RIPHedwig
Sunday 3rd January 2010 08:36 | Getting It Right |
I like this. It's very original and easy to read.
Can something please happen soon though, or I'm going to enter the story and kick them both. Two of my best friends are dancing around each other atm too, and it's doing my head in haha B |
| Wednesday 13th January 2010 03:56 | Getting It Right (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad you like it - and hopefully chapter three will make you happy (and four when it's up), too! |
Dad
Tuesday 29th December 2009 13:17 | Getting It Right |
| This is very different. The characters are very interesting and it has great potential. Please keep it up. |
| Saturday 2nd January 2010 05:16 | Getting It Right (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad to have caught your interest. |
Arnel
Monday 28th December 2009 00:56 | Getting It Right |
I find it utterly charming that it's Severus who is giving Lucius lessons in winning Narcissa and not the other way round. I really like how you're portraying Narcissa as a person and not someone who is as stuck-up or as snooty as the other Slytherin girls. I really like this story and hope that chapter three will be out soon.
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| Tuesday 29th December 2009 12:08 | Getting It Right (Author Response) |
| I have nothing but effusive thanks for you, and chapter three is definitely on its way. |
kelleypen
Sunday 27th December 2009 19:44 | Getting It Right |
| I think Luc has a point about her hair looking beautiful all wavy. He's just got to learn how to speak Cissy's language. She's not some bimbo who is going to fall for a well crafted pick up line. (Which is one of the things I love about your Cissy. I think she's clever too.) |
| Tuesday 29th December 2009 12:05 | Getting It Right (Author Response) |
| It's one of the things I like about her, too - she'll still fall for him, but she'll do it on her terms. |
