best mate.
I also must say I loved how you captured Harry's irritation with the Minister and his ceremony. It seems some things just never change.
Thanks for sharing this little moment surrounding Lily's birth and how it possibly comes about. |
| Thursday 16th October 2008 08:40 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I like to think of Harry and Ron still having that special bond for years and years ... and I also feel Harry will always be irritated at the Minister Thanks for reading and sharing with me! |
rich.sanidad
Tuesday 30th September 2008 22:04 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| A very sweet story. Love the ending. Also loved the line: "She means it this time." LOL Thanks for the great read and good luck with the competition! |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 30th September 2008 19:38 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
aww!!! this was really cute!
i can imagine ginny going throught that pain and not saying anything just so harry can go to that ceremony... and then they could be left in peace..
i love teh ending to |
lantis222
Tuesday 30th September 2008 13:50 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| That was beautiful. I loved it. |
| Thursday 16th October 2008 08:28 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
juliet
Tuesday 30th September 2008 06:05 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| what a beautiful fic - thankyou so much for sharing this with us |
| Thursday 16th October 2008 04:02 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Thank you for reading it! |
Melindaleo
Tuesday 30th September 2008 06:03 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| I really enjoyed this, and I loved giving Harry a reason to celebrate Halloween rather than mourn. I was very touched that it was Ron he went to first, too. That seemed very fitting. |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 18:20 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
Kezza bounces! I squee every time you review my stuff, you know ... I am such a shameless fangirl. It KILLED me not to be able to tell you it was me!
Please know that Jen2 and I flitetd about on Skype for at least an hour singing "Melinda likes it, Melinda likes it!"
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ngayonatkailanman
Tuesday 30th September 2008 02:20 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| LOL. Simpering politicians and a hero who knows where his priorities lie! Brilliant! |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 18:21 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Yay for Harry the hero! I think the current Minister took lessons from Fudge ... |
crumplehornedkiwi
Tuesday 30th September 2008 01:48 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
I loved the last line!
This was lovely, typical oblivious then observant Harry, stubborn Ginny, and all the Weasleys gathering round their own.
Well done |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 18:18 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I loved the last line too! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
fuzzybubbles26
Monday 29th September 2008 20:18 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
“They’re freaky like that,” he said, “soul mate stuff.” Loved that.
Great story. Good luck in the challenge! |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 18:07 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Thanks |
elvenlaughter
Monday 29th September 2008 19:13 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Absolutely gorgeous. Excellent language, plot, characterization, everything fell so nicely into place. And the last line? Brilliance. |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 18:06 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I love the last line too! |
blah whatever
Monday 29th September 2008 16:03 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| sweet |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 18:05 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
Grandma Kate
Monday 29th September 2008 13:19 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| This was both sweet and realistic- a tough combination to bring off. Well done. |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 18:04 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| I like to take on the tough jobs Thanks! |
blue_and_white_witch
Monday 29th September 2008 12:57 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| sweet story |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 17:57 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
Zeta_one
Monday 29th September 2008 11:33 | An Unceremonious Beginning |
| Great story! Simply beautiful. |
| Wednesday 15th October 2008 17:52 | An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
