capt_everything
Thursday 14th February 2013 22:32 | Making It Right |
| I like this so far. It is super!Harry, but not omnipotent either. When is the rest coming? We must know! |
lk001@comcast.net
Sunday 23rd December 2012 00:57 | Making It Right |
| I really hope you deside to continue this story. It is well written and intriguing. I would love to see more and follow it if I could. |
Steven Carnell
Sunday 22nd March 2009 03:44 | Making It Right |
| Brilliant, great story. well written and plotted and a lovely fresh approach to the re-do fic. Excellent job. 9/10. |
the_critic
Thursday 13th November 2008 18:51 | Making It Right |
Harry's a carrier of dragon pox, isn't he?
Oh great... |
The Boss
Monday 10th November 2008 17:37 | Making It Right |
Great chapter yet again!
I like the variation of the Chamber especially how you used the Rooster.
However I think that the last paragraph leaves a wide gap to work with for your story. looking forward as always to the next chapter.
The Boss |
enchantedgurls
Thursday 30th October 2008 09:49 | Making It Right |
| I loved what Harry said to Snape. I love that Sirius is free. I am worried about Pettigrew escaping early, but it's also good because Nagini will be made into a horcrux sooner which means they could destroy her sooner. I am also worried about this Dragon Pox thing. That basically sums it all up. Sorry for the botched review, but I'm writing this in a hurry. Anyway, simply fantastic. I absolutely love this! |
enchantedgurls
Thursday 30th October 2008 09:48 | Making It Right |
| I loved what Harry said to Snape. I love that Sirius is free. I am worried about Pettigrew escaping early, but it's also good because Nagini will be made into a horcrux sooner which means they could destroy her sooner. I am also worried about this Dragon Pox thing. That basically sums it all up. Sorry for the botched review, but I'm writing this in a hurry. Anyway, simply fantastic. I absolutely love this! |
Natalie-
Thursday 30th October 2008 06:20 | Making It Right |
| I've never read a time travel fic where he tells people how things are and it's more interesting the way you did it. I like it look forward to an update. |
pixie7
Wednesday 29th October 2008 23:47 | Making It Right |
great story so far, i 'm loving the new things in this storyline. its gr8 that Sirius is free much earlier, but i worry about the sudden dragon pox outbreak.
looking forward to the nxt chapter |
deej
Wednesday 29th October 2008 21:12 | Making It Right |
| Nice story so far. I am looking forward to the next chapter. |
LeprechaunJV
Wednesday 29th October 2008 19:09 | Making It Right |
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kash2210
Wednesday 29th October 2008 17:16 | Making It Right |
| Un oh Harry, what HAS your meddling done!!! I like that Sirius is free, it'll be nice for them to get to know each other alot better!! |
twinsmom
Wednesday 29th October 2008 13:42 | Making It Right |
| I love all the new things you are throwing at us. |
Jacynthe
Wednesday 29th October 2008 13:06 | Making It Right |
Yes indeed. The time lines split. the plot thickens! The game is afoot!!
I'm liking this a lot. |
Zeta_one
Wednesday 29th October 2008 11:22 | Making It Right |
| The time line is now starting to split I wonder what going to happen? Great story so far. |
Zeta_one
Wednesday 29th October 2008 11:22 | Making It Right |
| The time line is now starting to split I wonder what going to happen? Great story so far. |
Hollu
Wednesday 29th October 2008 09:54 | Making It Right |
I was so excited to get an email saying you had updated!!! I'm really enjoying this story so far. Keep up the good work!
Hollu |
