Praeceps09
Friday 17th July 2009 00:03 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Waiting for the next chapter. You got me spoiled with a good read. Overall I would rate it at an 8. Chapters 2-4 were a little slow on the uptake for my tastes but the overall story is great. Great use of the second prophecy. Not many authors have done a good multiple prophecy fic, but yours is one. |
vt
Tuesday 16th June 2009 19:42 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Awesome story! I hope you are still working on it because I would love to see how it turns out. |
peggie
Sunday 3rd May 2009 17:10 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Am really enjoying this story. Thanks. I like your use of dialogue; it is so similar to the way J.K. uses it to convey the storyline. |
bakshiakshay
Thursday 23rd April 2009 23:57 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Great Chapter!
Loved the way the events shaped out after in Dumbledore's office after the chamber! |
| Friday 24th April 2009 11:32 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake (Author Response) |
thanks for the review
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memasuzy
Thursday 23rd April 2009 18:45 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
This was definately worth waiting for. Excellent chapter in a very interesting story! I can't wait to see what having Ginny & Luna in the same year as the rest of the group will bring!
I really enjoy the "conversations" between older/younger Harry!
The only thing I feel REALLY badly about is Harry having to relive his summers at the Dursley's - wasn't once bad enough? |
DaniKay
Tuesday 21st April 2009 21:57 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
*lets out a low whistle* W-o-w. A-Freaking-Mazing!
I'm completely in love with this story so far! It's just brilliantly written, the ideas are genius, and.. and.. it's amazing! (did I mention WOW?!)
Haha, I cannot wait to see what you'll throw at us avid readers next.
So, so conclude, your story is AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT AND GENIUS! You are an AMAZING writer, and my hat's off to you. (BOW TO THE GREATNESS!!! ...sorry, was that outloud?)
*grins* cheers on a fantastic piece of work-so far ^_^
DaniKay
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| Tuesday 21st April 2009 23:14 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake (Author Response) |
| I hope i can continue to impress all my readers. |
Clayva
Tuesday 21st April 2009 13:01 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| This story is comming together nicely and this chapter in particular helped to form an interesting word picture. You have nicely manufactured a story in which THE WILLING SUSPENSION OF DISPELIEF premise works so that the mind can truly empathize with Harry and his situation. Thank you for the lovely update and I shall be looking forward eagerly for the next installment. |
| Tuesday 21st April 2009 19:13 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake (Author Response) |
| thank you |
Dad
Tuesday 21st April 2009 09:06 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Plenty action in this chapter. Looking forward to more. |
LeprechaunJV
Tuesday 21st April 2009 08:45 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
I read it again just to go thru the details. I say excellent again and update soon. This chapter has set the stage for some upcoming interesting events.... whatever they may be.
Do hope Sirius gets free soon and also is proven innocent publically.
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| Tuesday 21st April 2009 19:17 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake (Author Response) |
I read it again just to go thru the details. I say excellent again and update soon. This chapter has set the stage for some upcoming interesting events.... whatever they may be.
Do hope Sirius gets free soon and also is proven innocent publically.
I'm glad you read it again. always nice to hear that people enjoy reading this story I have worked so hard on.
as to sirius, he will be freeded by the end of 4th year if all goes to plan. if not, we will see what happens. |
Patches
Tuesday 21st April 2009 02:19 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| This is such a good story. I am so glad that Harry protected more people and still managed to save Ginny in the Chamber of Secrets. I really am glad that Harry told Dumbledore and Arthur Weasley about the horcruxes. That will get the ball rolling even sooner. I'm glad Harry worked it out that Ginny will be in his year at school. I am also glad that Luna will be included. Thanks so much for a great addition to your story. I look forward to more of this story soon. p |
LeprechaunJV
Monday 20th April 2009 21:29 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
Excellent..... |
Zeta_One
Monday 20th April 2009 21:23 | Dumbledore's Biggest Mistake |
| Excellent chapter! Just enough fore shadowing to want more. Thanks for sharing. |
