harry/ginnylove
Thursday 11th March 2010 23:14 | Meaning of One, Part Two: Chambers and Secrets |
| Update soon please!!!! I frikin love this story and I really want to know what happens next!!! Can't wait until Sirius shows up, if he does and I hope he does!!! |
TheAndyman777
Sunday 28th February 2010 16:58 | Meaning of One, Part Two: Chambers and Secrets |
| I have greatly enjoyed the story so far. how long before we get another chapter, or the story is finished? |
TheAndyman777
Sunday 31st January 2010 05:02 | Meaning of One, Part Two: Chambers and Secrets |
Hi there Sovran
I have been reading part one for the last few days, and am taking it slowly, its that good. i was glancing through part two and only want toask, when do you hope to finish it and start parts 3-7?
keep up the good work
TheAndyman777 |
aharkins
Wednesday 20th January 2010 13:12 | Meaning of One, Part Two: Chambers and Secrets |
You sure do have a way of tweaking the emotions. Last chapter I was bawling like a baby at the end. Now I'm feeling all bouncy and filled with purpose, ready to go chase spiders with Ginny.
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saulick
Tuesday 19th January 2010 15:51 | Meaning of One, Part Two: Chambers and Secrets |
| Ahh, nice movement forward. Good to see a little interplay with other family members involved. A good, substantive chapter, can't wait for the next one! |
LeprechaunJV
Tuesday 19th January 2010 08:16 | Meaning of One, Part Two: Chambers and Secrets |
However i look forward to a time when harry gets unpetrified. Kills the basilisk, frees dobby and screws one over on luicius malfoy, fudge and umbitch.
Update soon!
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majolie
Monday 18th January 2010 19:42 | Meaning of One, Part Two: Chambers and Secrets |
Yay - another chapter! I was thrilled to see it, though I have to agree with Felix Felicis that it continues to be difficult to read. Just so painful and sad - as hard to slog through as it is for Ginny to slog through her day. But I felt there continued to be positive plot development. I really hope Ginny does ask the twins to help her out. And I feel so bad for the Grangers!
Your writing continues to be very well done - it is obvious you take time to plan each chapter and to ensure excellent construction, grammar, spelling, as well as plot. Which is why I can't whine too much about wanting you to post soon - obviously quality takes time - plus there is such a thing as real life.
Still, can't wait to read more! |
Felix Felicis
Monday 18th January 2010 18:32 | Meaning of One, Part Two: Chambers and Secrets |
I've been reading your story ever since you started it a few years ago. Wonderful story, by the way! I got behind last year and finally had some time to catch up over the last few weeks. Instead of trying pick up again, I just started from the beginning. It's quite a remarkable story, really, read right from the beginning. You do such a good job showing the characters and their unique traits and interactions. I particularly like how you write Luna. You must put a great deal of thought into her dialogue because it always seems to fit her just right.
This chapter is tied with the previous two, I think, for difficulty to read (in a good way). The pain and hopelessness of Ginny's situation truly touches my heart. Your description in this chapter to her mother choked me up. She feels like she'll never be whole again and that there's just no hope. It's too hard. How often we feel like that, and you've captured it brilliantly. I hope that she gets some focus and clarity as she begins to search for the monster!
Thank you for sharing this with us. Please post again as soon as you can! |
colmshan
Monday 18th January 2010 16:32 | Meaning of One, Part Two: Chambers and Secrets |
| I only came across this story last week, and I love it. It's a really good reboot, with very feasible character reactions and interactions. I'm always looking forward to the next update. Thanks for the great story. |
