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Monday 25th January 2010 14:21 | Getting It Right | Haha, that was funny.
This is really good - the way you're letting us see them fall in love in a cute, teenagery way yet with still the prejudice of the Black family and the sheer irritatingness of Lucius. Yet alongside hating him throughout the books, showing him through Narcissa's eyes had made him a teensy tiny bit attractive.
I like this because by the end of the 7th HP I was starting to wonder how and why they were married. But hopefully I'll find out more about them as you continue B | kelleypen
Wednesday 20th January 2010 21:25 | Getting It Right | | The best part of being your beta is getting to read it first . . . I can't wait for the next part. |
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