koolsmg
Tuesday 28th October 2008 08:50 | Making It Right |
hey, just wanted to say that i'm really enjoying this story. interesting question how the group will turn out without all their important memories and adventures.
cant wait for an update |
nundu
Sunday 26th October 2008 19:43 | Making It Right |
As with all your stories, I am enjoying your story.
I only have one quibble. It is not the sword itself that destroys a horcrux. It is the fact that when Harry killed the basalisk the venom imbued its poison (strength) into the sword, then allowing the sword to destroy horcruxes. |
summer daisy
Sunday 26th October 2008 11:53 | Making It Right |
You write so well, and this story is indeed original.
I just feel a little uneasy reading it, because Harry shouldn't have his adventures without his friends! It's wrong and I'm sure that it'll change them badly.
Will Ginny be the same without her horrific experience?
It just concerns me |
summer daisy
Sunday 26th October 2008 11:52 | Making It Right |
You write so well, and this story is indeed original.
I just feel a little uneasy reading it, because Harry shouldn't have his adventures without his friends! It's wrong and I'm sure that it'll change them badly.
Will Ginny be the same without her horrific experience?
It just concerns me |
twinsmom
Saturday 25th October 2008 23:15 | Making It Right |
Well, I'm not sure Harry should have told his friends everything he did. But, we'll see how it plays out now. Poor Ginny is just so overwhelmed. And this is a new angle. Most stories with this theme, just have Harry on his own trying to change things. I'm really interested in how you do this.
Love that Dumbledore knew about the brooms. Great idea having him get new brooms for all the teams.
~christy |
enchantedgurls
Saturday 25th October 2008 17:55 | Making It Right |
| Still intrigued as to where you'll go with this. Update soon. |
aharkins
Saturday 25th October 2008 11:45 | Making It Right |
| So far, I'm really liking your retelling of canon and I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you for writing and for sharing your work. |
kash2210
Saturday 25th October 2008 11:32 | Making It Right |
| He briefly wondered if her many adventures in his future had given her a better respect for her peers and if missing most of those would make him desire her less as a friend - That to me is a VERY interesting quandry, as I believe that may also apply to Ron as will he be the same person he was without having faced the dangers in the chamber? |
Zeta_One
Saturday 25th October 2008 08:50 | Making It Right |
I wonder if not having the sword is going to come back up? What about Dobby? I can't wait for the answers.
I enjoy the quicker pace of this story than some of the other back in time ones as well. |
ihatesnakes
Saturday 25th October 2008 07:12 | Making It Right |
| Good reading! |
LeprechaunJV
Friday 24th October 2008 22:36 | Making It Right |
| Excellent chapter......... |
LeprechaunJV
Friday 24th October 2008 22:34 | Making It Right |
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