ionik27
Tuesday 6th April 2010 11:53 | The Knowing |
| a nice story to read after a particularly hard day... it's like balm for the heart packed into words that first make the air shift and storms gather in the eye of one's mind and then give one the cover of a lovers embrace to soothe the cold. |
| Tuesday 6th April 2010 15:43 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
How poetic! I thought that you might enjoy this one, too. I'm glad you found the time to give it a look.
Take care, and thank you for the wonderful review! |
moralitas
Saturday 15th August 2009 07:08 | The Knowing |
| ahh, a lovely story. romantic and not too fluffy. a good short story. 9/10 |
| Saturday 15th August 2009 07:26 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. |
ksingh
Monday 22nd June 2009 23:00 | The Knowing |
| Wow! Sexy and sultry, Your descriptive language was amazing. I was definitely drawn in. I loved the way the heat, the air, and the storm mimicked their turbulent need. Really good read. |
| Tuesday 23rd June 2009 07:04 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm so glad that it drew you in and that you enjoyed the descriptions. My original intent was that the weather elements would reflect the emotional elements, so I'm glad that you 'got' that. Thanks for reading! |
Guenivere
Tuesday 16th June 2009 12:09 | The Knowing |
| That's so sweet! I loved it! It quite nearly made me cry! |
| Tuesday 16th June 2009 12:51 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. I'm sorry that I almost made you cry--that was not my intent, promise! Thanks for reading it, though, and letting me know that you liked it. |
DaniKay
Saturday 6th June 2009 11:46 | The Knowing |
Aww ^_^
Amazing
DaniKay
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| Monday 8th June 2009 05:45 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. |
The Boss
Monday 1st June 2009 02:57 | The Knowing |
Great story - love the discription of the air - really helps to set the mood of the story (well thats my view anyhow)
The Boss |
| Monday 1st June 2009 08:38 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Thank you. The weather was really in direct correlation to what was going on in their relationship, so I'm glad that you felt it set the mood appropriately. Thank you so much for reading! |
honourary_weasley
Sunday 31st May 2009 00:52 | The Knowing |
forever!
Very sweet. I'm not a fan of a third person narrative in present tense, but your idea was a good one... and I'm pretty sure that after the life he's had, Harry will never forget, misplace, or put his wand down for one single second.
Nice job! |
| Monday 1st June 2009 08:35 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, even though the narrative style is not your favorite. Thanks for reading! |
hp4-sauce
Saturday 30th May 2009 16:26 | The Knowing |
| This is lovely and exceptionally well written. |
| Saturday 30th May 2009 16:36 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. |
Ocean Dream
Saturday 30th May 2009 11:30 | The Knowing |
| I loved how you captured and depicted the storm! A lovely story, well done. |
| Saturday 30th May 2009 16:35 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
Thank you! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it ao much. The storm was key, and it felt very real when writing it...I'm glad that you approved of it.
Thanks so much for reading, and for letting me know what you thought of it. |
aharkins
Thursday 28th May 2009 12:02 | The Knowing |
This is a very sweet, touching reconnection. I love the way you paint pictures with words. Thank you for sharing.
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| Thursday 28th May 2009 13:50 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| May I just say that I love the visual of 'paint pictures with words'? That in and of itself is quite wonderful, and makes me all happy inside. I'm glad you enjoyed the word-pictures, and that they captured your imagination. That is all any author hopes for in the end. Thank you! |
Dad
Thursday 28th May 2009 10:05 | The Knowing |
| Not a story thick with adventure, but a happy one Easy read. |
| Thursday 28th May 2009 13:26 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| No, I suppose it isn't an adventure story--more of a reconciliation of sorts--but I'm glad you thought it was happy and easy to read. Thanks for taking the time to read it! |
ngayonatkailanman
Thursday 28th May 2009 04:44 | The Knowing |
| Ahhh! Bless. How morantic. You have been reading too many Wuthering Heights! LOL. |
| Thursday 28th May 2009 06:40 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| LOL! If only I had *read* Wuthering Heights--Heathcliff and Catherine were never my cup of tea. However, as long as you think this is romantic, then wonderful--I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. |
monkeyfish
Thursday 28th May 2009 04:20 | The Knowing |
| Great interlude! Love it! |
| Thursday 28th May 2009 06:38 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. |
RIPHedwig
Thursday 28th May 2009 03:49 | The Knowing |
| lush |
| Thursday 28th May 2009 06:36 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I think that's a very appropriate description. Thanks for reading! |
Arnel
Thursday 28th May 2009 02:40 | The Knowing |
| This is the reunion I've been waiting for someone to write! It's tender and hesitant and charged with pent-up emotion all at the same time. I love how Harry leaves his glasses, but not his wand, how the storm seems to illustrate what's happening between them better than a page of dialog. Bravo! Well done! I give your story for making me read it three times in a row just to make sure I haven't missed anything! |
| Thursday 28th May 2009 06:35 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Thank you! You know, I never really wanted to write a reunion story because I felt like so many had already done it--and done it well. But then I just got captured by this idea, and I had to put it to paper. I'm so glad that you found it refreshing. It was a bit more atmospheric than I normally write, but it all has to do with that bewitching time in the middle of the night when guards are down. Anyway. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it (and so much so that you had to read it more than once!). And thank you for writing up such a fantastic review! |
Grandma Kate
Wednesday 27th May 2009 21:06 | The Knowing |
| Ah Meredith! What a lot of 'Motion' you have packed into this sensual, yet soothing story. I loved it more on second reading. |
| Thursday 28th May 2009 06:30 | The Knowing (Author Response) |
| Kate! Thank you. I squeal everytime I see one of your reviews--but then I feel guilty. Shouldn't there be a limit to how often you are allowed to review the same work? lol! Regardless, thank you and more thank yous. You are such a constant. *hugs you* |
